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六级作文：一般要求分为3—5段，我们建议写3段，即引言部分，正文部分和结尾部分。（要求整篇作文结构连贯）
引言部分：一般为1段，偶尔也由2段组成。
作用：1）告诉读者文章写什么；
2）吸引读者读下去。
要求Informative(信息性)和Interesting(趣味性)
信息性：
1）文章写什么问题(What is the subject of your composition), 是体育问题，还是广告、环境、就业、学习等问题
2）作者对这个问题的观点、态度是什么(Your attitude towards the subject), 比较具体。
3） 要有主题句
由笼统到具体，最后到中心句。
Example 1
Every society has its own way of taking care of the elderly. In many countries it is the custom for grandparents to live with their children. In this way families can express their gratefulness and show respect for the elderly. But in America, many of the old people are either put in nursing homes or live alone, as if they have no relatives. Why does American
society have this unfair custom
每个社会的情况→许多国家情况→美国社会情况，最
后亮出观点：为什么会出现这种不合理的情况？
Example 2
“Daydreaming again, Barb You’ll never amount to anything if you spend your time that way! Can’t you find something useful to do”
Many youngsters have heard words like those from their parents. And until recently this hostile attitude towards daydreaming was the most common one. Daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time. Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties. But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming, and think it may be a very healthy thing to do.
由笼统到具体，最后一句话点明：做白日梦可能并不是一件坏事。
趣味性：
How to invite the reader’s attention and hold the reader’s interest
1. 引语法 即使用谚语，名人名言，或是有代表性的话。
Eg. A proverb says, “You are only young once.”
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever
2. 问题法，即使用一个发人深思的问题来引起读者的注意。
Eg. Should doctors ever lie to benefit their patients— to speed recovery or to conceal the approach of death In medicine as in law, government, and other lines of work, the requirements of honesty often seem dwarfed by greater needs the need to shelter from brutal news or to uphold a promise of secrecy; to expose corruption or to promote the public interest.
3. 对立法，即从反面的事实，反面的观点引出作者正面的观点。
Eg. Where and when and what you study are all important. But the neatest desk and the best desk light, the world’s most regular schedule, the best leather-covered notebook and the most expensive textbooks you can buy will do you no good unless you know how to study.
4. 对比法
Eg. Through civilization, human beings have
nd Fight Flu Viruses
近年来，流感病毒肆虐，人们谈流感色变。
预防和抵抗流感有很多方法。
如果出现流感症状，我们应该…
Outline
para1. Discrible the phenomenon, and list common reasons.
Para2. Flu is not so scaring, put forward protective measures.
Para 3. 提醒人们发现流感症状应立即就医。
How to Prevent and Fight Flu Viruses
The flu season is coming! It seems that, since bird flu and H1N1 flu prevailed over our life, at the start of every winter, the government gets ready for a wave of flu with pandemic potential. The world just sinks into panic. (开头）
正文部分：
As a matter of fact, flu is not so scaring. Among various ways, the best one is to take protective measures and focus on boosting immunity.(高分句型） In more specific terms, sufficient nutrition, balanced diet, enough sleep, regular exercise and reduced pressure will benefit our physical health. In addition, vaccination may prove to be effective. Moreover, good personal habits matter. Trivial things are by no means of little importance such as washing your hands carefully and often, covering your mouth when coughing or sneezing, keeping windows open to have fresh air, staying away from public places. If necessary, remember to wear a mask.
结尾部分：
However, if you recognize any symptoms of flu— a sharp increase in body temperature, headaches, muscular pains or breathing problems, visit the nearest medical centre as soon as possible.