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积极拼搏锐意进取，全心全意以学生学习为中心选择菁英高中，成就名校梦想
2019学 年第一学期徐汇区学习能力诊断卷
高三英语试卷
(满分140分，考试时间120分钟)201 9.12
IListeningComprehension
SectionA
Dir ections:ndof
eachconversation,versationsandthe< br>ouhearaconversationandthequestionaboutit,readth e
fourpossibleanswersonyourpaper,anddecidewhich oneisthebestanswertothequestionyou
haveheard.ahandbag.
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ibrary.
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udget.
tethelivingroom.
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needstoarriveearlier
andisli kesairtravel.
arnedabigfortune.
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ottotakehiscellphone
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aprogressreportontheproj ect.
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odatsav ing.
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alotofpreciouspictures
ordedtheceremonywithhiscamera
BEncouragehis stafftoworkharder
onversationwithhisemployeespanyisshortofhands.
stoldhimtotakeachance
BIt'snottherighttimetoenter
DShecan'tgetinuntil theinterviewends.
SectionB
Directions:InSect ionB,youwillheartwoshortpassagesandonelongerconver sation,andyou
wsagesandthe
conversationwillb ereadtwice,uheara
question,readthefourpossiblea nswersonyourpaperanddecidewhichonewouldbethebestanswertothequestionyouhaveheard.
Questions11t hrough13arebasedonthefollowingpassage.
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C Whatpeoplewearcanaffecttheirperformance
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Questions14through16arebasedonthefol lowingpassage.
swhospecializeinpreventingnatura ldisasters
trainedtorespondtomedicalemergencies
eroesdevotedtodefendingtheearth
DDoctorsand nurseswhoprovidemedicalservices.
tandpromisingB Busybutsecure
ndstressfulDDemandingbutwell-paid .
gaphysicaltrainingprogram
gacertificateinC PR(心肺复苏术)
singamedicalschooldiploma
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Questions17through20arebased othefollowingconversation
17.A.18-26B.27-35C.36 -45D.46-55
DCycling.
anewpromotioncampaigntanothersurvey
setheproductionofathleticshoes
DHoldmoreathleticcompetitions
roductsmoreap pealing
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oldercu stomers
randVocabulary
SectionA
Direction s:Afterreadingthepassagebelow,fillintheblankstomak ethepassagecoherentand
blankswithagivenword,fil lineachblankwiththeproperformof
hegivenword:for theotherblanks,useonewordthatbestfitseachblank.
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themtoatreasure-alibraryofo ldbookswithtalesmorefascinatingthananytheyhadeverh eard.
(21)______(inspire),thebrothersbegancolle ctingtheirownstories,listeningtothefolktales
ey producedtheirowntreasureabookoffairytalesthatwould charm
millionsinfarawaylandsforgenerations(22)_ _____(come).
ThebrothersGrimm,heirstorycollecti onChildren’sand
lection(23)_____(translate)more
than160languagesuptoowThestonesandtheircharact erscontinuetofeatureinvirtuallyevery
mediatheat re,opera,comicbooks,movies,paintings,rockmusic,adv ertisingandfashion
theirlifetimesthecollection< br>(24)_______(sell)
hadnoillustrations,andscho larlyfootnotestookupalmostasmuchspaceasthetales
(25)______.JacobandWilhelmGrimmbegantheirworkatat ime(26)______Germanyhadbeen
gscholars,
thebr othersGrimmbegantoworkontheairytalecollectioninord ertosavetheendangeredoral
storytellingtradition ofGermany.
(27)______thebrothersimpliedthatthey werejustkeepingrecordsoftales,Wilhelm
forttomak ethem
moreacceptabletochildrenandtheirparents,h estressedthemoralofeachtaleandemphasized
day,pa rentsstillreadthemtotheirchildrenbecausetheyapprov eofthe
lessonsinthestories:keepyourpromises,don ’ttalktostrangers,workhard,obeyyourparents.
Yet (28)______allWilhelmsadditions,themostimportantpar tofthesestorieswasleft
eltreatmentofchildrenand theviolentpunishmentshandedouttothestories
badg uysaretoomuchforsomeparents.
