老鹰捉小鸡作文-友谊的名言

第三讲如何写议论文的主体
一、题型特点
议论性读写任务型作文指的是根据阅读 材料所描述的某一事件、现象、观点或话
题发表个人观点、意见和建议的一类读写任务，其实质就是要求 考生根据题目要
求写议论文。
二、写作技巧
英语议论文有其独特的框架结构，能让读者 迅速捕捉作者的观点和思路，
生模仿。写作时应注意以下几点。
1.运用过渡语进行衔接过渡< br>There is no doubt that...
过渡引出话题
It can not be denied that...
No one can ignore the fact that...
From what is mentioned above, we know...
From my point of view...
提出观点
As far as I am concerned...
I hold the viewbelief that...
Personally, I believe that...
表达立场
2.采用多种论证方式进行分析
议论文在写作手法上以议论 为主，如通过对比观点、阐述原因、列举例子等，但
有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论中的说 明常为议论的开展创造条件
或为议论作补充；叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据，因此，叙述应该是概括的 ，
描写应该是简要的。常用的句式有：
总述原因
分层论述
There are several reasons that contribute to...
My views are based on the following reasons.
To begin withFirst of all...BesidesFurthermore...FinallyLast but
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值得考
Actually, I am in favour of the idea that...
In some way, I am against the thought that...

not least...
On the one hand...On the other hand...
For one thing...For another...
列举例子
Take...for example.
For exampleinstance...
引出经历
It reminds me of the time when...
What impresses me most is that...
Thanks toOwing toBecause of...
分析因果
ConsequentlyThereforeThusAs a result...
讨论后果
Just imagine what would be like if there were no...
3.结尾总结升华，重申观点
在文中或 文末，考生可以用不同的语言重申主题或提出解决问题的建议，从而使
文章结构严谨、主题鲜明。常用的 句式有：
(1)To sum upIn shortIn conclusionOn the wholeAll in all...
(2)Taking all the factors into account, we can draw a conclusion that...
(3)From the discussion above, it can be safely concluded that...
(4)Therefore, it is necessary for us to...
(5)To be brief, we should be aware of the importance of...
(6)Only when weOnly by..., can we...
【典例示范 】请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
(2016·江苏卷)In recent years，internet voting has become increasing popular in
not only cast on-line votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for
competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the .“Cutest Baby
Li Jiang，a high school student，is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”　
competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better
understanding of police officers’ daily Jiang visits the website and reads all
the is deeply moved by their glorious is already thinking of
becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “FutureSinger”　
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has already received three similar invitations this uncle tells
him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for
Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even
vote，or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
[写作内容]
1.用约30个单词写出 上文概要；
2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用
看法。
[写作要求]
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3 .不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
[参考范文]
Online voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people
involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over
whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be
welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no
difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek
supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient,
regardless of time and rmore，voting on the Internet makes instant
feedback possible.
To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but
because they are divided between emotion and will turn for the better
if we can work out some participation rules for people to ore，I hold a
positive attitude towards online voting.
能力提升练1
2～3个理由或论据支撑你的
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请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇
(2018·江苏镇江高三调研
150词左右的文章。
)The 18-year-old girl from Linyi, Shandong province
scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing
University of Posts and Telecommunications.
On Aug 19, Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was
due to receive
student funding. Following the call, Xu transferred a 9，900-yuan“activation fee
into the man
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’s bank account, hoping the money would appear in her student account,
but it never did.
After discovering they had been cheated, the family immediately reported the incident
to the police, but Xu was said to be frustrated. On their way home, she suddenly
fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her, she passed away.
The death of Xu yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society, and once again,
it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺诈).
So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?
Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee
information online. The information includes the examinee’name, school, phone s
number, and address. The personal information of examinee has become the target of
the online fraud industry.
[写作内容]
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2.用约120个词就“Personal information leakage谈谈你的看法和感受，”内容包括：
(1)简述个人信息泄露 的危害及保护个人信息的重要性；
(2)就如何保护个人信息提几点建议
[写作要求]
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必 写标题。
[评分标准]
(至少两点)。
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内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
[参考范文]
A girl from Shandong, who would soon begin her university life, was cheated out of
9，900 yuan due to personal information leakage. The heavy blow claimed her life,
which aroused anger in society.
The leakage of personal information is of great harm. Not only will people be
frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also people may be
cheated out of money or be put in danger. Thus, the protection of personal information
is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life,
as well as to protect one’s own fortune.
’s personal information. Never click any link Here are the tips on how to protect one
on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted. Also, avoid connecting smart
phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places. Apart from the efforts of common
people, the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others
personal information.
能力提升练2
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇
(2018·江苏海安高级中 学期中考试)
Florence Chadwick was born in California in 1918. She grew up on the beach and
began competing as a swimmer at the age of six, when her uncle entered her in a race.
For the next 19 years, she continued as a competitive swimmer.
On July 4, 1952, at the age of 34, Chadwick attempted to become the first woman to
swim 21 miles across the Catalina Channel, from a port on the California coast. That
day the ocean was ice cold, the fog was so thick that she could hardly see the support
boats that followed her, and sharks swam around her. Several times, her support crew
used guns to drive away the sharks. While Americans watched on televisions, her
mother and her trainer, who were in one of the support boats, encouraged her to keep
going. However, after 15 hours and 55 minutes, with only a half mile to go, she felt
that she couldn’t go on, and begged to be taken out of the water.
150词左右的文章。
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Later, Chadwick told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I had seen
land I know, I could have made it.”The fog had made her unable to see her
swimming goal, and it made her feel she was getting nowhere. Two months later, she
tried again. Although the fog was still heavy, yet this time she made it with the goal
rooted in her mind. She knew behind the fog was the land she pursued.
[写作内容]
以约120个词就“Goal and Success的主题谈谈你的看法， 内容包括：”
(1)分析Chadwick第一次失败和第二次成功的原因；
(2)Chadw ick的故事对你有什么启发；
(3)结合实际谈谈如何实现自己的目标。
[写作要求] 1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不 必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
[参考范文]
Goal and Success
An American woman swimmer Chadwick succeeded in crossing the Catalina Channel
after failing in her first attempt. It was a goal in her mind that enabled her to make it.
Chadwick failed in her first attempt because she couldn
the “fog (difficulty)later, she succeeded because she had ”. But
“fog”.
’t see the “land (goal)
“the goal rooted in her
mind” despite the heavy
From the story, we know we should understand the relation between the goal and the
goal can encourage us to work hard to achieve success while the
difficulty may prevent us from reaching our goal. However, we can achieve our goal
by overcoming any possible difficulties.
As students, we may meet with many difficulties in our study, but we can surely
overcome them if we have a clear goal. I wish all of us could break through the
to reach the beautiful “land”．
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“fog”