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历年高考完形填空常用词汇总结
动词类：
1“看” look看的动作 see看的结果：
watch观察
observe为了研究进行的观察
Notice注意catch sight of看见
stare好奇地看
glare瞪着看
Glance瞅见glimpse瞥见
see a film
watch TV

2“说” telll sth to sb.=tell sb sth告诉的内容
talk with sb about sth强调说话者之间的交流
Say sth诉说的内容
speak in English说的语言
whisper sth to sb 耳语
Inform sb of sth 通知某人某事
reason talkpersuade sb into doing sth 说服某人做某事
Bargain讨价还价
chat聊天
repeat重复
explain解释
warn警告
remind提醒
Discuss 讨论
debate辩论
figure 指出
declare宣布
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claim自称
mention 提起
admit 承认
deny 否绝
describe描述
announce 公布
introduce 介绍
complain抱怨

3“叫” cry哭叫
call叫
shout大喊
scream尖叫
moan呻吟
sigh叹气
quarrel大吵

4“问” ask 询问
interview 采访
express表达
question审问

5“答” answer回答
respond回应(用其他方式回应)
reply回复

6 “听” listen to听的动作
hear听的结果
pick up收听
overhear无意听到
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7“写” dictate听写
write sth 写
describe描写
drop a line 写信
draw画
take downwrite down写下，记下

8“拿放” take拿走
bring拿来
hold举着
carry扛，挑 （无方向性）
fetch拿来拿去
lift举
Put放
lay 铺放置
pull拉push推

9“抓” take hold of 抓着
seize紧抓
grasp 握住
scratch 抠

10“打” hit一次性的打击
beat不间断的打击
strike突然的击打突然想到
blow吹刮
attack攻击

11“扔” throw扔
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drop掉 放弃 错过
fall 倒下无意掉下来
wave 招手
shake摇

12“送” send寄送
deliver递送
give给
offer 主动给予
see off给某人送行

13“摸抱” touch摸
fold折叠
embrace拥抱
hug抱
hold 握
in one’s arms

14“踢碰” kick踢
knock敲
tip 轻敲

15“行” walk
run
climb
jump
skip 单腿跳
slip溜
comego
enter进入
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move搬迁
drive开车
ride 骑
fly
crawl 匍匐前进

坐” sit down
be seated
seat oneself
take a seat
stand站，耸立
lean斜靠

睡休息” lie
on one’s back
on one side
on one’s stomach
stay in bed
have a rest
take a nap打盹
be asleep
bend
turn over翻身
rest

笑” smile 微笑（不出声）
laugh
burst into laughter
burst out laughing

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19“哭” cry
shed tears 留泪
weep呜咽地哭
sob抽泣
burst into tears
burst out crying
20“找查” find找到
look for正在找过程
find out查明
discoverexplore 发现探索
hunt for
search for
seek
seek for
in search of寻找
Search sb 搜身
search sp. for sth 为某物而搜寻某地
Check检查，核实
examine 考察发现问题体检
test检测，检验
inspect视察

21“穿” put on 动作
wear穿戴
have on试穿
be dressed in 穿的状态
make-up化装
get changed换衣服
be in red
Take off 脱
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remove 去除

22“吃喝” eatdrink
sip吮吸
have a meal
have supper
toast
taste
treat sb to请某人吃
help oneself to 随便吃

23“得” get
obtain
acquire获得知识和技能
gain
possess

24“失” lose 丢了
be lost
be missing人错过失踪，不见
gone不见（物）
great loss
die
die off相继死去
die away 逐渐消失

25“有” have 有
own是自己的
conquer征服
occupy占有=possess
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26“无” nothing left
the remaining thing
disappear
be missing gone

27“增减” rise
go up
drop
raise 人主动抬价
bring down
reduce
increase
decrease
28“买卖” buy
purchase
afford
pay
pay off
pay for
sell
on sale
bargain
Bill
cheque
cash
credit card
notes
coins
discounts

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29“存在消失”come into being
exist
appear
survive
live
show
turn up
Disappear die
die out
pass away
be out of sight

30“变化” develop
improve
become
grow
go+ bad wrong sour without（ negative adj.）
turn + colour
change change into
reform

