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短文改错（二）
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的 以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错 误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some
students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for
any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk
with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not
good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but
also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate
good plants from wild weeds.
2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌 之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,
每句中最多有两处。错误 涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出 修改的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
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2.只 允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy. However, things are quite opposite to their
expectations. Not only I get bored with hours of practice but also I doubted about the valuable of it. Nevertheless,
when I entered high school, write calligraphy proved both essential or beneficial. It was at that time when I realized
how important it is to master a certain skill.
Judging from my own experience, I want to say a few word to those children who have a same trouble as I did. Do
not refuse to learn a skill when young, as at the long run you will find them helpful.
3、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句
中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处 错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
As a saying go, “Pressure is another form of motive power”. However, many people can’t deal with pressure in an
appropriate way so that they become more anxiously. Seriously, it may cause many terrible personal problem. But
how can you deal with pressure? To, begin with, anybody has pressure, but you should accept the pressure. If you are
in deep pressure, you can distract your attention by doing some interested things like running, crafting or listening to
music. Secondly, you should talk to family members and friends to reducing the stress, maybe they can give you
some practical advice. Thirdly, you are need to learn how to self-adjust, that is the most effective way to help
yourself. In word, pressure is an inevitable part of your life. You are supposed to make the most of it to promote
ourselves.
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4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误 ,
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏 字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词 下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents.
As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we
cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very
dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around
us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us .
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语 言错误,每
句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加 一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在 错的词下画一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果)in
our back garden. Since then—for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As
result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we
often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but
we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修 改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加 、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多 余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:< br>1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Hello, boys and girls. Today I am going to talk with what you should do when a car accident occur. If you sense
that your car has run into another vehicle, don't panic and trying to remain quiet and calm. You are supposed to stop
your car where it is and get out of it immediately to see how serious the damage it is. Call 120 for help if anyone is
bad injured. Call the traffic police station or the insurance company to report the accident. After that, stay at a very
spot and wait for their arrival. If the accident is nothing serious, both you and the other driver can handle it by
yourself. You can simply drive away after you have scanned each other's ID card, put down each other’s phone
number, and agree on how much should be paid and the way it is to be paid. Avoid any more harm to the other side if
it is you who to blame.7、假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每
句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均 限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写 。
Three years ago, I was addicted to computer games. I played with games day and night on weekends. I lost
interesting in my studies and I was often absent from school.
My parents got very worrying about me. They persuaded me to quit play games, but I wouldn’t give up my bad
habit. Later my English teacher gave me some advices on how to quit the bad Habit. Listed the disadvantages of
playing computer games on a piece of paper, I put them on my bed and tried to remember them. Beside the list were
my effective schedule. I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid playing games. After that I became
active in studying and turn out to be one of the top students in our scho ol.
8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,
每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处 加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并 在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修 改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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My friend Henry, with who I studied in the same class, didn’t like studying at school. That’s because he couldn’t
go to high school. He had to return back to his hometown, where his father wished him to learn to manage our small
shop. However, the young man was not interesting in it and didn’t do as his father said. He spends a lot of time
reading and he also learned how to repair cars. Last month, I received an e-mail from him inviting me take my
vacation on his hometown. I started off. Seeing that he was such successful, I said, “Henry, all road lead to Rome.
You are great!”



答案以及解析
1答案及解析：
答案：
Nowadays, the computer technology develops
very
fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some
so
students
regarded
has
it as a great helper. Because there a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet
regard
is
This
is also very convenient to
It
for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library.
talk with others by using the Internet.
Moreover
, other students think that there is some information on line which
However
is not good for students. In addition,
spend
too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on
spending
their studies but also do harm
properly
for
health. Therefore, we should make use of the Internet. It is of great
proper
to
important
to separate good plants from wild weeds.
importance
解析：1、very→so 考查固定句型。So…that如此以致于。
2、regarded→regard 考查动词的时态。根据第一句话提到Nowadays可知用一般现在时。
3、has→is 考查固定句型。There be 表示有。
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4、so去掉考查连词。在英语 中有因为没有所以,故去掉。
5、This→It 考查代词。It is convenient to do 做某事很方便。It做形式主语。
6、Moreover→However 考查副词。句意:然而一些学生认为网上有些不好的信息。与第二行提到Some
students regarded it as a great helper表示对比,故用however.
7、spend→spending 考查动名词做主语。句意:玩游戏花费过多的时间不仅仅影响学习还有害健康;
8、for→to 考查固定短语。Do harm to 对......有害;
9、properly→proper 考查形容词。Make use of 利用。Use是名词,故用形容词来修饰。
10、import ant→importance考查名词。Be of importance 等于be important重要。

