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就来和大家分享
一下这则托福写作思路,希望可以帮助大家备考!
俗话说,授之以鱼不如授之以渔,很多A和B比较的题
目与A or B
二选一的题目,实际上可以运用同一种思路进行分析,下面智课教育小
编通
过两道精选出来的托福作文,为各位考生解释。希望这则托福写作
思路解析可以帮助大家在考试中取得好
成绩!
1. Society benefits more from works of
great artists than
from political
leaders.
【题目解析】
读过此题之后,会发现这是一道A > B的题目,针对这种题
目,笔
者建议使用:先部分同意,在转折,最后递进的结构来进行写作。结合
题目来说就是,先
说 “社会能从艺术家的作品中获益,因为艺术作品可
以让人们放松,提高全民的审美和修养”,然后再
说“社会能够受益于
政治领导人,因为他们的决策会可以为人们营造健康的生存环境,提高
人们
的生活质量,”最后递进“到底艺术家还是领导人对社会影响大,
取决于社会的安定程度。”这种结构的
好处就在于,我们只需要在 A和
B两个面分别想一个理由即可,这样就降低了考生的思维难度,节省了
时间。
【全文结构梳理】
让步段:“社会能从艺术家的作品中获益,因为艺术作品可以
让人
们放松,提高全民的审美和修养”(Admittedly, society will
benefit
from the works of great artists, in
that the artistic work will make
us feel
relaxed and improve the public aesthetic view and
quality.
As we know, the classical works of
artists is the crystallization of
their wisdom,
which will enlighten the public. Take
Jane
Austen’s famous novels as an example. )
转折段:“社会能够受益于政治领导人,因为他们的决策会可以为
人们营造健康的生存环境,提高人们
的生活质量,”(However,
people will gain many benefits
from the political leaders, since
the policies
they made will create a healthy environment
and
thus improve the public quality of
life. It is self-evident that what
leaders
decides to do will exert an enormous impact on
every
one’s life. The implementation of Nine
Year Compulsory
Education Policy is a good case
in point. )
递进段:“到底艺术家还是领导人对社会影响大,取决于社会的发
展程
度。”(Judging from what has been discussed above, I
can
hardly agree that society benefits more
from works of great
artists than from political
leaders. From my perspective, it
depends on the
development of a society whether artistic
works
bring more benefits than political
leaders. To be specific, in a
well-developed
and stable society, the works of artist
will
definitely plays a greater role in people’
life, because they have
more free time to
appreciate these works. By contrast, as
for
people living in a underdeveloped and
turbulent society, the
policies of political
leaders more benefit the society )
2. Some
people have ambitious dreams and keep
following
them, but other people always focus
on realistic goals and try to
achieve them.
Which do you think is better?
【题目解析】
读完题目,会发
现这个题目与上题不同,这是一道二选一的题目,
我们同样可以用,让步,转折,递进的方式进行展开。
结合题目来说,
就是先让步说,“有远大理想是挺好的,因为可以不断激励自己进步,
开发一个
人的潜力,取得更大的成功”然后转折说“有现实的理想也挺
好的,因为较为容易实现,有助于增强自信
,不会有太大压力,有助于
身心健康”,最后递进说,“到底现实理想和远大理想哪个更好呢,取
决于年龄和性格”。
【全文思路梳理】
让步段:有远大理想是挺好的,因为可以不断激励自己
进步,开发
一个人的潜力,取得更大的成功(There is no doubt that
having an
ambitious dream is beneficial for the
sake of exploiting
people’s potential
capabilities and achieving a greater
success.
As is known to all, the higher one’s
goal is, the greater his
motivation will
become. Take Ma Yun as an example)
转折段:有现实的理想也挺
好,因为有助于增强自信,不会有太大
压力,有助于身心健康(However, it is
indisputable that a realistic
dream is also a
good choice, because we can build up
self-
confidence as well as endure less pressure. No one
can deny
that high pressure is a serious threat
to our psychological and
physical
health.)
递进段:到底现实理想和远大理想哪个更好呢,取决于年龄和性格(
In
the final analysis, I can hardly agree that
ambitious dreams are
much better than realistic
dreams. In my viewpoint, it depends
on the
personality and age of people which is better,
realistic or
ambitious ones. To be specific, as
for conservative and old
people, realistic
goals is a better option, because they can
gain
confidence. On the contrary, the ambitious
dreams are much
better for adventurous and
young people, because they want to
challenge
themselves and are eager for greater achievements.
)
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