31“认识的过程”feel
sense
guess
suppose
wonder
doubt
know learn
realize
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Understand
remember
be familiar with
recall
recite
apply to

32“成功失败”make it
succeed
make progress
come true
realize one’s dream
win
Lose
fail to do
failure
defeat
suffer loss beat
turn sth. Into reality

33“努力” try manage
make efforts
attempt
do ones best
do as much as one can to do

34祝贺 congratulations on sb
celebrate
observe 庆祝
get together 聚会
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35赞美批评 praise
think highly of
blame sb for sth
sb is to blame
criticize
scold sb. for sth.
have a low opinion of sb
Speak ill of

36喜恶 like
love
be fond of
be keen on
be crazy about
adore
be into
prefer enjoy
in favor of
Dislike
hate
be awfuldisgusting
ignore
turn off

37判断 think
believe
consider
find
feel

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conclude
infer
doubt

38到达 arrive at
reach
return to
get to
stay in sp
visit
leave
leave for
on one’s way to
upon one’s arrival
on doing sth

39受伤 hurt
injured
wound
cut
kill
drown
bleed
get burnt
suffer from
suffer a loss

40损坏 damage
destroy
ruin
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break down
be broken
crash

41修复 repair
rebuild
restore
fix
recover oneself

42支持反对 agree
disagree
accept
receive
refuse
turn down
be against
elect
vote for against

43 做饭 cook
wash
cut
chop
boil
fry
steam
make
mix
clean
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brush
cover uncover
cooker

44 建议 advise
suggest
recommend
urge
propose
demand
persuade 说服

45 花费 sthdoing sth+cost
sb+spend+ in doing sth
Sb+afford +nto do sth
It +take some time moneyenergy +to do sth
sb+ pay+$$ for sth.
at one’s expense

46 省存钱 save save up
set aside put away
spare no effort time

47 参加 take part in
join join in
attend
compete in foragainst

48控告 accuse sb. of
charge sb. With
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49 救治 help help out
save rescue sb from sth.
Treat过程
cure 结果
sb. Of sth
Aid sb in doing sth to do sth
help sb with sth
assist sb in doing sth
50敬佩 admire
respect
show respect forto
adore
envy be jealousy
in honor of

51逃避 ran away
escape from
flee
hide

52 阻止禁止 prevent keep stop doing sth
forbid doing sth.
Ban
prohibit

53 对付处理 handle do with deal with tackle overcome sth
solve
settle

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54 效仿 copy
imitate
learn from
learn

54 爆发发生 come about
happen to
take place
break out
burst out
go off
explosion

55安装装备 fasten
fix
set
equip
be armed with 用什么武装
be equipped with装备有

56 追求 pursuit
ran after
seek after
chase
catch up with赶上
keep up with跟上

57 想考虑 think of 考虑+as把什么看成
think about想起
consider
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think over仔细考虑
be concerned 担心
be considerate towards sb.

58 打算 plan intend design to do
be going to do be about to do will do

59 似乎好象 seem
appear look like
as if
as though

60 开办关闭 open
start
set up
closeclose up
end
close down

名词类
1假期vacation holiday
spring break
ask for leave
be on holiday
have two days off

2旅游 trip
journey
tour
voyage
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travel
tourist
passenger
go campingpicnickinghiking

3职务人员 clerk
secretary
passer-by friend
minister
manager
waitress
guest
host
hostess
Assistant
customer
adult
neighbor
relative
patient vet
staff
crew
nurse
teacher
Conductor
tailor
sailor
inventor
gardener
guard
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4餐馆定餐就餐 inn
restaurant
kitchen
menu
bill
order
tip
fork and knife
reserve book table
Taste delicious
salad
dash
vegetables
fruit
tray
napkin

5诊所看病服药 clinic
hospital
take one’s temperature
take medicinepills
have a feverfluheadache
doctor physician
surgeon
specialist
patient

6车站机场 airport
on board
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miss the trainbus
catch a train
meet sb.