Sowhataccountsfort heirpopularity?Somehavesuggestedthatitis(29)______ _the
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taleswerebornoutofastorytellingtradit ionwithoutboundaries（界限）)
brothers’skillwastotr anslatetheseintoauniversalstyleofwritingthatseemst omirror(30)______
twasthattheGrimms'fairytalesl ived
happilyeverafter.
SectionB
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re'sgrowingconcernaboutthe___31_ __healthrisk
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an1.00 0smallpiecesofplasticperlitrewerefoundintheRiverTa me,
whichwas___33___relatively
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litrewerefound.
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alOceanicandA tmospheric
y___35___fromavarietyofsources,inclu dingcosmetics,clothing,and
industrialprocesses.
Humansareknownto___36___thetinyplasticparticle sthroughfoodandwaterbutthe

ndthatmicroplast icscan___37___harmfulmicrobes(微生物).
Researchbyt heNationalUniversityofSingaporefoundmorethan400typ esofbacteriaon275
cludedinsectsthatcausegastroe nteritis
(肠胃炎)andwound___38___inhumans.
“Mic roplasticsarebeingfound___39___everywherebutwedono tknowtheharmtheycould
bedoing,ChristianDunnatBa ngorUniversity,Wales,'smouselooking
hackin20yea rs'timeandsaying:tobe
anbereducing
our___40_ __onplastic.
IIIReadingComprehension
Section A
Directions:Foreachblankinthefollowingpassaget herearefourwordsorphrasesmarkedA,B.C
eachblankw iththewordorphrasethatbestfitsthecontext.
ragel abour-forceparticipationrateof55-to64-year-oldsin< br>OECD(OrganizationorEconomicCooperationandDevelo pment)countrieshasrisenbyeight
CDreport,outthat theemployment
ofolderworkersis___41___,nbetaken asasignthatour
societyisfinally___42____thevalu eofitsolderemployees.
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youhavetositthr oughendlessmeetingsorcheckemailfrequentlyButworkca nkeepthemind
activeandgivespeoplea___43___stmon thofretirementmayseempleasant,but
___44___lanst olearnlanguagesandtraveltheworldcanquicklylose
theirpeal.___45___,thecompanyofcolleaguesprovidesa socialnetwork;spendingallweekat
homecanleadtolo neliness
Workinglongershouldbeeasiernowthatmost jobsrequire___46___,ratherthanmanual
se,manypeo pleareworkinglongernotbecausetheyenjoywhattheydo,b ut
becausetheycannotaffordto___47___Thatisnotju stbecausegovernmentshavebeenpushingup
thestater etirementage.___48___,theaverageageatwhichpeopleac tuallyretirediffersfromthe
,thatisbecausemanype opledonotrelyonthestatepensionas
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theironlysourceofincomeandneedwork-rela tedpensionstosupplementit.
However,companiesare ___49___graduallypensionslinkedtofinalsalarieswith defined
sendupwithapotofsavingsatretirementthat
needstobe___50___.Theincomefromsuchpotshasbeen reducedbyverylowinterest
endtohavesmallerretire mentpots(thankstotheiryearsspentraisingchildren),< br>makingtheirdifficultiesevenmore___51___,Theynee dtokeepworking.
Olderworkersmayfeel___52___,ues seemto
hold___53___stisthatolderworkerstendto__ _54___highersalaries,becauseofthe
ondisa___55__ _ofskills:oneinthree55-to65-year-oldsinOECD
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SectionB
Directions:ssageisfollowedbyseveralq uestionsor
the
onethatfitsbestaccordingtothe informationgiveninthepassageyouhavejustread
(A)
AgnesdeMillewasadancerandachoreographer(编舞).Ea rlyinhercareer,deMillehad
ughtitwasgood
odym ademuchofit.
Afewyearslater,,shethoughtherwork< br>esultedinlittlecommercialfame.
Then,echoreog raphedOklahoma!,amusicalshowthatenjoyednearlyinsta nt
omingyears,Oklahoma!wouldrunforanincredible2 ,212performances,both
1955,thefilmversionwonanA cademyAward.
