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2016考研英语“图画类”高分作文模板
（英语一）
一、历年作文主题分类
纵观历年考研英语一图画作文，可将其分为两类：人生态度类（常考积 极方面），社会
现象类（常考消极方面）。
人生态度类：2014年（孝敬父母），2013 年（正确选择），2012年（乐观态度），2010
（文化交流），2008年（合作精神），200 7年（自信态度），2006年（偶像崇拜，），2005年
（道德教育，尊敬老人），2004年（终 点即是起点，人生没有终点，要不断进取），2003年
（挫折教育）
社会现象类：2015 年（科技副作用），2011年（环境污染），2009年（网络导致人际交
流缺少）
二、关于考研英语一大作文几点建议
1，没有要求一定要写标题的话，建议不要写，因为写对 了不加分也不扣分，但是写错了会
扣分，务必注意。
2，考研英语大纲要求大作文字数为16 0-200字（不包括标点符号），建议写到220字左右，
太多了也不好，不要超过240字，历年考 研英语高分作文都在220字左右。
3，大作文开头必须描述图画，并揭示主题词，主题词要贯穿全文 ，反复出现，否则容易被
视为偏题作文。
4，作文采用三段式，不建议标新立异，标的不好的话会摔很疼。
5，书写方面，建议0.5 mm黑色签字笔，字迹工整的同学比字迹潦草的同学作文平均分数高
出5分左右。
三、人生态度类作文模板
第一段
第一句：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown
above,图片描述.


翻译：当我看到这幅图片的时候脑海中瞬间充斥着一种醍醐灌顶的感觉！如图所示，
图片描述.
【备注1】：Sobered（醍醐灌顶的）可以根据不同的语境作相应的替换，如：Refreshe d（神
清气爽的）、Enlightened（豁然开朗的）、inspired（倍受鼓舞的）等。
【备注2】：instantly（立即地）可替换为：immediately（立即地）、inst antaneously（瞬间地，
突如其来地）

第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Simply as the above illustration appears at first glance, the
symbolic meaning the picture conveys is rather deep and profound.

翻译：上面这幅图画乍看起来很简单，但它的象征意义是非常的深刻的。
【备注1】：这句话大家可以根据文章字数来确定是否需要添加，字数控制在220字左右。
【备注2】：illustration（图画）可替换为简单点的：picture、image、carto on.

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第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that主题词exists as quite realistic
positive power in our growing course
翻译：毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较
现实的积极力 量。
【备注1】：Beyond doubt（毫无疑问）可替换为：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.
【备注2】： explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously
（显著地）。
【备注3】： pointed out（指出）可替换为：illustrated、feature d、portrayed、presented、depicted、
described，这些单词都 是表示“描述，描绘”的意思。
【备注4】：exists as：作为…而存在，以…形式存在。

第二段
第一句：The author wants to convey that 主题词is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing
above.
翻译：正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达主题词在生活中无处不在。
【备注1】 ：omnipresent（无处不在的）可替换为：prevalent（流行的，普遍的）
【备注2】：主题词
is omnipresent 可替换为：主题词can be found in nearly all walks of life.
【备注3】： inspiring（充满哲理的）可替换为： instructive（有教育意义的）、symbolic （象
征性的）、philosophic（富有哲理的）、illuminating（有启发性的）、 stimulatory（鼓
舞人心的）。

第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Every word you say, every action you take is probably labeled
by 主题词
if you area person with the spirit of it.
翻译：如果你身上具备这 种品质，那么你说的每一句话，做出的每一个动作都被打
上了主题词标签。


第三句：Indeed, the function of主题词has been elevated to a relatively high height as the
society marches forward and becomes more competitive.
翻译：事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，主题词的作用逐渐被提 到了一
个相对较高的高度。
【备注1】：Indeed（的确，实际上）可替换为：In fact、Actually