7身体部位 arm
head
hair
brain
waist
back
shoulder
pulse
wrist

8意志 will
courage
patience
determination
faith
effort
confidence
ambition
energy

9才能品质 talent
gift
ability
potential
intelligent
promising
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smart
stupid
careful
proud
Strict
honest
cold
serious
easy-going
learned
knowledgeable

10优缺点 advantage
disadvantage
strength
weakness

11目标 aim
goal
intention
purpose
belief
faith

12方式 means
method
way
manner
approach

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13身体素质 strong
weak
pale
sick
ill
be well
keep slim fit
cut weightput on weight

14图表 photo
picture graph drawing
table linebar graph
pie chart
draw a sketch 划草图

15文章 reading
translation
essay
poem
paper
novelfiction
article
magazine
newspaper
journal 日志
diary日记
Files
form
make a list of

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16课堂class
course
lecture
example
reason
message
notes
words
phrase
scholarship
degree
Subject
question
trouble
difficulty
grades
read
comment
marks

17 学校活动 match
game
activity
hold a meeting debate speech ceremony

18建议观点 advice
suggestion
idea
proposal
view
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recommandation

19气候天气 climate
weather
storm
windy
cloudy
rainy
snow
hot
cold
freezing
heat
warmth

20交通 by trainbus boat
bike
on the trainbus a bike
drive a car
ride a bike
give sb. a liftride

21习惯 habit
custom
get used to
regular有规律的（形容词）
practice惯例（名词）

22感觉 sight
hearing
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touch
smell
sense

23情感 feeling
emotion
anger
delight
sadness
sorrow

24 财富 money
Possessions
wealth
belongings
fortunes
treasure
diamond
be richwell-off

25 运动比赛 on the playground
on the track and filed
pitch
event
game
match
sports player
Coach
judge
jogging
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weightlifting
play volleyballsoccer

26衣服 clothes, cloth, clothing
clothes统指各种衣服，谓语动词永远是复数，
cloth指布，为不可数名词
clothing 服装的总称，指一件衣服用a piece of, an article of

27事件 incident, accident
incident指小事件,
accident指不幸的事故

形容词类
1人的各种感受
乐happy
delighted
to one’s joy
pleased
amused

悲 sad
unhappy
painful
bitter

平静 calm
quiet
silentstill
peaceful

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烦bother
bored
be fed up with

震惊 surprised
astonished
shocked
amazed

怕 in fear
be frightened
scared
afraid

失望desperate
disappointed
hopeless
be depressed

满意be satisfied with
be content to do

生气 Annoyed
angry
disgusting
burst into rage

表程度的副词类
narrowly
Nearly almost
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hardly hard
extremely very
very quite
Accidently once in a while
occasionaly once
far by far
Farther further
better worse
be well good
however thereforesothus
….
易考的近义词组
Run manage
grow plant
leaveremain
fit suit match
Hit beatstrike
meet satisfy
touch feel
play performer
Contain hold seat fill
liesitlocate
helpwork do
Fall sink drop
matter problem trouble
money account
Cause reason
that’s why that’s because
because since,as for
Last continue
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keep stay
treat cure operate
separate divide
Stand beartoleratehold t
urnbecomego
changevaryrange
Providesupplyoffer givesend

高考英语作文：提高写作分数的88个词组
1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高 稳步增长the remarkable improvement steady growth of
people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern draw public attention
8.不可否认 It is undeniable that… There is no denying that…
9.热烈的讨论 争论 a heated discussion debate
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…
13. 就我而言 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…
18.对…必不可少 be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
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20.…也不例外 …be no exception
21.对…产生有利不利的影响 exert positive negative effects on…
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。
23.导致，引起 lead to give rise to contribute to result in
24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 成就感 sense of responsibility sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济心理负担 financial burden psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33. 对…有益 be beneficial conducive to…
34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可非议 blameless beyond reproach
39.致力于 投身于 be committed devoted to…
40. 应当承认 Admittedly,
41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42. 满足需求 satisfy meet the needs of…
43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保(的) environmental protection environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞速更新 the ever- accelerated updating of science and technology
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51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前后种观点的人 people those in fovor of the former latteropinion
53.有 提供如下理由 证据 have provide the following reasons evidence
54.在一定程度上 to some extent degree in some way
55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…
57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest short- term interest
59.长远利益. interest in the long run
60.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。
63.对…有害 do harm to be harmful to be detrimental to
64.交流思想 情感 信息 exchange ideas emotions information
65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with catch up with keep abreast with the latest development
of …
66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth。
67.…的健康发展 the healthy development of …
68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。
No garden without weeds。
69.对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person。
70.重视 attach great importance to…
71.社会地位 social status
72.把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…
73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75.有直接间接关系 be directly indirectly related to…
76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
77. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion belief that
78.缓解压力 减轻负担 relieve stress burden
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79.优先考虑发展… give (top) priority to sth。
80.与…比较 compared with… in comparison with
81. 相反 in contrast on the contrary。
82.代替 replace substitute take the place of
83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis cannot hold water
84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, There is no doubt that…
87.增进相互了解 enhance promote mutual understanding
88.充分利用 make full use of take advantage of

