雅思小作文总结
数字对联-课堂教学评价表
雅思小作文总结
一、评分标准
（1）任务完成情况：趋势描写，数据支持，不要画蛇添足
（2）关联词大量而准确地使用（连贯）
（3）词汇
（4）句子结构
二、写作要求
（1）客观性
不能有想象成分，总结归纳要符合逻辑。
（2）准确性
数据要求精确（不抄错），可以合理目测（大概数值）。
（3）详尽性
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br>4类特征数据一定介绍：最大值（maximum），最小值（minimum），交叉点（inters
ection），变化趋势（trend）。
三、作文类型
Line graph
Pie chart
Bar chart
70%
Table
Flow graphprocess diagram
20%
Others 10%
四、解题技巧
A. 表格图
1横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势
2纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势 3无
需将每一个数据分别说明，突出强调数据最
大值和最小值，对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的
说明：考察例举数字的能力和方法。注意怎
样通过举一些有
代表性的数据
来有效地说明问题。
B.
线图
1极点说明: 对图表当中最高的，最低的点要单独进行说明
2趋势说明:
对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升，下降，波动，持平
3交点说明:
对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明
说明：关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势，学会general
classification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个
阶段式的总分类，使写作层
次清晰。接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依
据
。
注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据！
C.
饼状图
1介绍各扇面及总体的关系 2各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间，不同地点的比较
3重点突出特点最
明显的扇面：最大的，最小的，互相成倍的
D. 柱状图
1.比较: similarity 2.对比: difference)
3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征
4，有年份的可按照线图的写作方法。
E.
流程图
1．
首先说明：做什么工作的过程，目的是什么 2． 准备工作 3． 按时间过程先后描述 4． 结果
5．简单总结
说明：注意流程图里的
“因果关系”
或每一流程的
“承前启后
”
关系；表达每一流程的主体内容，阐明这种关系；
揭示其内在联系或规律；最后，给予简要归
纳和总结。
F.
实物器具工作过程
1．
实物的名称，功能 2． 基本结构 3． 工作过程 4． 简单总结
G.
综合图
1不求甚解，不拘泥于细节2分门别类，分段落详细介绍各个图表
3不画蛇添足，主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系
H．地图
1.历史变迁图描述不同年份的场景变化，记住实用方位词。并注意按照空间顺序描述。
2.选址题描述图中备选地点的地理优缺点。
五、写作方法
混合图：
六、写作模板
开头段句式：
tablechartdiagramgraph shows (that)...
figuresstatistics show (that)...
diagram
shows describes illustrates how...
toAs (is)
shown in theAs can be seen from the tablechart,
diagram, graph, figures
can be seenobserved
from the we can see from the…
is clear
apparent from the tablechartdiagramgraphfigures
(that)...
三种描述趋势的句式
1. There
wasiswill be + aan + 形容词 +变化名词 + in the
numberpercentage of + 被描述
对象 + 时间
. There
was a sharp increasedecrease in the number of TV
audiences from 12pm to 2 pm.
2. The
numberpercentage of 被描述对象 + 变化动词 + 副词 + 数据 + 时间
. The number of TV audiences rose sharply from
6am to 8am.
3. 时间段 + witnessseeexperience +
aan + 形容词 + 变化名词 + in the numberpercentage of
被描述对象
. The period between 10am and 12pm
witnesses a moderate growth in the number of
people in
the station, with the number
reaching 280 at midday.
The next hours see a
dramatic rise in the number again.
描述最高点、最低点
1. 被描述对象 + reach its highest point peakbottom
at + 数据 + 时间
. At 4pm, the number reaches its
bottom at 100.
At 8am, it reached its
highest point at 25%.
2. peaking at bottoming
at + 数据
. After that, the number increased
sharply until 1998, peaking at 20,700.
比较两个对象
The numberpercentage of 被描述对象1 + wasiswill be
+ (muchslightly) +
largerhigherlowersmaller +
than + that of 被描述对象2.
. The number of
business was higher than that for visits to
friends and relatives.
However, for the
rest of the day, the percentage
三个及以上的对象比较
被描述对象 + hashadwill have + the
largesthighestlowestsmallest + numberpercentage of
+ 项目 + inamong 范围
. USA had the highest
quality of life in the five countries.
Other
reasons had the smallest percentage in the four
reasons.
连接手段
1. Then from this time
onwards from then on
There was a rise. Then
the number went down...
2. After before
There was a rise, before the number went down.
After a rise, there was a decrease, before the
number remained stable.
3. …which was
followed bywhich led towhich preceded an
increasedecrease
There was a rise, which
was followed by a decrease.
