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7步成文第七步网上阅卷眼神倦，誊写切记“字要端”
通过以上六步的逐步
落实，细节完善，一篇美文已经形成，但若要保证完美还得整洁地誊写到
卷面上，也就是提升书面表达的
“颜值”。因为阅卷老师在有限的时间里必须快速高效地评卷，书写
潦草的卷面会使长时间工作已经很疲
劳的阅卷老师产生厌倦，留下不好的印象。因此字体工整、卷
面整洁的文章更容易吸引眼球、先声夺人，
并得到阅卷老师的认真对待，也更容易被发现亮点。卷
面书写应符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小和字母之
间的距离要匀称，无涂改、增补现象，切忌乱涂
乱画。(为避免卷面涂鸦，建议考生在写作时一定要先写
草稿，再修改，后誊写)
一、不比不知道，一比吓一跳
[典例感悟] (2018·北京高
考书面表达第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友
Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国
文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请
给他回邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎； 2.推荐他上哪所大学； 3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1.词数不少于50； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
让
阅
卷
老
师
厌
倦
的
试
卷
类
型
让 典型示例
典型示例 评卷厌倦点
1.出现了书信格式错误，开头格式就不
对。
2.书写潦草，有涂改、增补现象。
3.有较多的单词拼写错误、词性应用错
误、高级词汇使用错误。
4.有较多的语法错误，根本不会使用高
级句式。
5.表达不地道，出现了大量的汉语式英
语。
6.语言基础不扎实，整篇文章找不到一
个令人感觉良好的句子。
评卷兴奋点
阅
卷
老
师
喜
欢
的
试
卷
类
型
1.外在美
书写规范，卷面整洁，给人赏心悦目之
感。
2.结构美
段落层次合理，条理清晰。很好地利用
了“三段式”作文法：
第一段：表明写信的目的——表示欢迎；
第二段：具体说明推荐的学校及专业；
第三段：希望对方梦想成真。
3.词汇美
选词准确，能灵活运用高级词汇，语言
功底深厚。
4.句式美
句式多变，长短句结合，能灵活运用非
谓语动词等高级句式。
5.衔接美
内容连贯，衔接自然，结构紧凑，能有
效地使用句子间、段落间的衔接词和过
渡语。
二、不求写“凤舞”，但求写工整
[典例感悟] 假定你是李华，最近你校将举办
“外国学生讲中国故事”的活动。请你给在中国
留学的英国留学生Jack写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加
。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I
hope everything is going on well with you.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
sincerely，
Li Hua
[考前临摹增2分]
近年来高考英语写作的命题坚持的思想就是高起点低落
点。题目起点很高，突出体现在一些书
面表达的话题涉及中国优秀传统文化和社会主义核心价值观。但是
最终要将这些中国文化、中国故
事、中国礼仪等抽象概念体现在具体的考生生活实际中，体现在考生熟悉
的生活中，这就是低落点。
这种高起点低落点现象有利于考生充分发挥自己的写作水平，但对平时靠死记
硬背、不注重生活积
累的考生来说是一个巨大的挑战。我们在此创编8个热点话题，旨在让考生开阔视野
，熟悉并掌握
当前的一些热点命题素材。
热点话题押题练(一) 中国传统文化
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目]
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习
。
你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮
件表
示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Dear Lucy，
I'm pleased to learn you've just won the first
prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in
your institute. I'm writing
to offer my congratulations to you. I know you
love Chinese culture, and
now you're studying
in a local Confucius Institute. I hope you can
have a chance to come to China
for further
study.
Wish you greater progress in the study
of Chinese poetry.
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来升格](词数扩充，词汇、句式升级)
Dear_Lucy，
I'm_pl
eased_to_learn_you've_just_won_the_first_prize_in_
the_Chinese_poetry_competition_
held_in_your_in
stitute._I'm_writing_to_offer_my_sincere_congratul
ations_to_you._It_came_as_no
_surprise_to_me_be
cause_I_know_you_love_Chinese_culture,_especially_
Chinese_poetry,_and_yo
u've_been_studying_in_a_
local_Confucius_Institute_for_years._I'm_so_proud_
to_see_all_your_ef
forts_have_paid_off._I_hope_
you_can_have_a_chance_to_come_to_China_for_further
_study_in_t
he_near_future_and_have_a_better_un
derstanding_of_my_country.
Wish_you_greater_pr
ogress_in_the_study_of_Chinese_poetry.
