2020九年级英语书面表达 Unit 12 如何写以“难忘的经历”为话题的文章.doc
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如何写以“难忘的经历”为话题的文章
【例文1】
生活
当中总是充满意外，有各种形形色色的经历，有倒霉的、开心、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的......,请你根据
下面提示以“An Unlucky Day”为题写一篇短文，描述自己的经历，并谈谈感受。
1.2019年6月7号早晨起来的时候意识到上学要迟到，空肚子跑去车站；
2.赶到车站时，班车已经开走了，因此走路去上学；
3.到学校后，发现把作业落在家里了；
4.语文课发卷子发现考试不及格，很沮丧；
5.回家时撞到一个老人
一．审题
体裁
话题
时态
人称
记叙文
以“幸运或不幸运的一天”为话题
一般过去时和过去完成时
第一人称
1. Make notes about these questions.
What was the date?
What happened
first?
Was this lucky or unlucky?Why?
What happened next?
How did the day
end?
How did you feel about this day?
二．文章布局
June 7th,2019
I woke up late.
Unlucky.
didn't eat breakfast; missed the
bus;walked to
school;left homework at
home;failed the Chinese exam
ran into an old
man
What an unlucky day it was!
开头:引出话题
The life is full of the unexpected. I still
remember
文章段
落结构
三．遣词造句
①词汇库
the unlucky day I have experienced..
正文：详细经历
got up late; rushed to the bus stop;walked to
school;left the
homework at home; failed the
exam; ran into an old man...
结尾：表达感受 What
an unlucky day it was!
出
乎意外的unexpected；睡过头oversleep；意识realize；发现find（；不）幸运
的luckyunlucky；经历experience；
记得remember；失败fail
②短语箱
在...以前by the time；赶到arrive
atin(reach)；撞到run into；充满be full of；各种各样的all kinds
of；起床
got up；匆忙赶到rush to；考试失败fail the
exams；迟到be late for
③链接句型
1. The life is
full of the unexpected.
2. When I got home, I
realized I had left my keys in the backpack.
3. By the time I got back to school, the bell
had rung.
4. Before I got to the bus stop, the
bus had already left.
5. I will always
remember the date...
6. This was the
luckiestunluckiest day of my life...
四．作文模板
Life is full of the unexpected. I still
remember the unlucky day I have experienced. It
happened on_______.
When I woke up that
morning, I realized I____________. By the time
I______________. I had
to______________.
ThenAfter that, I
found___________________.Unluckily,
I__________.Finally,__________.
What an
unlucky day it was!
五．参考范文
Life is full of the unexpected. I still remember
the unlucky day I have experienced. It happened on
June
7th,2019.
When I woke up that
morning, I realized I would be late for school. I
rushed out without breakfast. By the
time I
got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. I
had to walk to school. After getting into the
classroom, I found
I had left my homework at
home. Then,when I saw my Chinese exam report, I
was very upset because I hadn't
passed the
exam. I was sad the whole day. Finally, I ran into
an old man on my way home after school. Luckily,
he
was not badly hurt.
What an
unlucky day!
课后练习1
上个周末你经历了一次尴尬的购物，让你印象深刻。请你根据下面的提示，以“E
mbarrassing Shopping”为
题写一篇英语短文。
1.拿着清单去购物；
2.付账时发现没带钱包，回家拿钱包；
3.付完账回到家发现忘记买自己最爱的食物了。
【参考范文】
Life
is full of different kinds of experiences. I still
remember the embarrassing shopping I have
experienced. It
happened last weekend.
My mother asked me to go shopping. To begin with,
I wrote a shopping list on a piece of paper so
that I
wouldn't forget anything. Later I
quickly went to a supermarket and chose the things
according to the list. By the
time I realized
that I had left my wallet at home, I had put all
the things into the bag and been ready to pay for
them. So I had to rush home to get the wallet
and ran back to the supermarket. When I finally
got home, I found I
had forgotten to buy my
favorite food.
