托福独立写作开头结尾段
职场励志故事-补充协议模板
Lecture 4
独立写作开头结尾
经典开头段落——开门见山法
•In contemporary
society, it is becoming
increasingly common
that people+直观的现象
(
通过从
句表达
)
,或for
some people
(
可以细化具体的参与者
)
to do
sth
题目
中的中心事件
，
which has
aroused deep social concern.
People have
divergent views towards
(争论的焦
点)
whether
it is __or not this issue.
➌However, from my
perspective, I contend that......
应用
•In contemporary society, it is
becoming
increasingly common that the food in
the
restaustrants is detrimental to people's
health,
which has aroused deep social concern.
People have divergent views towards this
issue.
➌However, from my perspective, I
contend that the
food is not as healthy as it
is before.
经典开头段落——开门见山法
•In the current
era, the issue of ____is an
emotional one,
with many people taking
the attitude
that__________.
•Others believe that
________.
•➌However, from my perspective, I
hold
that_____
.
应用
•In the current era, the issue of children's
playing games is an emotional one, with many
people taking the attitude that children
should
not spend precious time on computer
games.
•Others believe that computer games
is
beneficial to children's growth.
•➌However, from my perspective, I hold
that_children should not be allowed to play
computer games .
经典开头段落——开门见山法
The present age of _____has found
that_________________________
Some
people assert that_________
➌However, from my
perspective,
I contend that_________.
处可用于天空的类似词汇：fierce compitation
rapid
development of the economy
the development of
science and technology
应用
The
present age of the rapid development
of the
Internet has found that computer
games are
prevailing among children.
Some people assert
that they waste a lot
of precious study time .
➌However, from my perspective, I contend
that computer games are conducive to
children's growth
.
场景假设开头段落
场景假设开头段落
•When I walk on the street, I notice
that_____.
•Obviously, eventsscenesstories
are taking
place almost every second the world
over.
•➌So when it comes to the statement
that_____,
I cannot agree more.
2. 叙事鱼钩
场景假设开头段落
•Whenever
opening the floppy pages, turning
on the TVs,
or logging onto the Internet, we can
see
extensive press coverage
concerning_________.
•According to those reports, the number of
______has reached the peakfallen to new
depth during the recent 20 years and
undoubtedly has the tendency of further
increasingdecreasing.
•➌In my eyes,
__________________.
2. 叙事鱼钩
场景假设开头段落
•New technological device
always has special
fascination to the public.
Some crazy
technological fans would rather
stand in an
endless line for the whole day,
waiting for a
precious chance to touch their
dreaming
products. But is it a sensible for
us? The answe
for me is definitely “no”.
结尾段句型
• 研究上述三段基本可以看出来，奥巴马的演讲最
后一
段基本不外乎“发表倡议”和“展望未来”
两大功能，就写作而言只需再加上一句话“总结
全文
”即可。
•
•第一句： 总结全文
•第二句：发表倡议
•第三局：展望未来
总结全文的句型
Based on
the above reasons, I firmly believe…
From what
I have discussed above, we may
safely arrive
atreachcome to draw the
conclusion that…
Judging from all the evidence offered, we may
suggest that…
All the above facts go to
show that…
(标红色的重点背下来用)
发表倡议的句型
It is high time that
parents, educators and the
government made
combined efforts to …
It is prime time that we
put（此处必须为动词过去式，是
一种虚拟语气的句型，背下来最关键）
considerablegreatspecialemphasis on…
My
suggestion is that more people from all walks of
life
should be encouraged to…
It is,
therefore, evident that the task of… requires
attention.
The general awareness of the
necessity and importance
of…might be the first
step to solve this problem.
展望未来的句型
Only in this way can we
have a better and
brighter
future.（此处必须用倒装句一定记住）
Just imagine how great
the world would be if
only we…
I believe a
happy and bright future is awaiting us
if we
can…
•引言（比较难 想不到俗语就不用了）
•in conclusion, I love dogs because of
loyalty(devotion), intelligence and
friendship. Thus I realize once again
why
people always say “dogs are
men’s best
friend.”
•To summarize, friendship
cannot be
bought with money. The Proverb “a
friend in need is a friend indeed” is
really true.
•On balance, luck
serves the decisive
factor from within while
hard work is
the decisive factor from without.
Thus I
realize once again why people always
say “Genus is 99%of perspiration and
1%of
inspiration.”