Yours，
Li_Hua
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假定你是李华。你的英国笔友David对中国文化有
浓厚的兴趣。你校今年暑假将为外国学生
举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer
Camp)，请你给他发一封电子邮件告诉他该夏令营活动
的相关信息，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化等；
3．报名方式和截止时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear David，
Here comes good news. A Chinese Summer Camp,
intended for foreign students, is to be held
by our school this summer vacation. Since you
show great interest in Chinese culture, I'd like
to
invite you to join it.
The summer camp
is scheduled to last 13 days, from July 20th to
August 1st, which covers a
wide variety of
cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese
to attending some lectures on
Chinese history
and Chinese traditional culture. I'm convinced
that you can dig out Chinese
cultural features
from the language study. By admiring the
historical relics, you will definitely gain
a
better understanding of the country.
If you
want to take part, please sign up for it before
July 10th on our school website. Looking
forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
热点话题押题练(二) 校园生活
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目]
假定你是李华，你校将于2019年5月16日在学校体育馆组织一次慈善义卖活动。请
根据以下要点给
你校外籍教师Mr. John写一封信，邀请他一起参加。
1．活动介绍(时间、地点、物品等)；
2．活动意义；
3．盼回复参与意向。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：义卖活动charity sale
体育馆 stadium
[问题作文]
Dear Mr. John，
How
is everything going? Know that you are a warm-
hearted man and enthusiastic about
charity
activities, I'm writing to invite you to take part
in an charity sale.
The activity will be held
at the school stadium in May 16th, 2019, from 8：00
am to 12：00 am.
There is varieties of item,
such as books, earphones, computers, pens and so
on.
As far as I'm concerned, it is an
interested and meaningful activity. It can raise
people's
charity awareness as well as develop
the habit of helping people in the need. What's
more, this is
also a rare opportunity to
develop our ability design and organize
activities.
Please let me know if you will
come or not as soon as possible. I'm looking
forward to hear
from you.
Yours，
Li
Hua
[我来升格](改正文中10处错误)
答案：第二句：Know→Knowing;
an→a
第三句：in→on
第四句：is→are; item→items
第五句：interested→interesting
第六句：去掉第二个the
第七句：ability后加to
第八句：if→whether
第九句：hear→hearing
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假定你是李华，正在负责策划你校的“绿色校园”(Green
School)活动，请给你的美国笔友
Henry写封邮件，向他介绍此次活动内容并征求他的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Henry，
I have a favor to
ask. We are to start a Green School campaign to
inspire students to be
environmentally
conscious at school. Could you give us some advice
on our current plan at your
convenience?
We plan to play a 30 minutes' video first,
which is about how to save water, paper, cans and
electricity at school. Students will surely be
impressed by the striking figures and helpful
tips. Then
our science teacher will give a
live show in the lab on what actually happens to
those recyclable
materials during the
recycling process. This will be really popular.
What else can we do? Looking forward to your
constructive suggestions.
Yours，
Li Hua
热点话题押题练(三) 环境保护
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目]
假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let's go green
now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英
语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括：
1．倡导绿色生活的原因；
2．实践途径(至少三点)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Boys and
girls,
I am very honored to give the speech.
With the development of society and economy, the
number of private cars is increasing
surprisingly. As we all know, cars give off
poisonous gas such
as carbon dioxide, causing
global warming, frequent natural disasters, human
diseases and so on.
In order to protect our
environment, we should go green.
Firstly, we
should attach great importance to going green.
Secondly, using fewer private cars
can make a
great difference to the environment. __❻__， we
should take full advantage of water,
electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but
not least, it is a good idea to classify our
rubbish and
❺
❹
❸
❷
❶
recycle it in
our daily life.
That's all. Thank you.
[我来升格]
1．用“It is＋名词＋不定式”改写句①
It_is_a_great_honor_for_me_to_give_the_speech.
2．用介词短语替代②处副词surprisingly
at_a_surprising_speed
3．用it作形式主语改写句③
I
t_is_well_known_that_cars_give_off_poisonous_gas_s
uch_as_carbon_dioxide,_causing_global
_warming,
_frequent_natural_disasters,_human_diseases_and_so
_on.
4．用句型it is high time that ...改写句④
In_
order_to_protect_our_environment,_it_is_high_time_
that_we_wentshould_go_green.
5．把句⑤改为被动语态
F
irstly,_great_importance_should_be_attached_to_goi
ng_green.