What an embarrassing
shopping!
如何写以“难忘的经历”为话题的文章
【例文1】
生活当中总是充满意外
，有各种形形色色的经历，有倒霉的、开心、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的......,请你根据
下面提示
以“An Unlucky Day”为题写一篇短文，描述自己的经历，并谈谈感受。
1.2019年6月7号早晨起来的时候意识到上学要迟到，空肚子跑去车站；
2.赶到车站时，班车已经开走了，因此走路去上学；
3.到学校后，发现把作业落在家里了；
4.语文课发卷子发现考试不及格，很沮丧；
5.回家时撞到一个老人
一．审题
体裁
话题
时态
人称
记叙文
以“幸运或不幸运的一天”为话题
一般过去时和过去完成时
第一人称
1. Make notes about these questions.
What was the date?
What happened
first?
Was this lucky or unlucky?Why?
What happened next?
How did the day
end?
How did you feel about this day?
二．文章布局
June 7th,2019
I woke up late.
Unlucky.
didn't eat breakfast; missed the
bus;walked to
school;left homework at
home;failed the Chinese exam
ran into an old
man
What an unlucky day it was!
开头:引出话题
The life is full of the unexpected. I still
remember
文章段
落结构
三．遣词造句
①词汇库
the unlucky day I have experienced..
正文：详细经历
got up late; rushed to the bus stop;walked to
school;left the
homework at home; failed the
exam; ran into an old man...
结尾：表达感受 What
an unlucky day it was!
出
乎意外的unexpected；睡过头oversleep；意识realize；发现find（；不）幸运
的luckyunlucky；经历experience；
记得remember；失败fail
②短语箱
在...以前by the time；赶到arrive
atin(reach)；撞到run into；充满be full of；各种各样的all kinds
of；起床
got up；匆忙赶到rush to；考试失败fail the
exams；迟到be late for
③链接句型
1. The life is
full of the unexpected.
2. When I got home, I
realized I had left my keys in the backpack.
3. By the time I got back to school, the bell
had rung.
4. Before I got to the bus stop, the
bus had already left.
5. I will always
remember the date...
6. This was the
luckiestunluckiest day of my life...
四．作文模板
Life is full of the unexpected. I still
remember the unlucky day I have experienced. It
happened on_______.
When I woke up that
morning, I realized I____________. By the time
I______________. I had
to______________.
ThenAfter that, I
found___________________.Unluckily,
I__________.Finally,__________.
What an
unlucky day it was!
五．参考范文
Life is full of the unexpected. I still remember
the unlucky day I have experienced. It happened on
June
7th,2019.
When I woke up that
morning, I realized I would be late for school. I
rushed out without breakfast. By the
time I
got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. I
had to walk to school. After getting into the
classroom, I found
I had left my homework at
home. Then,when I saw my Chinese exam report, I
was very upset because I hadn't
passed the
exam. I was sad the whole day. Finally, I ran into
an old man on my way home after school. Luckily,
he
was not badly hurt.
What an
unlucky day!
课后练习1
上个周末你经历了一次尴尬的购物，让你印象深刻。请你根据下面的提示，以“E
mbarrassing Shopping”为
题写一篇英语短文。
1.拿着清单去购物；
2.付账时发现没带钱包，回家拿钱包；
3.付完账回到家发现忘记买自己最爱的食物了。
【参考范文】
Life
is full of different kinds of experiences. I still
remember the embarrassing shopping I have
experienced. It
happened last weekend.
My mother asked me to go shopping. To begin with,
I wrote a shopping list on a piece of paper so
that I
wouldn't forget anything. Later I
quickly went to a supermarket and chose the things
according to the list. By the
time I realized
that I had left my wallet at home, I had put all
the things into the bag and been ready to pay for
them. So I had to rush home to get the wallet
and ran back to the supermarket. When I finally
got home, I found I
had forgotten to buy my
favorite food.
What an embarrassing
shopping!