2020年高考英语作文冲刺训练
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2020年高考英语作文冲刺训练
【名师精讲写作高分技巧，值得下载练习】
高三下学期，写作如何进行
？我个人的做法就是，把课标主题和教材单元话题结
合并分类，然后从近四年的模考卷中挑选适合的题目
进行练习。我们要做的是：
1.每个话题下的材料最好多样化，譬如：新闻、说明、记叙、议论。角度
越多越
好，不能单一。
2.努力总结每个角度的写作方法，形成个人的写作风格，譬如我一般
用什么思维
拓展，造句可有什么“程咬金三板斧”。
下面我来示范一下，希望对读者有启发，但愿考生能成功应对，这是我最大的心
愿。
话题一：性格与品质
这个话题下的思维发散围绕：六“力”： 智力（intelligen
ce）、能力（ability）、动
力（motivation）、潜力（potential）、体
力（strength）、想象力（imagination）。一
个人的性格和品质都无非是以上六个
方面的拓展，剩下要解决的就是找到相关的
表达。
示范一：热情的重要性
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
The
hardworking and never-give-up attitude of
Malaysian badminton star Lee Chong
Wei has won
many people’s hearts.
The 36-year-old player is already a veteran of
the badminton world. Despite this, he
doesn’t
want to call it a day. At the moment, nose cancer
is keeping him out of the
game.
At a press
conference earlier this month, Lee said that he
hopes to return to badminton
next year and to
compete in his fifth Olympic Games held in Tokyo
in 2020. “It’s
going to be tough to fight for
the gold medal, but I will try my very best
because it’s
always my dream,” he said.
Although Lee is one of the world’s greatest
players, he
has never won a badminton world
championship. So if health permits, he will
continue to compete because he wants an
Olympic gold. Besides his great
determination,
his other drive is his passion for the sport. “One
of the most important
things in life to him is
badminton,” Lee’s coach Misbun Sodik told the New
Straits
Times.
After two months of
cancer treatment that caused eating and sleeping
problems,
recently Lee began a little
training.
【写作内容】
1.
用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2.
综合上述信息，用约120个单词谈一谈“热情对于一个人事业成功的重要性”
及其理由。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. The hardworking and
never-give-up attitude… has won many people’s
hearts.
2. nose cancer
3. compete in his
fifth Olympic Games
成句：
The 36-year-old
badminton player, Lee Chong Wei, is admired by
many people. With
his passion for badminton,
he is still determined to compete for an Olympic
gold
medal despite nose
cancer.
技能说明：
1.学会转换：win one’s hearts相当于be
admired by
2.对主干增添方式和让步状语在励志类文章是常见的，一般有：withby
结构和
despite结构。
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
1.克服困难--》 strong-minded, efforts, overcome
difficulties --》（逆向）otherwise,
lose heart
2.成功动力--》 motivation, success --》 (因果)
potential, ability
3.创造环境--》 friendly
environment --》（因果）efficiency, health
成文：
Definitely, passion is an essential factor to
the career we are devoted to. Without
passion,
we tend to easily lose heart when faced with
challenges or failures. However,
if equipped
with enthusiasm about our pursuit, we will become
more strong-minded,
sparing no effort to
overcome whatever gets in the way. In addition,
our passion
motivates us to try any means to
success with determination, which surely will help
to
explore our potentials and increase our
abilities. Besides, one’s passion is believed to
be contagious. It contributes to a more
friendly working environment, thus promoting
our efficiency and improving our health
condition.
Since being passionate paves way
for our career, we should take our interest
seriously when we choose jobs.(119 wds)
闪光词汇：
definitely肯定地
an essential factor一个重要的因素
tend to往往
be faced with面临
be equipped with具备
pursuit追求
strong-minded意志坚强的
spare no
effort努力
whatever gets in the way困难
motivate sb to激发某人做某事
explore our
potentials开发潜力
increase our abilities提高能力
contagious传染的
contribute to导致
promote
our efficiency提高效率
improve our health
condition改善健康状况
pave way for为……铺平道路
take …
seriously认真对待
举一反三题一：珍惜当下
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Have you
ever thought life would be better anywhere other
than where you are right
now? Maybe some of
your thoughts go something like this: Life will be
better once
I’m out of debt. I can’t wait
until I’m retired because then I can do what I
want when I
want. If only I lived somewhere
warm I could exercise all year round and I would
be
so fit. If I could just
lose 10 pounds I know I would feel better.