第四句：When speaking of success, (no matter for individual development or the
teamsociety,)主题词
plays a crucial role.
翻译：当提及成功，（无论是对个人发展还是团队社会发展，）主题词都扮演着举
足轻重的角色 。
【备注1】：括号内的内容可要可不要，视自己作文字数而定。
【备注2】：When speaking of可替换为：When it comes to
【备注3】：crucial （关键的）可替换为：vital（关键的）、indispensable（不可缺少的）、momentou s
（重要的）、significant（有重要意义的）

第五句：As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao MingLi NaLiu XiangYi Jian lian, an
outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the
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world without the personality of主题词.
翻译：最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明李娜刘翔易建联的例子，如果他
没有主题词，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。

【备注1】：此句为从正面来进行说明主题词的重要性。


第六句（这一句可要可不要）：The success of Yao Ming Li Na Liu Xiang Yi Jian lian tells
us that what 主题词
offers you is not the solution to a specific problem, but a kind
of belief, which makes yourself believe that you can harness it and make it.
翻译：姚明李娜刘翔易建联的成功告诉我们主题词给予你的，不是解决某个具体问题的方法，而是传达给你一种信念，一种我能行的自我暗示和把事情做成
功的信念。

第七句（这一句可要可不要）：However, it is exactly the overwhelming effect in this
competitive society.
翻译：而这些恰恰是在现代社会竞争体制中具有压倒性成效的因素。
【备注1】：overwhelming：势不可挡的，压倒性的

第八句：Once lack of主题词
, people will become ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with
the tide and probably become the defective products of the cruel society.
翻译：在现代社会中人们一旦缺少了主题词，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、 随波逐流的
群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。
【备注1】：此句为从反面来进行说明主题词的重要性。

【备注2】：ignorant：愚昧无知的 muddle-headed：糊涂的，浑浑噩噩的

第三段
第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of主题词
rests in both vital and trivial issues.
翻译：从以上我们的讨论来看，主题词的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。
【备注1】：Given all above arguments可替换为：From what have been discussed above、Judging
from what have been discussed above
【备注2】：it admits of no doubt that可替换为：we may safely draw the conclusion that.
【备注3】：vital and trivial：重要的和琐碎的

第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.
翻译：因而，我们要提高社会责任感。

第三句：At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.
翻译：同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。
【备注1】：At the same time可替换成：Meanwhile

第四句：Only by being fully aware of the significance of 主题词
, can we hope to witness the
ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.
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翻译：只有我们对主题词的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，
在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。

四、社会现象类作文模板
第一段
第一句：Embarrassed feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this drawing!图片描述.
翻译：当我看到这幅图片的时候羞愧的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海！图片描述。
【备注1】：E mbarrassed可替换为：Ashamed、Compunctious(惭愧的,内疚的)、Shame ful。
【备注2】：instantly（立即地）可替换为：immediately（立即地） 、instantaneously（瞬间地，
突如其来地）

第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Simply as the above illustration appears at first glance, the
symbolic meaning the picture converys is rather deep and profound.

翻译：上面这幅图画乍看起来很简单，但它的象征意义是非常的深刻的。
【备注1】：这句话大家可以根据文章字数来确定是否需要添加，字数控制在220字左右。
【备注2】：illustration（图画）可替换为简单点的：picture、image、carto on.

第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that主题词exists as quite realistic
positive power in our growing course
翻译：毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较
现实的积极力 量。
【备注1】：Beyond doubt（毫无疑问）可替换为：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.
【备注2】： explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously
（显著地）。
【备注3】： pointed out（指出）可替换为：illustrated、feature d、portrayed、presented、depicted、
described，这些单词都 是表示“描述，描绘”的意思。
【备注4】：exists as：作为…而存在，以…形式存在。
第二段
第一句：As is incisively depicted in the realistic drawing above, the appearance of主题词is
the corresponding social problem caused by excessively rapid development of
modern society (which improved the living standard ofpeople at the same time).
翻译：正如上面这幅现实性的图片所描述 的那样，我认为主题词是现代社会过快发
展（带给人们生活水平提高的同时）出现的相应的社会问题。
【备注1】：括号内的内容可根据字数要求进行删减，这句话不影响整个句子的表达。
【备注2】：explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously
（显著地）。
【备注3】：As is incisively depicted in 可替换为：According to what is incisively depicted in