6．在⑥处加入过渡语
What's_moreIn_addition等
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假如你是校学生
会的李华。在地球日前夕，请你以“地球——我们共同的家园”为话题，代
表学生会向校报提供一份倡议
书，倡议全校学生厉行节约、保护环境。内容包括：
1．节约与环保的关系；
2．举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约；
3．倡导发扬关于节约的优良传统以保护环境。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear students，
Earth Day is coming. To
build a beautiful home, we should save our natural
resources and not
destroy the environment.
First of all, the habit of saving is very
important because natural resources
in our
world may run out one day. Meanwhile, this habit
can help us avoid producing waste, which
will
make our home — the Earth more beautiful. As
students, we should make our contributions.
For example, we can recycle our textbooks or
use both sides of our exercise books. In this way
more
wood would be saved. What's more, we
Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard
waste
as shameful, so let's make joint efforts
to create a green and harmonious environment. Your
cooperation would be much appreciated.
The
Students' Union
热点话题押题练(四) 社会生活
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目]
假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.
Brown的资助，可
以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：
1．收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；
2．在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；
3．决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；
4．盼望见到Mr.
Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。
注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右。
[问题作文]
Dear Mr. Brown，
❶________________________________ I could not
return to school without your help. Thank
you
so much.
I have been work hard since I went
back to school. I have made a great progress in my
studies
under the help of my teachers. They
often praise me and encourage me. But for your
help, I might
have left school and couldn't
have got such good education. I made up my mind to
study harder
and make greater progress.
How are you getting on with your life and
work? I would like to meet you in person, but I
have
no opportunity to do so. Would you please
to send me a photo of yourself?
❷_____________
__________________________________________________
_________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[我来升格]
1．在①处补全点题句
I_am_writing_to_expr
ess_my_deepest_gratitude_for_the_money_and_books_y
ou_sent_me.
2．在②处补全结尾句
Thank_you_again_for
_your_generous_help_and_best_wishes!
3．改正文中错误
(1)时态错误：I could not return→I could not have
returned; I made up my mind→I have made
up my
mind
(2)动词形式错误：I have been work→I have been
working; Would you please to send→Would
you
please send
(3)冠词使用错误：去掉made_a_great_progress中的冠词a
(4)介词使用错误：under the help of→with the help of
Ⅱ.整篇训练
请以李明的名义给《中国日报》英文版写一封信，信的内容为呼吁人们(包括驾
驶员和车上人
员)在行车途中不要向窗外乱扔东西。要点如下：
1．陈述驾车时向外乱扔东西的不文明行为；
2．开车或坐车时向窗外乱扔东西的危害；
3．提出自己的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'd like to talk about one kind of uncivilized
behavior of people on the road.
Yours，
Li Ming
参考范文：
Dear Sir or
Madam，
I'd like to talk about one kind of
uncivilized behavior of people on the road. As we
all know,
with the development of economy,
more and more people can afford to buy private
cars. However,
one phenomenon should really be
paid attention to on the way of driving. That is
throwing rubbish
out of cars as they like.
First of all, throwing rubbish out of cars
will surely spoil a city's appearance which is
supposed
to be clean and tidy. What's worse,
it is very dangerous to throw rubbish out of cars
when driving
at a high speed, which may cause
severe accidents or even death, as was reported in
the news.
Besides, it also adds to cleaners'
difficulty of collecting rubbish or even threatens
their life when
they're collecting rubbish.
All in all, this kind of phenomenon must be
prevented. I strongly appeal to all the people to
stop this kind of uncivilized behavior and the
police should give proper punishment to those who
violate it deliberately as well.
Yours，
Li Ming
热点话题押题练(五) 语言学习
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目] 假定你是李华。你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛
围
”。请你用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括：
1．宣传标语用英汉双语；
2．开设汉语角；
3．邀请汉语外教来学校上课。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Dear Tom，
How are you doing? I'm glad to
hear from you. From your letter, I've learnt that
you'd like to
know what to create a good
atmosphere to learn Chinese. It's pleasure for me
to give you some
advices.
First of all, to
raise the awareness of Chinese learning, you'd
better to put up signs and slogans
written
both in Chinese or English. Besides, I'm
convincing that setting up a Chinese Corner as a
platform for students to practise their spoken
Chinese will be of great helpful. Last but not
least, it
is a good idea to invite a native
Chinese teacher, whom has a good command of
Chinese, to giving
you a lesson.