Truth is some of your problems may go away
once you have met all of your “if only”
and
“better when’s”, but it won’t make the perfect
life that fairy tales are made of.
New
problems will arise and you’ll likely find
yourself wishing for this “perfect” life
to be
different still. We can only imagine that the
grass will be greener on the other
side
because it’s only when we live it do we actually
see it for what it really is.
Whatever ideal
you have in mind about an alternate lifestyle,
location, financial
situation etc ... rest
assured that each one will be met with its own
unique set of
problems.
So what can you do
about this? Choose to be content with what you
already have.
It’s great to dream big. But
those dreams should not cloud the greatness you
have in
front of you right now. Consider the
truth in the grass being the greenest right under
your feet.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）结合自己的经历，谈谈你对珍惜当下这一话题的理解；
（2）对如何珍惜当下提出你的建议。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. So what can you do
about this? Choose to be content with what you
already have.
2. Whatever ideal you have in
mind about … its own unique set of problems.
成句：
It is common for people to expect a
different life, which they believe is perfect. In
fact,
they should live their current life
faithfully and cherish what they have possessed.
技能说明：
议论文的文章要学会把握其中的总结段
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
1.所有的例子遵循：困难——成功模式，即：我困难（pressure, escape from
reality,
frustrations）、我改变（grasp the
present）、我成功（motivation）。
2.建议：
充分利用时间：make use of every minute
感恩：grateful
成文：
The same is true of
me. Faced with great pressure from exams, I once
dreamed of
escaping from reality. However,
repeated frustrations reminded me that my
dissatisfaction with current situation is the
root cause of unhappiness. Later, my
efforts
were put in grasping the present and letting go
the past. It became a source of
motivation for
me to fulfill my potential.
Therefore, my
suggestions are as follows. First, since happiness
is not about getting
all we want, but about
enjoying all we have, we should make every minute
count to
trade for something of value.
Additionally, be grateful for our life with all
its lessons
and blessings. Only when we
cherish everything and everyone we encounter today
can we live our life happily.（124wds）
闪光词汇：
The same is true of…某人也是如此。
with
great pressure from来自……的压力
dream of梦想
escape from reality逃离现实
my dissatisfaction with我对……的不满
the root
cause of……的根本原因
put efforts in…努力做
let
go放手
a source of motivation动力的来源
fulfill
my potential完成我的目标
as follows如下
make every
minute count珍惜分分秒秒
trade for交换；换取
something of value有价值的东西
additionally另外
be grateful for对……感恩
blessings祝福
encounter遇见
举一反三题二：提高国民素质
A
netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept 11 regarding a
couple’s shameful behavior of
carving their
names on a 300-year-old vat at the Palace Museum
and called for the
museum to report the case
to the police.
The post caused a heated
discussion online. Some criticized the offending
behavior,
saying, “I don’t want to visit the
Palace Museum only to find relics being carved by
immoral tourists.” Others said it is common
that ancient relics in Palace Museum are
being
damaged and laws should be introduced.
Apart
from random carvings, the Palace Museum has met
several cases of shameful
behaviors this year. In March open-air relics
were trampled(踩踏) and in May
unclothed models
were photographed riding on ancient relics in the
museum’s
courtyard.
Similar incidents take
place every year. In 2013, a visitor named Liang
Qiqi cut
“Liang Qiqi has come here” on a vat
in the tourist attraction, causing a mass internet
hunting. Worse still, in 2013, a Chinese boy
carved his name on a stone sculpture at
an
ancient temple in Egypt and produced widespread
reaction worldwide.
【写作内容】
1.
用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2. 结合上述信息，简要分析这种行为的不良影响；
3. 从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何提升国民素质(不少于两点)。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. A netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept
11 … called for the museum to report the case to
the police.
2. The post caused a heated
discussion online. Some criticized…
成句：
The passage presents some news about Chinese
tourists’ uncivilized actions in scenic
spots.