第二句：Indeed, 主题词has become a heated topic, (however, it is contradict with the nature
of people.)
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翻译：事实上，主题词已经成为社会热议话题，（不过它与我们的人性的本质是背
道而驰的）。

第三句：According to recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences,
three-fifths of the youngsters suffer from主题词.

翻译：根据中国社科院最近发布的一项调查，五分之三的年轻人因主题词而受到伤
害。
【备注1】：Chinese Academy of Social Sciences（中国社科院）可替换为其他机构，如：Tsinghua
University（清华大学）、China Youth Daily（中国青年报）、People’s Daily（人
民日报）、Xinhua News Agency（新华社）

第四句：Who is to blame for the existence of主题词
?In my opinion, the following three
factors should definitely be counted in.
翻译：谁应该为主题词的社会现象买单？在我看来，下列三个因素难咎其责。

【备注1】：In my opinion可替换为：From my perspective（在我看来），On my personal level
（在我看来）

第五句：On the top of the causes might come the drive of interests. People always prefer
things that benefit them.
翻译：首要因素的是由于利益的驱动，人们经常倾向于对自己有利的事情。

第六句：Then comes the absence of responsibility. Some self-concentrated people just focus
on individual interest(regardless of the existence of social responsibilities, resulting
in the appearance of主题词
).
翻译：其次是责任的缺失。现代社会中那些习惯凡事 以自我为中心的人只关注个人
得失（从而忽视了社会责任感的存在，导致了主题词的出现。
）
【备注1】：括号内的内容可根据字数要求进行删减，这句话不影响整个句子的表达。
【备注2】：Then可替换为：FurthermoreMoreover（除此之外）

第七句：Last but not the least, the defective legal system is also one of the reasons that make
the phenomenon of主题词
exist.
翻译：最后，法律系统的不完善也是导致社会上出现了一些主题词现象的一个原因。

第三段
第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the negative function of主题
词rests in both vital and trivial issues.
翻译：从以上我们的讨论来看，主题词的消极影响出现在生活中的大事小事上。

【备注1】：Given all above arguments可替换为：From what have been discussed above、Judging
from what have been discussed above
【备注2】：it admits of no doubt that可替换为：we may safely draw the conclusion that.
【备注3】：vital and trivial：重要的和琐碎的

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第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.
翻译：因而，我们要努力提高社会责任感。

第三句：At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.
翻译：同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。
【备注1】：At the same time可替换成：Meanwhile

第四句：With a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the
problem of主题词
becomes things of the past
翻译：伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，主题词这个问题迟早可以被解决。


五、模板套用示范
示范一：2007年真题实战演练

主题类型：人生态度类
主题词：自信
主题词表达形式：self- confidence，self-belief，believe in yourself，be confident
图画描述句：The goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is
invincible.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There is a goalkeeper and a striker who are both lack of self-confidence in the picture.

文章内容：
Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，the
goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is invincible.
Beyond
doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that self-confidence
exists as quite realistic positive
power in our growing course.
The author wants to convey that believing in oneself
is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing
above. Indeed, the function of self-belief
has been elevated to a relatively high height as the
society marches forward and becomes more competitive. When speaking of success, no matter for
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indi vidual development or the team, being confident plays a crucial role. As can best be illustrated
in terms of Yao Ming Li Na Liu Xiang Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can not
achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality of self- confidence.

