读写任务型作文
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高中英语复习学案 编写人： 审核人： 备课组 编号：001
高考书面表达新题型训练（整合）
解读：《2014年江苏高考考试说明》中书面表达示例部
分多了读写任务型作文，这一作文类型在往年
的考试说明上是没有的，将阅读与写作有机地结合,通过阅
读所给材料的有关信息,进而对比信息进行加工,
并结合平时积累的相关信息知识,按照任务要求谋篇布
局,完成指定的写作任务。（《2014年江苏高考考试说
明》在考试形式、试卷难易比例以及试卷整体
结构、题型、分值、时间分布等方面没有变化。建议考生好
好研究考试说明和往年真题，细细品味。）
【复习建议】对《2014年江苏省高考说明》中的词汇进行梳理，找出高考英语中常考的词，比较异同
，
创设情境等，在真实语言环境下训练词汇的使用。以阅读为中心，不仅要好好阅读课文教材，而且要保
持
一定量的课外阅读，注意阅读速度和理解的准确率，同时训练对阅读文章的概括及缩写。注意对《20
14年
江苏省高考说明》中提到的例题加以学习和研究，特别是读写任务型的作文，更应该引起重视。
“读写任务”议论文写作导练
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists
find that hard-working people live longer than
average men and women. Career women are
healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that
the jobless are in poorer health than the job-
holders. A study
shows that whenever the
employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate
increase correspondingly(相应地) by
2%. All this
comes down to one point: work is helpful to
health.
Why is work good for health? It is
because work keeps people busy, away from
loneliness. Researches show
that people feel
unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing
to do. Instead, the happiest are those who
are
busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and
reality. By work, people come into contact with
each other. By
collective activities, they
find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to
health. The loss of work means the loss of
everything. It affects man spiritually and
makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work
gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of
achievement. Work makes one feel his value and
status in society. When a writer finishes his
writing or teacher sees his students grow, they
are happy beyond
words.
[写作内容]
1)以约30个
词概括短文的要点；2)然后以约120个词就“努力学习，快乐生活”的主题发表看法，并
包括如下要
点：a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？为什么？ b)举例说明你的同学是如
何努力
学习并保持健康乐观的心态的？c)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？
[写作指导](1)拟定标题：根据议论的主题及写作内容确定标题：Study hard and
enjoy
yourselves。(2)扼要
概括：找出议论文的基本要素，然后用自己的话表达出来。
论点—观点 work is helpful to health
论证—理由 a.
work keeps people busy, away from loneliness
b. work serves as a bridge between man and
reality
c. work gives one a sense of
fulfillment and a sense of achievement
(3)确立观点
，实施论证：首先要定好自己的观点，不一定是自己本来持有的观点，主要是看文章怎么
好写就怎样立论
。然后，根据所给“写作内容”进行构思，此处要求举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并
保持健康乐观的
心态的，那么，写之前可以想一想平时的学习过程中，什么时候会发笑，会高兴，再把它
们搬到同学的身
上，用第三人称即可。如一起分享攻克难题后的喜悦；新学会的谚语刚好应景而生；开同
学一个无伤大雅
的玩笑；学习之余，抽半个小时来一场三人小组篮球赛进行自我调节等等。
论点—观点 the
harder you work, the happier you will be
论证—理由
a. hard work can keep a person busy;
b. hard
work can make one feel fruitful and proud of
himself;
c. the above factors can lead to a
healthy body.
最后，用一两句话简述你的看法。
[范文鉴赏]
Study hard and enjoy yourselves
The author
highlights the effect of work on people’s health,
because it can rid one of loneliness, and make
one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which
always contributes to a good body.
In common
with the author, I agree that the harder you work,
the happier you will be, as hard work can keep
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a person busy, and gives one a sense
of achievement, hence he will be self-confident
and feel happy.
Around me, some of my
classmates work very hard, hoping to fulfill their
dream. However, they don’t seem
unhappy.
Oppositely, they try to find fun even under the
pressure of the NMET. For example, they may share
the
joy with others when working out a
problem. Sometimes they may play a trick on his
partner using the
newly-learned idioms, thus
refresh themselves quickly.
As for me, I think
only when we truly experience what fun it is, can
we spare no effort to study hard and
meanwhile
enjoy ourselves.
“读写任务”记叙文写作导练
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
About forty
years ago, I was an instructor in the military
college at Woolwich, when young Scoresby was
given his first examination. I felt extremely
sorry for him. Everybody answered the questions
well, intelligently,
while he did not know
anything, so to speak. He was a nice, pleasant
young man. It was painful to see him stand
there and give answers that were wonders of
stupidity.
I knew of course that when examined
again he would fail and be thrown out. So, I said
to myself, it would be
a simple, harmless act
to help him as much as I could.
I took him
aside and found he knew a little about Julius
Cesar’s history. But he did not know anything
else.
So, I tested him and worked him like a
slave. I made him work, over and over again, on a
few questions about,
which I knew he would be
asked.
He came through very well on the day of
the examination. He got high praise too, while
others who knew a
thousand more than he were
sharply criticized!