They show disrespect for and even do damage to
cultural relics. Such offending
behaviors have
triggered（引发）strong criticism and accusation（谴责）.
技能说明：
1.记住新闻类的标准模式：新闻+评价（包含事件的后果其他人的反
馈）。本材料
的事件就是：tourists’ uncivilized actions in
scenic spots，结果就是：do damage to
cultural relics，评价就是：criticism。
2.由于本材料涉及到很多事件，所以不必提具体事件，泛指不文明现象即可。
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
谈影响要学会一分为二：
1.对建筑物而言：破坏文物（damage relics）
2.对个人和社会而言：破坏国家形象（spoil image）
谈建议，尤其是涉及到公共方面的事件，基本都是：
国家要制定发律和加强监督（laws,
supervision）；个人要提高意识和教育水平
(promote awareness,
educate)。
成文：
Such uncivilized behaviors
can pose a potential threat. For one thing, they
will
damage the original beauty of historic
relics and even distort the message they carry.
For another, with the exposure of these
scandals worldwide, China’s national image is
without doubt spoiled despite a civilization
of thousands of years.
Therefore, it’s an
urgent issue to improve the qualities of the whole
nation. The
government should strengthen
supervision and impose severe punishment for such
behaviors. Besides, it’s vital to educate
individuals about the importance of preserving
historic sites and to encourage them to behave
themselves wherever they travel. In a
word, it
calls for joint efforts from the government and
ordinary people to maintain
and establish a
good reputation of civilization.
小提示：
第一句的
such非常重要，起着承上启下的作用。一般我们写作都要有衔接意识，
用this,
that，they等代词都可以。
闪光词汇：
pose a potential threat带来潜在的危险
For one
thing,…For another…一方面，……另外一方面，……
distort扭曲
exposure曝光；暴露
without doubt毫无疑问
spoil破坏
an urgent issue紧迫的问题
strengthen supervision加强监督
impose severe
punishment施加惩罚
vital重要的
educate
individuals about…教育个人关于……
preserve historic
sites保护历史古迹
behave themselves行为规矩
calls
for需要
joint efforts合力
maintain and
establish a good reputation of
civilization维持和树立好的文化名声
举一反三题三：吃苦教育
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
“He who
bears the greatest hardship becomes the greatest
man.” This idiom shows
Chinese people’s traditional belief in the
vital role that hardship plays in a person’s
life as they grow up. But today, as our lives
have greatly improved, do we still need
this
so-called “hardship education”?
“We
definitely do,” said Wang Weiqiong, mother of a
15-year-old girl in Jiangxi.
“Many children
take everything for granted, as they’ve never
known how difficult it is
to make money.”
Wang is not alone. According to a recent
survey of 2,017 people done by China
Youth
Daily, 81.8 percent of the interviewees supported
hardship education including
experiencing life
in poor areas, outdoor training, taking part-time
jobs, and doing
housework.
Qiao Yu,
from Tianjin Foreign Languages School, also
supports the idea. “Hardship
helps us grow and
be prepared for the difficulties of society,” said
the 18-year-old,
who worked in a cake store
this summer.
But while it contributes to
students’ development, “hardship education
shouldn’t be
seen as simply making students
suffer,” Sun Yunxiao, deputy director of the China
Youth and Children Research Center told China
Youth Daily. “It should follow
teenagers’
growth.” Sun said that students could also do
sports to learn to face
difficulties, for
doing sports can greatly strengthen their bodies
and minds.
【写作内容】
1.
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.
以约120个词发表你对“吃苦教育”的看法，内容包括：
（1）你对“吃苦教育”概念的理解；
（2）支持或反对对青少年进行“吃苦教育”，并给出2~3点理由。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. Chinese
people’s traditional belief … do we still need
this so-called “hardship
education”?
2. But “hardship education shouldn’t be seen
as simply making students suffer,”…
成句：
The Chinese have a traditional belief
that hardships contribute to one’s growth. A
recent survey shows that many parents and
students support it, but some experts are
opposed to it. (30 words)
技能说明：
材料属于：事实+评价类型。最后一段的but是关键，说明出现了不同的评价，
因此写概括的
时候不要具体讲细节。
二、如何写正文：