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Butthesuc cessofOklahoma!didn'ughtthatherworkon
Oklahoma! ersaid,Afterthe
openingofOklahoma!,Isuddenlyhad unexpectedsuccessforaworkIthoughtwasonlyfairly
tothinkthatperhapsmyentirescale
dtoMartha”.
sthemostinfluentialdancechoreographerofthe
20th century.(hasbeencomparedto
othercreativegeniuse slikePicassoorFrankLloydWright.)
etoldMarthaGra hamaboutherfrustration,“Iconfessedthat
Ihadabur ningdesiretobeexcellent,butnofaiththatIcouldbe.
Grahamrespondedbysaying,
“Thereisavitalityalif efore,anenergyaquickeningthatistranslatedthroughyo uintoaction,
andbecausethereisomoneofwowinallof time,oulockititwill
tyour
businesstodetermin ehowgooditisnorhowvaluablenorhowitcompareswithothe rexpressions.
lisyourbusinesstokeepityoursclear lyanddirectly,tokeepthechummedopen.”
nbelearned aboutdeMillesballetnamedRodeo?
edheralargefortu ne
herrisetofameovernight
'tenjoymuchsuccess
asolidfoundationforhercareer
deMillefeelabo utthegreatsuccessofthemusicalOklahoma?

oand FrankLloydWrightwerementionedinthepassagetosuggest thatMarthaGraham
______.
standinginvisualart sandarchitecture
dthesamepopularityasthem
ni nfluencedgreatlybythem
mostinfluentialartistinh erfield
fthefollowingstatementsbestrepresentsGr ahamswordsinthispassage?
ingwithotherspreventsy oufrommaintaininguniqueness.
uldalwayskeepyours elfopentotheurgesthatmotivateyou.
tionrevealsth einnerlandscape,whichisthesoulofmusic
ngtobepos itiveisgoingtodeterminehowyouliveyourlife
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积极拼搏锐意进取，全心 全意以学生学习为中心选择菁英高中，成就名校梦想
edtotraditionalhouses,c ontainerhousesare_____.
pensivetobuild
shion ableinstyle
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nbelearned aboutAmsterdam'sKeetwonencomplex?
'sequippedwit hmodemfacilities
udeslivingspaceandearparks
fthefollowingisthebesttitlefortheposter?
ngCont ainerHomeChallenges
gOptionsandSolutions
(C)
icaneDoriantrackedtowardsAmericaseastcoast,Elo nMusk,theboss
ofTesla,anelectric-carmaker,annou ncedthatsomeofhiscustomersinthestorm’spathwouldfin d
thattheircarshad
manymodernvehicles,’sprod uctsarebestthoughtofasinternet- connectedcomputerson
apermodelsinTesla’sline-up havepartsoftheirbatteriesdisabledbythecar’s
apo fakeyboardinPaloAlto,thefirmwasableto
removetho serestrictionsandgivedriverstemporaryaccesstothefu llpoweroftheirbatteries.
’utersand
connectiv itybecomecheaper,itmakessensetobakethemintomoreand morethingsthatarenot,in
themselves,computers,cr eatinganofthings
erswillgetconvenience,andprodu ctsthatcan
sseswillgetefficiency,asinformationa bout
thephysicalworldthatusedtobeuncertainbecom esconcreteandanalyzable.
Inthelongterm,though,r e
companieswillbecometechcompanies;ult,aseries< br>ofunresolvedargumentswillspilloverfromthevirtua lworldintotherealone.
skshowed,theinternetgives firmstheabilitytostay
connectedtotheirproductse venaftertheyhavebeensold,transformingthemintosomet hingcloser

MicrosoftcloseditsebookstoreinJu ly,forinstance,itscustomerslosttheabilitytoreadtit lesthey
hadbought(thefirmofferedrefunds).Thatsh iftsthebalanceofpowerfromthecustomertothe
selle r.
rmsaregenerallyhappytomove
cannotreleaset hebetaversion(测试版),a
smartphonemaker,providesup datesforitsphonesforonlyfiveyearsorsoaftertheirrel ease；users
dssuchaswashingmachinesorindustrial< br>illneedtoworkouttosupport
complicatedcompute riseddeviceslongaftertheiroriginalprogrammershavem ovedon.
hoftheinternetthebusinessmodelistooffer
servicesthatarepaidforwithvaluableuserdata,col lectedwithconsent(同意)thatishalf-informed
irtual world,argumentsaboutwhatshouldbetracked,andwhoowns theresulting
data,ealone,theywillfeelmoreurgent .