Once lack of self-belief
, people will become ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with the tide and
probably become the defective products of the cruel society.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of self-belief
rests
in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their
awareness of self-confidence
. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect
social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of self-confidence
, can we hope to
witness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

译文：
当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥 了我的脑海。如图所示，守门员看自
己像一个失败者，殊不知在对手的眼中，他是不可战胜的。毫无疑问 ，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地
指出了自信
在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。
正 如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达相信自己
在生活中无处不在。事实上，
随着现代社 会的进步，竞争的激烈，自信
的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及
成功，无论是对 于个人还是团队的发展，自信
都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的
莫过于杰出运动员姚 明李娜刘翔易建联的例子，如果他她没有自信
，就不会获得成功和
取得全世界人民的尊敬。在现 代社会中人一旦缺少了自信
，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐
流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个 残酷社会的淘汰品。
从以上我们的讨论来看，自信
的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因 而，大众要提
高他们关于自信
的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对自信的重 要性的足
够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。

示范二：2008年真题实战演练

主题类型：人生态度类
主题词：合作精神
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主题词表达形式：spirit of cooperation，teamwork，being cooperative，help each other
图画描述句：The man without right leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both
of them can go fast and far.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There are two disable men going forward with each other’s help in the picture.

文章内容：
Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，The
man without right leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both of them can go
fast and far . Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that the spirit of cooperation exists
as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.
The author wants to convey that working together
is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing
above. Indeed, the function of teamwork
has been elevated to a relatively high height as the
society marches forward and becomes more competitive. When speaking of success, no matter for
individual development or the team, helping each other
plays a crucial role. As can best be
illustrated in terms of Yao Ming Li Na Liu Xiang Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who
can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality of
cooperation.
Once lack of the spirit of cooperation, people will become ignorant and
muddle-headed, swim with the tide and probably become the defective products of the cruel
society.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of teamwork
rests
in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their
awareness of cooperation
. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social
system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of being cooperative
, can we hope to
witness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

译文：
当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶 的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，一个没了右
腿的人把自己和一个没了左腿的人绑在一起，这样他 们就都可以走得又快又远了。毫无疑问，
这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了合作精神
在我们人生成长过 程中的比较现实的积极力量。
正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达合作
在生活中无 处不在。事实上，随着
现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，合作
的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的 高度。当提及成功，
无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，合作
都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明 这一点的莫过于
杰出运动员姚明李娜刘翔易建联的例子，如果他她没有合作
，就不会获得成功和 取得全
世界人民的尊敬。在现代社会中人一旦缺少了合作精神
，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐 流
的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。
从以上我们的讨论来看，合作
的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大众要提
高他们关于合作
的意识。同时，政府也 要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对合作的重要性的足
够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里， 人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。


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示范三：2012年真题实战演练














主题类型：人生态度类
主题词：乐观，积极态度
主题词表达形式：optimism(n.) optimistic(adj.)，being optimistic，being positive，
positiveoptimistic attitude toward life
图画描述句：Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thinks that it’s lucky to have a little left,
while the other sights that it’s all gone.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There are two people who have different attitudes when their bottle falls down in the
picture.

文章内容：
Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，
Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thinks that it’s lucky to have a little left, while the other
sights that it’s all gone .Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that optimism exists as
quite realistic positive power in our growing course.
The author wants to convey that positive attitude toward life
is omnipresent in the inspiring
drawing above. Indeed, the function of being optimistic
has been elevated to a relatively high
height as the society marches forward and becomes more competitive. When speaking of success,
no matter for individual development or the team, optimistic attitude toward life
plays a crucial
role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming Li Na Liu Xiang Yi Jian lian, an
outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out
the personality of being positive.
Once lack of optimism, people will become ignorant and
muddle-headed, swim with the tide and probably become the defective products of the cruel
society.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of optimism
rests
in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their
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awareness of being optimistic. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect
social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of optimism
, can we hope to witness
the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