2答案及解析：
答案： In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy. However, things
are
quite opposite
were

valuable
from their expectations. Not only I get bored with hours of practice but also I doubted about the of it.
did
value
Nevertheless, when I entered high school,
write
or
calligraphy proved both essential beneficial. It was at that
writing
and
time
when
I realized how important it is to master a certain skill.
that
worda
to those children who have same trouble as I
wordsthe
atthem
did. Do not refuse to learn a skill when young, as the long run you will find helpful.
init
Judging from my own experience, I want to say a few
解析：
①考查 动词的时态。由上下文可知此处应用一般过去时,故将are改为were。
②考查倒装句。在not only...but also...结构中,若not only置于句首,含not only的分句用部分倒装;根据上下文
的时态可知,在主语I前加助动词did构成倒装。
③ 考査名词。此处表示“书法练习的价值”,应将形容词valuable改为其名词形式value.
④ 考查非谓语动词动名词。短语writing calligraphy作主语。
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⑤ 考查并列连词。both...and...是习惯搭配。
⑥ 考查强调句。此句在对时间状语at that time进行强调,根据强调句的结构 “It iswas+被强调部分+that+其他
成分”可知,应将when改为that
⑦ 考查名词。word表示“言语,话”时是可数名词,a few提示word应使用复数形式。
⑧ 考査冠词。形容词same前习惯搭配定冠词the。
⑨ 考査介词短语. in the long run是固定短语,意为“从长远来看”.
⑩ 考査代词。此处代词指代上文中的a skill,故将them改为it。

3答案及解析：
答案： As a saying
go
, “Pressure is another form of motive power”. However, many people can’t deal with
goes
anxiously
. Seriously, it may cause many terrible personal
anxious
pressure in an appropriate way so that they become more
problem
but
. But how can you deal with pressure? To, begin with, anybody has pressure, you should
problems
andso
accept the pressure. If you are in deep pressure, you can distract your attention by doing some
interested
things
interesting
reducing

reduce
that
the stress, maybe they can give you some practical advice. Thirdly, you are need to learn how to self-adjust,
which
like running, crafting or listening to music. Secondly, you should talk to family members and friends to

is the most effective way to help yourself. In word, pressure is an inevitable part of your life. You are supposed to
a
make the most of it to promote
ourselves
.
yourself

your selves
解析：1.第一句:go→goes考查动词。主语a saying是单数;根据语境,句子用一般现在时,所以谓语动词用第三
人称单数形式。
2. 第二句: anxiously→anxious考查形容词。become是系动词,接形容词做表语。
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3. 第三句: problem→problems考查名词。problem是 可数名词,由many修饰用复数。
4. 第五句:but→andso考查连词。句意:首先,任何人 都会有压力,因此你应当接受压力。前后是顺承或者因果
关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为ands o。
5.第六句: interested→interesting 考查形容词。interested “感兴趣的”,表示被修饰语的感受;interesting“有趣的”,
表示被修饰语的特征。此处表示“有趣的”事情。
6.第七句: reducing→redu ce考查动词。此处用不定式做目的状语,to是不定式符号接动词原形。
7.第九句: 去掉need前的are考查动词。need是动词,接不定式,原形动词不能与be动词连用。
8. 第九句:that→which考查定语从句。分析句子成分可知,“that is the most effective way to help yourself”是定语
从句,关系代词指代整个主 句,在从句中做主语,引导非限制性定语从句不能用关系代词that。故将that改为
which。
9. 第十句: 在word前加a考查固定短语。in a word“总之;简言之”,是固定短语 。
10.第十一句:ourselves→yourselfyourselves考查代词。句意:你 理应充分利用它提高你(们)自己。根据语境,故
将ourselves改为yourself 或者 yourselves。