高考英语作文万能模板
高考作文万能模板：图标作文
As is shown by the figurepercentage in the tablepicture，____ has been on rise decrease，
significantlydramatically risingdecreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the
sharp risedecline in the chart， it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand， ____.In the other
hand， _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition， ______ is responsible for _____.
Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above
mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned， I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is
both sound and well-grounded.

书信作文模板
Your addressMonth， Date， yearReceiver's addressDear …，
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you
that_____.
……
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenienceI am looking
f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
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Best regards for your health and ely yours，

话题作文
Nowadays， there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there
been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is ______. Besides，_____. The third one is _____. To sum up， the main
cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，
_____. For another thing， _____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

对比观点作文
(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为。。。
2. 另一些人认为。。。
3. 我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are
two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the
reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③ -------------理由二). Moreover,
④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.
Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly
(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that
⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.
For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think
②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不
同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).
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Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主
题的看法).

阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义).
Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明).
Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore ,
------------------(理由三).

解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.
First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally,
--------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a
bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度
(利或 弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
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3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally,
its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides
-------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important
disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A
的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.
Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it
reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对
前景的预测).)

现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.
There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason
is____________________.
what is m ore_________________________.thirdly______________ ____________.As a
result_______________.
Considering all there,________________________.For one
thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.
一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸 、日常生活的很多角落，
都有越来越多的关于A的议论。
给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易 事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、
社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样 描述A…
A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视
的不良影响。
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认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会世界 健康的不利有很 多。首先，从最直观的角
度来看，A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和 环境的平
衡) 。(举例)。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的
是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的
法则和 空间。
事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中
付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面
的利益，而从 未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不
去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出 狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。
而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害， 我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我
们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决， 唯有这样，避免它带
来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
One object or phenomenon (negative significance inclination.)
A has attracted extensive attention of the society. Nowadays, increasingly more
argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of
our everyday life.
Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society
and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly. Generally speaking ,we can
describe A as follows:…….
A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful
influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world. It seems to have a strange power
to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly. The essence of these wrong actions is:
(1) to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging
others’ long-term and overall interest;
(2) to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.
Situating under the shadow of A, individuals organizations and violate natural law merely
to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests. However, the result may turn out to be loss of
really important and valuable resource or ability.
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We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful
influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development
of the whole society.
Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems
brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material
production. Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.
Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our
solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem. We must acquire our power
from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively eliminate the shadow of A,
and ensures ourselves a bright future.

议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known
that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people
think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as
follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二
_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people
hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一
_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点
二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.
It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more
________.

(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact,
there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is
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widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And
secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, 讨论议题______ is no
exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______.
In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and
reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make
a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is
really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some
measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all,
__途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___
途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of
various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that
is to say, ____方法_____.

( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: 谚语_______
value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying
can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great
of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of
people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The
more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our
daily study and job..
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图表作文的框架
as is shownindicatedillustrated by the figurepercentage in the
table(graphpicturepiechart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise decrease
(goe supincreasesdropsdecreases),significantlydramatica llysteadily risingdecreasing
from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharpmarked decline rise in the chart, it
goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one
hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.
In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other
reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above
mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure
my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

实用性写作(申请信 )
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. to see your advertisement for the position in ....
And I would like to write a letter to tell you that... I am confident that I am suitable for the kind
of the job you are advertising.
... I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On
the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will
greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience I am looking forward to
your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
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X X X

最新六年高考英语满分作文及评析
2009高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英 国人家里。今天你的房
东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken
with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this
afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning
as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you
could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are
home. She has already told Susan about this ,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，
生活型的原则。 行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲
类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译 ，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因
此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面 ，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

【江苏卷】
【试题回放】鼠标是计算 机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机
操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带 来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下
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表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……
编辑文本，搜索信息……
鼠标的便捷性

收发邮件，选购商品……
点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……
点播音乐，下载电影……
如果过分依赖鼠标…… （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone
surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the
screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test,
browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and
PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a
positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge
pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on
mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
【名师点评】本 文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点
逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条 翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用
词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。

2008高考英语满分作文
【全国卷】
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【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关 注三
年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请
根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍；2、 祝贺苏琳生日；3、 感谢工作人员；4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。
例文：
Dear SirMadam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three
years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been
watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy
birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her
parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in
advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍；2.信息来源；3.祝贺生日；4.感谢照顾；5.索取照片；6.合适的结尾。 这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达
到位。文章 行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对
美方人员的感激之情，以及 希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，
结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕 迹，的确是一篇佳作。
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好词
好句
英汉互译
ted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 s v.表达 birth to v.产生，生育
I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard
work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in
the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力
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工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
评析：定语从句的使用。


【江苏卷】
【试题回放】实现有效 的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。
请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇 题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听 表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系
家长倾听孩子
谁来倾听 老师倾听学生
同学相互倾听
怎样倾听
注意：
1、
2、
3、
对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
理解孩子，消除代沟，……
了解学生，满足需求，……
增进友谊，互帮互学，……
（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal
relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will
understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more
to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good
relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will
help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never
stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a
knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word,
good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
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Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用 排比句型，不但准确流畅地表
达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的 文采。第三段
中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致；而第四段中用< br>一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

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好词
英汉互译
e v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟
4. open-minded adj. 虚心的
好句 1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn
from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。
评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。
2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.
我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。
评析：复合句的使用。

【湖北卷】
【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问 题，要
求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，
无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1. 词数为100左右；
2. 参考词汇：配件—— spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20
th
Apr.2008 at
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Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then
I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three
months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said
since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was
so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you
send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【名师点评】
本 文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情
况，中间部分说明了无 法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，
明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表 达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为
基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整
严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on
hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。
积累卡片
好词
好句
英汉互译
1. disappointment n.失望 ate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅
To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was
impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。
评析：复杂句的组织； to my disappointment, 常用短语。

2007高考英语满分作文
【全国卷II】
【试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文
字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米；
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2.房间及价格：单人间（共20间），100元／天；双人间（共15间），1 50元／天；热水
淋浴；3.餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；4.游泳池：全天免费开 放； 5.
欢迎预定。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of
which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms,
with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy
both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The
swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to
you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首 先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使
文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交 代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使
用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错 的满分作文。
积累卡片
好词
好句
英汉互译
1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【安徽卷】
【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创 办一份中学生英文刊物，该
校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所 友好学校准
备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
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l 表示赞成。
l 提出你喜欢的栏目。
l 简要说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4. 参考栏目：栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great!
And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say,
“culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts
of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a
wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn
English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The
popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss
it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽 省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏
低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的 大胆使用，让
人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不< br>是一朝一夕所能写出来的。
比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和
trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书
写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

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【江苏卷】
【试题回放】2007年4月 29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大
中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100 万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们 讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关
情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at
improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11: April 29，2007 in many
primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province
participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work
healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even
though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do
exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program
now!
Thank you!
【名师点评】
本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段 叙述，后
一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟
语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
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积累卡片
好词 v.发动 v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and
can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
评析：虚拟语气。

