英语高分作文的亮点
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高分作文的亮点
1） 高级词汇和短语；
2） 多样化的句式；
3） 亮丽的修辞手法；
4） 清晰的结构和层次，恰当的过渡
抢分技巧
1) 长短句结合原则
书面表达讲究一张一弛，有时一个短小精悍的句子也可以起到画龙点睛
的作用。比如，在文
章开头用一长一短，尤其是先长后短；文章的主体部分先用一个短句解释意思，再用
几个长
句阐述要点；文章的结尾则用一长一短进行总结和呼应（与开头）
2）主题句原则 <
br>一篇文章必须要有一个主题，写作时要有个主题句，这个主题句一般放在文章开头（最保险）
或和
结尾，让读者一目了然
3）一二三原则
就是叙述中必须条理清晰，一步进一步地阐述。采用高级的连接或过渡结构，比如to
beginstart with, next, furthermorein addition
finally; first and foremost, besides, last but
not least等
4） 短语优先原则
在写作中，注意词语的魅力，坚持短语优先原则。
灵活恰当地运用介词、副词、形容词短语，为写作增加亮点
5） 多变句式原则
避免采用单一句子结构，特别注意不要there be, and, but，then等泛滥
6） 挑战极限原则
在考生作文中，最常见的是使用一些动词不定式，而很少
看到使用现在分词完成式，不定式
的完成式这些结构。至于非谓语动词的最高境界-
独立主格结构，则更为少见，如果考生能
适时地正确使用这样的结构，必然能得高分。
高分范文
Nowadays, there are more
and more misunderstandings between parents and
children
which is so-called generation gap. It
is estimated that 75% of parents often complain
their
children‘s unreasonable behavior while
children usually think their parents too
old-
fashioned.
Why have there been so many
misunderstandings between parents and children?
Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is that the two generations
have grown up at different times, thus the
disagreement often rises between them.
Besides, due to having little in common to talk
about, they are not willing to sit face to
face. The third reason is with the pace of modern
life becoming faster and faster, both of them
can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas.
To
sum up, the main cause is due to lack of
communication and understanding each other.
It is high time that something were done upon it.
For one thing, children should
respect their
parents. On the other hand, parents also should
show solicitude for their
children. All these
measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.
1.随着高考的临近，一些高三学生出现各种生理和心理问题。因此，学会适度地自我放松非
常重要。请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed”
这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
问题类型：学习焦虑、缺乏交流、缺乏锻炼
自我放松的途径：体育锻炼、谈心、阅读励志故事等
我更喜欢的途径及理由：……
注意：词数100-120，文章开头已给出（不计入词数）。
Ways to get
relaxed
With the national college entrance
examination drawing near, some students in Senior
Three suffer from problems both
physically and mentally
Ways to get relaxed
With the
national college entrance examination drawing
near, some students in Senior
Three suffer
from problems both physically and mentally. The
most common ones are
learning anxiety and lack
of communication and physical exercise. So it is
important for us
students to find ways to get
relaxed. Taking exercise is not only of great
benefit to our
health but relaxes us a lot. We
can also have a talk with people we trust, for
their comfort
may relieve us from worries and
their experience will help us solve our problems.
Moreover,
we can read some inspiring stories
so that we are full of confidence to overcome any
difficulties we encounter.
As for me, the
best way to relax is just to maintain my sense of
humor, for example,
sometimes I read jokes and
sometimes I treat myself to funny movies. As we
all know, so
long as a person is optimistic,
there is nothing to be afraid of.
2.人们完成工
作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以
“Working
Individually or Working in a
Team”为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：
1.独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题
2.合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习
3.我喜欢的方式及理由
注意：词数100~120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。
Working
Individually or Working in a team
There are
basically two ways to get work done.
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
One is to work individually. In this way,
people can decide for themselves when to start
work and how to do it. What’s more, they
will
be able to learn how to solve problems on their
own.
People may also choose to work in a team,
where they can learn from each other and help
each other. Besides, they may work out better
ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which
offers me a chance to learn how to get along
with others and to share my experiences with
them. As the work can be divided among
several
people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is
always important.