4答案及解析：
答案： Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic
jam
:
jams
and accidents. As
safe
the
student, what can we do to guarantee our ? First of all, the traffic rules must be
safety
a
strict
turn

walk on the obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light green. Next, don't forget
to
strictly
turns
pavement. Finally, I think it very
dangerously
to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay
dangerous
enough attention
onTaking
the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. good care of ourselves and don't let
toTake
our parents worry about us .
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解析：
①考查名词。jam作“拥挤,堵塞”讲时为可数名词,其 前有more修饰. 故此处应用其复数形式。
②考查冠词。此处表示泛指,故应将定冠词the改为不 定冠词。
③考查名词。由语境可知.guarantee的宾语应该是名词,故将形容词 safe改为其名词形式safely。
④ 考查副词。此处修饰动词.PV:用副词,故将形容词strict改为其副词形式 strictly.
⑤ 考查主谓一致全文主体叙事时态为一般现在时,在until引导的时间状语从句中,主语the traffic light是单数,
故谓语动词turn应用第三人称单数形式。
⑥考查非谓 语动词。forget后接不定式作宾语,forget to do sth.总为“忘记要去做某事”
⑦ 考查形容词。本句为“think + it(形式宾语)+ad j.(形容词作宾语补足语)+不定式(真正的宾语)”结构,故将
dangerously改为dan gerous。
⑧ 考査介词。pay attention to sth.是固定短语,意为“注意某事”
⑨ 考查连词。该句含有从属连同since引导的原因状语从 句,故主句前的连词so多余,应删除。
⑩考查祈使句。此句为and连接的两个祈使句,故应以动词原 形开头。

5答案及解析：
答案： Nearly five years
beforeby
, and with the help our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes
agoof
year
had
we been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where
years
have
(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these
ˆ
result, the plants are growing they please. As
a
somewheretaste
. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and .
everywheretasty
There are so
much
that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the
many
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same place year after year, (but
but
) we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing
yet
wonderfully
tomatoes at no cost!
wonderful
解析：1.第一句:before→ago考査副词。ago是个后置副词,放在 表示时间的词语之后,因此把before改为
ago。
2. 第一句:by→of考査固定搭配。with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下”,是固定搭配。
3. 第二句:year→years 考査名词的单复数。for all these years“这么多年来”,因此应用year的复数形式years。
4. 第 二句:had→have考查时态。结合文意可知,此处表示从过去开始而延续到现在的动作,因此应用现在完成
时,把had改为have。
5. 第三句:在result前加a考査固定短语。as a resull“结果是固定短语。
6. 第三句:somewhere→everywhere考查副词 。根据语境可知,此处表示“到处都是这种植物”,因此把somewhere
改为everywher e。
7.第四句:taste→lasty考查形容词。句中的juicy为形容词,因此把taste 改为tasty“好吃的”,用形容词作表语。
8. 第五句:much→many考査限定词。此处表 示“圣女果太多了,因此我们常与邻居分享”。many修饰可数名词,
much修饰不可数名词。因此 把much改为many。
9. 第六句:but→yet或去掉but考査连词。从句中已经出现了连 词Although,因此应去掉主句中的but,或将其改
为yet。
10. 第七句:wo nderfully→wonderful考查形容词。应用形容词修饰名词,因此把wonderfully改 为wonderful。

6答案及解析：
答案： Hello, boys and girls. Today I am going to talk
with
occur
what you should do when a car accident . If
occurs
about
you sense that your car has run into another vehicle, don't panic and
trying
to remain quiet and calm. You are
try
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supposed to stop your car where it is and get out of it immediately to see how serious the damage it is. Call 120 for
help if anyone is
bad
or
injured. Call the traffic police station the insurance company to report the accident.
badly
and
a
very spot and wait for their arrival. If the accident is nothing serious, both you and the other
the
yourself
. You can simply drive away after you have scanned each other's ID card, put
yourselves
agree
on how much should be paid and the way it is to be paid. Avoid any
agreed
After that, stay at
driver can handle it by
down each other‘s phone number, and

to harm to the other side if it is you who
are
解析：
① 考查动词短语。“谈论某事”的习惯表达为talk about sth.,因此应将with 改为about。
② 考查主谓一致。在when引导的时间状语从句中,主语是a car accident,因此谓语动词应为第三人称单数形
式.
③ 考査祈使句。分析句子结构可知 .and连接两个并列的祈使句,因此应将trying改为动词原形try.
④ 考査宾语从句。在宾语从句中the damage作主语,因此it多余,应删除。
⑤ 考査副词。副词修饰形容词injured,故将形容同bad改为badly.
⑥ 考查并列连词。此处表示递进而非选择关系,故将or改为and.
⑦ 考查冠。 “the very +名词”用于加强语气,其中very是形容词,表示“正是的;恰好的”.
⑧ 考查反身代词。根据句意可知.此处指“你们自己”,故应用yourself 的复数形式。
⑨ 考查动词的时态。分析句子结构可知,连词and连接了三个并列的谓语动词,时态应保持一致,即“have
scannd、(have) put down 和(have) agreed。
⑩考查动词短语。be to blame是固定短语,意为“应承担责任;该受责备”。