【重庆卷】
【试题回放】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后处于极度 的痛苦
之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 信的格式已为你写好
2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung
cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a
promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is
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reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort
letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In
that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear
that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的 使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行
文自然而通顺，值得学习。
积累卡片
好词e v.意识到e v.允诺 v.捐赠
好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.
我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧！
好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
2006高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你 希望成为
其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供
最佳服务
注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯；生词：申请
—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer
Dear Sir Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My
name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a
volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am
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ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games
will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
这篇文章写得非 常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志
愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己 的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一
定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

[全国卷II]
【试题回放】
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内
容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意：
1、字数100左右
2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯
3、开头语已为你写好
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the
teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.
it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.
There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only
the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time,
and keep them for at most ten days.
Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are
interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
[名师点评]
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本文最大的特点是描 绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句
读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的 三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的
图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢？

【安徽卷】
【试题回放】
假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，
刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请
他帮助寄回词 典。信的主要内容如下：
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助
一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵
词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上
邮资自己付
注意：
1、词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
2、参考词汇：邮资-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you
make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very
much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book
may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very
grateful if you show your warmness again.
I’m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名师点评]
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本文作为信件，首先 其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示
出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候， 情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定
语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

【重庆卷】
【试题回放】
加拿大高中生David在互联网Inter net上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学
习中国的语言，文化culture。
假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
你怎样得知David的愿望
你愿意成为他的朋友
你打算如何帮助他
你盼望他的回复
注意：
1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好
2、字数：100词左右
3、在答题卡上作答
Dear David,
I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to
search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I’m your good
choice.
China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our
culture is the access to understand us better.
There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I’ll be looking forward to your
reply. I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.
Yours sincerely ,
Li hua
[名师点评]
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本文的语言非常流畅 ，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层
次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调
和吸引注意的目的。


2005高考英语满分作文
[全国卷I]
【试题回放】 < br>假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上
一则广告引起 了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一
封电子邮件，询问有关情况。
注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee






Dear SirMadame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for
students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places
listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to



know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at
the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
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[名师点评]
本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中 首先把握了全部的要点，叙
述较为完整；其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文 章中采用了
第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。
[全国卷Ⅲ]（四川、云南、陕西等地区用）
【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文 报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。
以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨 论结果。
赞成迁出： 反对迁出：
1．游客多，交通堵塞 1．建于1906年，中外闻名
2．郊区环境好 2．搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意：1．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。


2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇： 郊区—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo
should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say
large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once
moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other
students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100
years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s
more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which
has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确，清楚展 示了主题。先提出了
文章的主题，进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后又给出了反面的观 点，
论据十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后连贯。

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2004高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I】
【试题回放】
假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”
才艺大赛。你的美 国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以
下要点给他写信告知此事，并 表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台
注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent
show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent
Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are
in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent,
and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV
station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more
than glad to help.
Yours
,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
从整体上说， 本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的
主要特点是让步状语从句的使用 ，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来
时使用。
【全国卷II】
【试题回放】
假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith
将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：
1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天
注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrange
Dear Andy,
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I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to
express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.
In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms,
reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about
school life, and so on.
In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has
changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.
At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure
you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
[名师点评]
本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当， 重点突出。从语言使用的
角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然 ，又使用
了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。

[浙江卷]
【试题回放】
假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中 文,请你推荐
两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.

收词（字）
20,000（汉语）
价格
特点

参考词汇:
· 推荐 recommend （V.）
· 英汉汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary （ECCED）
52元
大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者
11元
中国最常用的汉语字典
英汉汉英词典
18,000（英语）
10,000
新华字典
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· 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary （XD）
Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.
I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.
The English- ChineseChinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has
18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes
telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it
has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.
Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.
Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.
Yours,
Li
Yue
[名师点评]本文要完成的是书信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式， 但是不能遗漏要点。
本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅 而连
贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。

[广东卷]
【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨
天晚上邻居看足 球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程（如：你向邻居
提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等 。）
注意：1. 词数：80—120
2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程
About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor
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shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying
and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go
my neighbor.
I knocked at his door and said,
TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
“Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said
politely.
“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
[名师点评]
这篇文章从整体上来看，内容 完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上，用平实的
语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长 短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，
让人有种身临其境的感觉。

【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或 较高级词汇所致；具备较
强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所
致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
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第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
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