I thought that what in the
end would destroy him would be the mathematics
examination. I decided to make
his end as
painless as possible. So, I pushed facts into his
stupid head for hours. Finally, however, I was
shocked
out of my mind. He took the first
prize! And he got the highest praise.
[写作内容]1)
以约30个词概括短文的要点；2)然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你或你的亲友通过
勤奋创造
奇迹的经历，并包括如下的要点：a)叙述你或你的亲友通过勤奋创造奇迹的一次真实或虚构的经
历；b
)你或你亲友的是如何创造奇迹的；c)别人对你或你亲友的评价。
[写作指导](1)故事性的短文
概括应围绕“什么人、发生了什么事、结局如何”来写，即阐述一个故事梗概，
忌力陈细节，忌掺入个人
评价。(2)考虑概括内容与你所写故事之间的自然承接，可采用以下的承接方式：
This
story reminds me of another story that happened
to…
I also went through such an experience.
(3)简述相似经历，即与原阅读材料的故事一样能揭示同一主题思想而不同情节的故事。
(
4)阅读原材料，不难看出作者想告诉我们只要有意志和勤奋，就会有“丑小鸭也会蜕变成天鹅”的奇
迹
，一切皆有可能。因此，我们可以拟定题目为Hard Work Creates
Miracles。确定主题后，挑选一个类似
的能说明主题思想的故事。
(5)在组织故事
时，由于受篇幅的限制，我们也尽可能省去心理描写和对话等细节，用简练的语言（尽
量用间接引语）把
故事的过程讲清楚即可。组织故事时，可以简单列出要点，有利于我们选择短语、句型
和相关的连接词语
。
(6)写完故事后，应把你所写的故事和原材料的故事所揭示的主题思想用一两句话写出来,
即篇末点题。
[范文鉴赏] Hard Work
Creates Miracles
With his instructor’s help
and his hard work, Scoresby, a stupid military
man, did better than others in the
history
examination and even won the first prize in the
mathematics examination!
This story reminds me
of a similar experience of my cousin. He was
nothing but a football fan. So you can
imagine
how angry and disappointed my uncle and aunt were
every time the result of an exam came out! He had
been the last in the list of the whole grade!
Everybody around my cousin believed him hopeless.
However, when
he became a student of Senior
Three, for some reason, he began to study very
hard, or rather, day and night. In
spite of
the fact that he was quite often laughed at, he
kept on studying. To everybody’s surprise, he was
finally
admitted into a famous university.
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From the above two stories, we can see
that nothing is impossible and that hard work
creates miracles!
学以致用
热点练习
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Fog
haze weather(雾霾天气) causes a large area of low
visibility condition in the city. In the morning
or at
night when relative humidity is larger,
forming fog; Rising temperatures, humidity drops
during the day, gradually
into a haze. This
phenomenon is due to weather and pollution
emissions. Since January 9, 2013, the central and
eastern regions in serious smog and pollution
of the day, the national meteorological center to
upgrade to the
yellow fog blue warning alert,
13 to 10 Beijing released even when the weather
first haze orange alert in Beijing,
in mid-
january, Beijing's air pollution index is close to
1000. From the northeast to the northwest, from
north
China to central result in huanghuai,
jiangnan region, there were a wide range of severe
and severe pollution.
Specific to PM 2.5, the
environmental protection agency environmental and
economic Xia Guang tells a
reporter, director
of the center for policy research, a large city of
PM 2.5 exceeds bid badly is associated with the
following factors: one is the farthest
vegetation destroyed, hundreds of kilometers from
the exposed surface soil,
sand and dust
transportation over a long distance to the city;
Second is the integration of urban and rural areas
after city center building, in Beijing, for
example, five or six rings outside of the dust
float in the sky; Three is
industrial
production and daily life of pollutants, including
fry rape oil smoke, motor vehicle exhaust, coal-
fired
boiler, gas stations and household
decorates volatiles and so on; Four is surrounding
city heavy chemical industry
pollutant
discharge, such as peripheral PM 2.5 emission
contribution of Beijing city is close to a
quarter.
[写作内容]
1)以大约30个词概括短文的要点；
2)就话题以大约120个词写一篇议论文
a)叙述该现象出现原因
b)谈谈对你或家人朋友的影响，以及可能的解决办法。
3）结构要求
标题
第一段: 概括所给短文内容要点[约30词]
第二段: 用过渡词引出主题句
---自己的观点---理由[约100词]
第三段: 总结句[约20词]
[小试牛刀]
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[范文对比] 自己动手之前先不要偷看呀，其实它并不是很好，还有很多需要改进的地方---
Hazy Weather
According to the passage,
it’s easy to know that it’s because the serious
pollution produce this kind of the
weather. To
protect our environment, it’s necessary to take
measures to solve these problems.
Since the
winter last year, the smog has occurred a lot of
times. it has done great harm to our daily life.
Many
traffic accidents happened just because
of the heavy smog weather, more and more people
have to go to see the
doctor because the
serious disease caused by the smog, quite a lot of
flights have to be put off, a great number of
people have to stay at home for fear of the
poisonous air caused by the smog.
People have
realized the great harm caused by the smog and the
importance of protecting the environment.
People all over the country are taking
measures to reduce the smog weather. The
government suggests people go
to work or
school with the public traffic. Also we should
plant more trees.
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