Predictingtheconsequencesofanytechnologyishar d—especiallyoneasuniversalas
rgenceoftheconsume rinternet,25yearsago,wasmetwithstarry-eyed
ayst heinternet’peoplehavethe
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ofwhattoex pect.
epassagewecantellthatTeslacan____________ _____.
asterthanusualinextremeweather
theran geofitsbatterypower
Cchargethebatteryatthetapof akeyboard
ewhenthebatteryisfullydrained
fthe followingisNOTanexampleoftheargumentsmentionedinth e
passage?
doptersofcertainappsfindthattheyc easedtoworkafterthefirmlostinterest
urancecompa nyusesdatafromfitnesstrackerstoadjustcustomers'pre miums(保费).
CComputerizedmachinerycan'tpredictit sbreakdownsorschedulepreventivemaintenance.
-te chfridgecompanyrestrictsitscustomersfromrepairingt heirfridgesthemselves
erlinedwordjarprobablymea ns______________inthiscontext.

ssageismainl yabout______________.
worldwillchangeascomputer sspreadintoeverydayobjects
ptionofelectricvehic lesandthepossibleproblemstoexpect
ouldbedonetop reventthebreakdownofcomputerizeddevices
entview sonthecurrentapplicationofInternetTechnology
Se ctionC
Directions:Readthefollowingpassage,Filli neachblankwithapropersentencegiveninthebox.
att herearetwomoresentencesthanyouneed.
vityisassoc iatedwithmanyfactors.
,theyshouldworktoexpand,g row,andexerciseit.
tcreativity,weareindistingui shablefromthemasses.
r,creativitycanbeacquireda tanyage.
EIt'shardtoworkoutwhereexactlycreativi tycomesfrom.
nehasthecapacitytobecreative.
E ssentialCreativity
InarecentsurveyinAmerica.62< br>﹪
ofpeoplesaidthatcreativitywasmoreimportant tosuccess
intheworkplacethantheyhadanticipatedi twouldbewhentheywereinschool.
_________________ _Itisofcoursepossibletoscanpeople'sbrainsandseewhi chpartsare
firingwhenanideaiscreated,butratherm oreromanticallyitcanbethoughtofassomethingthat
notdemand
creativityfromyourmind,norcanyoudeman dthatyouarecreativeinaparticularway.
Onemisnot< br>true.(68)__________________Anothermisconception isthatcreativityisallabouttheartsbutthis
simply isn'ttrue:creativityextendstomathsandscienceinjust thewayitdoestomusicand
literature.
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Thosewhoseethingsdifferentlytoothe rsandareconfidentenoughtomaketheirideasa
uently ,itisincredibly
importantthatschoolsdonotpreven tcreativity.(69)__________________Studentsshouldbe
edtolearntoview
mistakesasopportunitiesforl earningratherthansomethingthatwasunsuccessful.
Itisworryingthatmanyschoolsarelessconcernednowwith nurturingcreativitywhenthisis
tobethatpeoplewor kedhard,wenttouniversity.
,university—andtherea ren’tthe
jobsouttherethatguaranteeasafefuture(7 0)__________________Wecanuseittosetourselves
ap artandchannelittofacethechallengesofthefuture.
yWriting
Directions:izethemainideaandthemainpoi nt(s)ofthe
rownwordsasfaraspossible.
TheDecl ineofBiodiversity
thelast100years,scientistshav e
udiesshowthatoneineightplantspeciesisthreaten ed
timatedthat140,000speciesofplantsarelosteach year.
ncauseisthe
thisdestructionisdonetocre atepasture(牧场)for
inforestsinCentralandSouthAme ricahavebeenburntdowntomakewayfor
cattlefarming ,timatedthatforeachpoundof
beefproduced,estsare alsocutdowntomake
wheatforbreadaswellasfruitfor humanconsumption.