译文：
当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，看到倒在地
上的瓶子，一个人庆幸还剩下一点，而另一个人却笃定的认为全完了。毫无疑问，这幅图片
旗帜 鲜明地指出了乐观
在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。
正如上面这幅充满哲理性的 图片，作者想要表达乐观
在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着
现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，乐观
的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，
无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，乐观
都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于
杰出运动员姚明李娜刘翔易建联的例子，如 果他她没有乐观
，就不会获得成功和取得全
世界人民的尊敬。在现代社会中人一旦缺少了乐观< br>，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群
体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。
从以上我们的讨论来看，乐观
的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大众要提
高他们 关于乐观
的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对乐观的重要性的足
够重视，我 们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。

示范四：2014年真题实战演练











主题类型：人生态度类
主题词：孝敬父母，孝顺，孝心
主题词表达形式：filial piety, mutual support，caring for the elderly，honoring our parents，
respecting our parents
图画描述句：Three decades ago, along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her
girl hand in hand with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime
of her life guided her aged mother through the road arm in arm.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There are two people, a mother and a daughter, who show love with each other in the
picture.

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文章内容：
Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，Three
decades ago, along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand
with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her aged
mother through the road arm in arm.. Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that filial
piety exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.
The author wants to convey that honoring our parents
is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing
above. Indeed, the function of respecting our parents
has been elevated to a relatively high height
as the society marches forward and becomes more competitive. When speaking of success, no
matter for individual development or the team, caring for our parents
plays a crucial role. As can
best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming Li Na Liu Xiang Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman,
who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality of
honoring the elderly.
Once lack of honoring the elderly, people will become ignorant and
muddle-headed, swim with the tide and probably become the defective products of the cruel
society.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of honoring our
parents rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance
their awareness of respecting our parents
. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the
imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of filial piety
, can we hope
to witness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

译文：
当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶 的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，三十年前，
沿着那条路走着一位年轻的母亲，她脸上带着笑容搀 扶着女儿往前走，而现在在处于生命中
的黄金时间的女儿肩靠肩地带着年迈的母亲往前走。毫无疑问，这 幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了
孝敬父母
在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。
正 如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达孝顺
在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着
现代社会的 进步，竞争的激烈，孝顺
的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，
无论是对于个 人还是团队的发展，孝顺
都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于
杰出运动员姚明李 娜刘翔易建联的例子，如果他她没有孝心
，就不会获得成功和取得全
世界人民的尊敬。在现代社 会中人一旦缺少了孝心
，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群
体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷 社会的淘汰品。
从以上我们的讨论来看，孝顺
的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而， 大众要提
高他们关于孝顺
的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对孝敬父母的重 要性
的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。
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示范五：2011年真题实战演练

旅程之“余”

主题类型：社会现象类
主题词：环境污染
主题词表达形式：environmental disruption, polluting the environment，environmental pollution，
environmental contamination，respecting our parents
图画描述句：sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a couple of youngsters are
throwing rubbish into the sea, with many dead fishes floating on the surface.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There are two people sitting on the boat and throwing rubbish into the sea, and many
dead fishes floating on the surface.

文章内容：
Embarrassed feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this drawing! As is shown above,
sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a couple of youngsters are throwing rubbish into
the sea, with many dead fishes floating on the surface. Beyond doubt, it explicitly pointed out that
environmental disruption
exists as quite realistic negative power in our growing course.
As is incisively depicted in the realistic drawing above, the appearance of environmental
pollution
is the corresponding social problem caused by excessively rapid development of modern
society. Indeed, polluting the environment
has become a heated topic. According to recent survey
conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters suffer from
environmental contamination
. Who is to blame for the existence of environmental disruption? In
my opinion, the following three factors should definitely be counted in. On the top of the causes
might come the drive of interests. People always prefer things that benefit them. Then comes the
absence of responsibility. Some self-concentrated people just focus on individual interest. Last but
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not the least, the defective legal system is also one of the reasons that make the phenomenon of
polluting the environment
exist.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the negative function of the absence of
environmental disruption
rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, we should enhance our
sense of social responsibility. Meanwhile, the authority should improve the imperfect social
system. With a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem of
environmental contamination
becomes things of the past