4.
上一句最后时间词，when...
There was a rise in
the number of teachers from数据in年份to数据in年份, when
the number
went down.
5.
Again（第二次以后的上升下降）
There was a rise. Again, the
number went down.
6.
However...then...（上升和下降之间）
There was a rise.
However, the number then went down.
7、其他关联词：类比、对比、句子衔接
However compare to in
contrast similarly conversely while
Similarlylikewise
As to in term of as for
流程图模板
七、各种图表描述注意事项
WRITING TASK 1：
You should spend
about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart and
graph below give information about sales and share
prices for Coca-Cola.
Summarize the
information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
?
范文：
The pie chart shows
the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola
in the year 2000
and the graph shows the
change in share prices between 1996 and 2001.
In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of
billion cases of their fizzy drink product
worldwide. The largest consumer was North
America, where per cent of the total volume was
purchased. The second largest consumer was
Latin America. Europe and Asia purchased and per
cent of the total volume respectively, while
Africa and the Middle East remained fairly small
consumers at 7 per cent of the total volume of
sales.
Since 1996, share prices for Coca-
Cola have fluctuated. In that year, shares were
valued
at approximately $$35. Between 1996 and
1997, however, prices rose significantly to $$70
per
share. They dipped a little in mid-1997
and then peaked at $$80 per share in mid-98. From
then
until 2000 their value fell consistently
but there was a slight rise in mid-2000.
WRITING TASK 1：
You should spend
about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart
shows the division of household tasks by gender in
Great Britain.
Write a report for a university
lecture describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Source: Office for National
Statistics on behalf of the Controller of Her
Majesty's Stationery Office.
Study these three
sentences and then write three similar sentences
about other parts of the chart.
1?Women
spend?over twice as much time?doing kitchen tasks
as men.
2?Men spend 30 minutes a day doing
kitchen tasks?whereas while?women spend 74
minutes a day.
3?Women are?more active?in the
kitchen?than?men (74 minutes a day for women?as
opposed to?30 minutes for
men).
Sample Report
The chart shows
the average number of minutes per day men and
women in Great Britain spend
on jobs around
the house.
In total, men spend
just?over?two-and-a-half hours on household tasks
whereas women spend
slightly?lessthan four
hours. Women spend more than?twice?as much time
doing kitchen tasks
such as cooking and
washing up?as?men (74 minutes for women as
opposed?to?30 minutes for men.
Women are also
more active in cleaning the house- it takes 58
minutes of their day compared?to
with?13
minutes for men - and childcare, where women put
in more than twice as?much?time
as men.
On the other hand, men are?more?active in
gardening and pet care, where they spend twice
as?long?as women, and maintenance and DIY, on
which they spend 15 minutes more?than?women.
Women account for almost all the time spent on
washing and ironing clothes. This takes them
25 minutes,?while whereas?men spend just 2
minutes on this task.
Overall the figures
show that women spend more time on routine
domestic chores than men,?while
whereas?men
do more household maintenance, gardening and pet
care.
WRITING TASK 1：
You should
spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The map
below shows the development of the village of
Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
You
should write at least 150 words.
This report compares how the village of
Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year
of 1995.
As is clearly described in
the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city
which was divided
into three parts by two
roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing
port on the sea,
with a fish market located in
the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A
block of shops
was situated on the opposite
side of the market…
In the second
picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing
port has been removed and the
fish market is
replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also
occupy the place of the shops
on the roadside.
Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east
of the hotel. In addition,
Overall, based
on the brief description above, it is clear that
the general layout of the
village does not
change a lot, while some newly-built facilities
and housing has ornamented
the small village.
WRITING TASK 1：
You should
spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The
diagram below shows the process by which bricks
are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting
and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons
where relevant
You should
write at least 150 words.
The process by which bricks are manufactured
for the building industry can be outlined in
seven consecutive steps. First the raw
material, clay, which was just below the surface
of
soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be
dug up by a digger.
Then the lumps of
clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break
up the big chunks of clay
into much smaller
areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a
roller, whose motion further
segregates the
bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a
homogenous mixture, which
is then either
formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pie
Those fresh bricks are then kept
in a drying
oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours,
several dozens if not hundreds
of bricks at a
time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a
so-called kiln, another type
of high
temperature oven. First they are kept at a
moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300 ℃.
This
process is followed by cooling down the finished
bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling
chamber.
Once the bricks have cooled
down and have become hard, they get packaged and
delivered to
their final destination, be it a
building site or storage.