Theintroductionofexotic(外来的)e stresearchfromthe
universityofSouthamptonhasrev ealedtheimpactofexoticspeciesuponnativewildlife,wh ich
oticspeciesareintroducedtoa
place,heloca lspecies,whichhaven’thada
chancetoevolve,oftenl ackdefensesandthuscannotcompeteagainsttheexoticspe cies.
Thedisappearanceofcertainfoodanimalscanbe disastrousnotonlytolargeranimalsbutalso
esesmal lcreatureswhichconvertmuchoftheenergyinan
ecosy stemfromunusable(copicplants,decayingmatter,etc.)i ntousableforms,namely
bsencemakesmostenergyandn utrientstrappedinformsunusabletoother
kestheenv ironmentlesssuitableforhealthyliving,andlesscapabl eofproducing
resourcesthathumansneed.
ation< br>Directions:hewordsgiveninthebrackets.
1.我家门口 的街道成天车水马龙，(crowd)
2.中国女排成功卫冕世界冠军，给全国人民以极大的鼓舞。(s ucceed)
3.本次“城市公共交通周”的活动旨在提高公众节能环保的意识。(aim)
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4.我实在想不通为什么大伙儿都觉得他这个人高不可 攀，我印象中他挺和蔼可亲的(strike)
Writing
Directions:Wri teanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe instructionsgiven
belowinChinese
假设你是陈芳。你的好友 王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。
王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师 介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写
一封回信，内容须包括：
1、短片的主题以及与 之匹配的主要内容；
2、你选择这些内容的理由。
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2019学年第一学期徐汇区学习能力诊断卷
高三英语答案
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theecosystemandenvironment.( 54words)
评分标准：
1.本题总分为10分，其中内容5分，语言5分
2.评 分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点、信息呈现的连贯性和准确性
3.词数超过60，酌情扣分。
各档次给分要求:
内容部分：
A.能准确，全面地概括文章主旨大意，并涵盖主要信息
B.能概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏部分主要信息
C.未能准确概括文章主旨大意，遗漏较多主要信息或留 有过多细节信息
D.几乎不能根括文章的主旨大意，未涉及文中有意义的相关信息
语言部分：< br>A.能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。
B.基本能用自己的语言正确地表述，但连贯性较差，有 少量不影响表意的语言错误。
C.基本能用自己的语言表述，但连贯性较差，且严重语言错误较多。D.几乎不能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。
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nesewomen’svolleyballteamsucceededi ntakingwinningtheworldchampionship
again,whichw asagreatinspirationtoallChinesepeople.
paignofh eurbanpublictransportweekaimstoraisepublicawarenes sofsavingenergy
andprotectingtheenvironmentener gyconservationandenvironmentalprotection.
’tund erstandwhypeopleallthinkheisoutofreachinaccessible ,becausehestrikesmeasa
veryapproachableandkinda miableperson.
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评分标准
1.本题总分为25分，其中 内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。
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2 .评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性及上下文的连贯
性。
3.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档次给
子加分。其 中，内容和语言两部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加4-5分，15分以下者只
能考虑加0，1， 2，3分。
4.词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。
各档次给分要求
内容部分A.内容充实，主题突出，详略得当
B.内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求。
C.漏掉或 未能写清楚主要内容，有些内容与主题无关
D.明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题
语言部分
A.具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构正确或有些小错误，主要因为使用了较复杂结构或词
汇所致。句 子结构多样，词汇丰富。
B.语法结构和词汇方面有错误，但不影响理解。句子结构有一定的变化，词江 使用得当
C.语法结构与词汇错误较多，影响了对内容的理解。句子结构单调，词汇较贫乏。
D .语法结构与词的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解。词不达意
组织结构部分
A.自然地使用了语 句间的连接成分，全文流畅，结构紧凑。
B.能使用简单的语句间连接成分，全文内容连贯
C. 尚能使用语句间连接成分，语言连员性较差
D.缺乏语句间的连接成分，语言不连贯。
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