7答案及解析：
答案：
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Three years ago, I was addicted to computer games. I played with games day and night on weekends. I lost
interesting
in my studies and I was often absent from school.
interest
My parents got very
play
worrying
about me. They persuaded me to quit games, but I wouldn’t give up
playing
worried
Listed
advices
on how to quit the bad Habit. the
Listing
advice
my bad habit. Later my English teacher gave me some
them
on my bed and tried to remember them.
it
were

playing Beside the list my effective schedule. I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid
of
was
turn
games. After that I became active in studying and out to be one of the top students in our school.
turned
disadvantages of playing computer games on a piece of paper, I put
解析：< br>1.第二句:去掉with考查介词。句中play是及物动词,直接跟宾语。
2.第三句:in teresting→interest 考查名词。句中的lost (lose)是及物动词.后面应跟名词做宾语。lose interest
in“对……失去兴趣”。
3. 第四句:worrying→worried 考查形容词。worrying“令人担心的”,worried “担心的”。
4. 第五句:play→playing 考查非谓语动词,quit doing sth. “停止做某事”,固定用法。
5. 第六句:advices→advice 考查名词。advice是不可数名词,无复数形式。
6. 第七句:Listed→Listing考 查非谓语动词。动词List与其逻辑主语I之间是主谓关系,故应用动词-ing形式。
7. 第七句 :them→it考查代词。根据前后句意,作者应是把写有不利因素的纸放在床上。这里paper是不可数名
词,应用it指代。
8. 第八句:was 考查主谓一致。此句是一个倒装句, 主语是schedule,是单数名词。故改为was。
9. 第九句:在rid后加of考查介词。get rid of “摆脱”,固定短语。
10. 第十句:turn→turned 考查时态。短文的时态为一般过去时,要用一般过去时与全文一致。

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8答案及解析：
because
who
答案： My friend Henry, with I studied in the same class, didn’t like studying at school. That’s
why
whom
he couldn’t go to high school. He had to return back to his hometown, where his father wished him to learn to
manage
our interesting
small shop. However, the young man was not in it and didn’t do as his father said. He
theirinterested
spends
a lot of time reading and he also learned how to repair cars. Last month, I received an e-mail from him
spent
inviting me
to
take my vacation
“Henry, all

onsuch
his hometown. I started off. Seeing that he was successful, I said,
inso
road
lead to Rome. You are great!”
roads
解析：
1. 句意:我的同 班同学享利,在学校不喜欢学习。根据结构可知,Henry后构造了由介词+关系代词引导的非限
制性 定语从句,介词with后应该用宾格形式,故把who改为whom。
2. 句意:那就是他不能上高 中的原因。根据句意可知,这里用why引导表语从句,表示结果,故把because改为
why。< br>3. 句意:他不得不回到他的家乡。 return本来就有come or go back之意,故删除back。
4. 句意:他不得不回到他的家乡,在那里他的爸爸希望他学会管理 他们的小商店。与主语一致,故把our改为
their。
5. 句意:然而,这个年轻人对此 并不感兴趣,他并没按他爸爸说的那祥做。interesting“有趣的”,主语通常是物;
int erested “感兴趣的;对……感兴趣”,主语通常是人,多用于beget feelbecome interested in 结构中,故把
interesting 改为 interested。
6. 句意:他花很多时间读书,也学会了如何修车。根据上下文语境可知,这 里要用一般过去时,故把spends改为
spent。
7. 句意:上个月,我收到他的一封电子邮件,邀请我去他的家乡度假。invite sb. to do sth.“邀请某人做某事”,故
take前加to。
8. in his hometown“在他的家乡”,故把on改为in。
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9. 句意:看到 他如此成功,我说:“享利,条条大路通罗马,你很棒!”这里用so修饰形容词successful,suc h修饰名词,
故把such改为so。
10. 句意:条条大路通罗马。用all修饰名词,名词用复数,故把road改为roads。

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