译文：
当我看到这幅图片的时候羞愧的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海！如图所示，一堆青年坐在 船
上看风景并不断向湖中丢垃圾，湖面上漂浮着一些死鱼。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指
出 了破坏环境
在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的消极影响。
正如上面这幅现实性的图片所描述 的那样，我认为环境污染
是现代社会过快发展出现的
相应的社会问题。事实上，环境污染
已经成为社会热议话题。根据中国社科院最近发布的一
项调查，五分之三的年轻人因环境污染
而受到伤害。谁应该为环境污染的社会现象买单？在
我看来，下列三个因素难咎其责。环境污染
的出现首当其冲的是由于利益的驱动，人们经常
倾向于对自己有利的事情。其次是责任的缺失。现代社会 中那些习惯凡事以自我为中心的人
只关注个人得失。最后，法律系统的不完善也是导致社会上出现了一些 环境污染
现象的一个
原因。
从以上我们的讨论来看，环境污染
的消极作用出 现在生活中的大事小事中。因而，我们
应该尽最大的努力不断提高社会责任感，抵挡住眼前的短暂利益诱 惑。同时，政府完善法律
体系和加强执法能力。伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，环境污染
这个问题迟早可以被
解决。


示范六：2009年真题实战演练

网络的“远”与“近”
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主题类型：社会现象类
主题词：人际交流缺失
主题词表达形式：lack of interpersonal communication, inadequate communication，the absence
of communication，lack of communication
图画描述句：people confine themselves into cramped rooms companied only by computers.
【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。
例如：Therebe句型+定语从句。
There are a lot of people who are confined by computers in the picture.
文章内容：
Embarrassed feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this drawing! As is shown above,
people confine themselves into cramped rooms companied only by computers.
Beyond doubt, it
explicitly pointed out that inadequate communication
exists as quite realistic negative power in
our growing course.
As is incisively depicted in the realistic drawing above, the appearance of lack of
communication is the corresponding social problem caused by excessively rapid development of
modern society. Indeed, the absence of communication
has become a heated topic. According to
recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters
suffer from lack of communication
. Who is to blame for the existence of inadequate
communication? In my opinion, the following three factors should definitely be counted in. On the
top of the causes might come the drive of interests. People always prefer things that benefit them.
Then comes the absence of responsibility. Some self- concentrated people just focus on individual
interest. Last but not the least, the defective legal system is also one of the reasons that make the
phenomenon of lack of interpersonal communication
exist.
Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the negative function of the absence of
the absence of communication
rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, we should enhance
our sense of social responsibility. Meanwhile, the authority should improve the imperfect social
system. With a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem of
lack of interpersonal communication
becomes things of the past
译文：
当我看到这幅 图片的时候羞愧的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海！如图所示，人们把自己局限
在一个个狭窄的空间内，只有电 脑陪伴在侧。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了人际交
流缺失在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的消 极影响。
正如上面这幅现实性的图片所描述的那样，我认为人际交流缺失
是现代社会过快发展 出
现的相应的社会问题。事实上，人际交流缺失
已经成为社会热议话题。根据中国社科院最近< br>发布的一项调查，五分之三的年轻人因人际交流缺失
而受到伤害。谁应该为人际交流缺失的
社会现象买单？在我看来，下列三个因素难咎其责。人际交流缺失
的出现首当其冲的是由于
利 益的驱动，人们经常倾向于对自己有利的事情。其次是责任的缺失。现代社会中那些习惯
凡事以自我为中 心的人只关注个人得失。最后，法律系统的不完善也是导致社会上出现了一
些人际交流缺失
现象 的一个原因。
从以上我们的讨论来看，人际交流缺失的消极作用出现在生活中的大事小事中。因而，< br>我们应该尽最大的努力不断提高社会责任感，抵挡住眼前的短暂利益诱惑。同时，政府完善
法律体 系和加强执法能力。伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，人际交流缺失
这个问题迟
早可以被解 决。
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