I do hope
my suggestions can be beneficial for you. I'm
looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
sincerely，
Li Hua
[我来升格](改正文中10处错误)
答案：第三句：what→how
第四句：pleasure前加a;
advices→advice
第五句：去掉better后的to; or→and
第六句：convincing→convinced; helpful→help
第七句：whom→who; giving→give
第八句：for→to
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David是网络孔子学院(Confucius
Institute Online)的注册学员，
给你发来邮件说最近他对中国古诗产生了兴趣。请你
给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1．学古诗的意义； 2.学古诗的方法； 3.给予鼓励。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear David，
I'm glad to know
that you're becoming interested in Chinese ancient
poetry.
As an important literary form, for a
thousand years Chinese ancient poetry has been
enjoying
great popularity in China. Therefore,
learning Chinese ancient poems can not only
improve your
language skills but also enhance
your understanding of Chinese culture.
To
learn an ancient poem well, it's necessary to know
some background knowledge about it.
Besides,
read it as much as possible until you can recite
it from memory and then you can have a
better understanding of it.
All
things are difficult before they are easy. If you
keep on learning Chinese ancient poems,
you'll
perfectly understand their meaning and appreciate
their beauty.
Yours，
Li Hua
热点话题押题练(六)
人际关系
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目] 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同
堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。
请你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：
1．陪伴；
2.照顾； 3.其他。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Dear Peter，
I have received your letter, which say you
can't understand why my grandparents live with us.
Therefore, it's a very common phenomenon which
three generations live under the same roof. The
reason are as follows.
Firstly, it is
well-known that old people often feel lonely,
included my grandparents. They are
willing to
live with us about company. More importantly, they
need to looked after considering our
poor
health. We live together so that we can know
everything about their mental and physically
health. Last but not least, it is an tradition
and virtue to respect and take good care of the
old in
China.
I'm wondering how you
support your elders. I'm looking forward to your
early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来升格](改正文中10处错误)
答案：第一句：say→says
第二句：Therefore→However; which→that
第三句：reason→reasons
第四句：included→including
第五句：about→for
第六句：to后加be; our→their
第七句：physically→physical
第八句：an→a
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假定你是李华。你的好友，来自美国的交流生Tony在你市首届外国人中华才艺大赛(the
First
Expats Chinese
Show Competition)中未能进入决赛，情绪低落。请给他写封信表示安慰，要点如
下：
1．表示理解； 2.给予安慰和鼓励； 3．愿意提供帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Tony，
I'm sorry to hear
that you didn't get to the final of the First
Expats Chinese Show
Competition. I quite
understand how you feel now.
I know that you
did a lot to get fully prepared for the
competition. However, the truth is that all
the contestants are very competitive.
Therefore, don't be depressed and keep a good
state of mind.
Failure is the mother of
success. As long as you don't lose heart, you'll
succeed in time.
Chinese culture is extensive
and profound, so it's not easy for foreigners to
master it in a short
time. If you have any
difficulty, don't hesitate to ask me. I'm willing
to help you.
Yours，
Li Hua
热点话题押题练(七)
征文投稿
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目] 随着汽车的数量增加，道路安全问题变得越来越重要。假
定你是李华，是校学生会主
席，请你根据下面的写作要点，给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。
1．列举街道上常见的交通违规现象；
2．分析违反交通规则造成的后果；
3．发出几点倡议(至少两点)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Dear boys
and girls，
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the
Students' Union. I'd like call your attention to
the
importance of obeying the traffic rules.
Nowadays, with the number of vehicles is
increasing on the
road, traffic problems have
become part of our life. Some people run the red
light at the crossing
and other ride their
bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drove too fast
in the street. All the behavior
present
potential danger. If we don't obey the traffic
rules, there might be more traffic jams and
accident. To keep the traffic smoothly,
I suggest all the students should obey the traffic
rules when
walk in the street to make sure we
are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think to lay
stress on the traffic
safety education is
necessary. Let's take responsible for ourselves
and others and take action
now!
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来升格]
第一步：规避错误——保基本
上面文中共有10处错误，请改正。
答案：第一句：去掉第一个the
第二句：call前加to
第三句：with→as
第四句：other→others
第五句：drove→drive
第六句：present→presents
第七句：accident→accidents
第八句：smoothly→smooth; walk→walking
第十句：responsible→responsibility
第二步：词句靓化——上档次
使用it作形式主语改写①。
Also,_I_th
ink_it_is_necessary_to_lay_stress_on_the_traffic_s
afety_education.
第三步：优化结构——争满分
请把上面习作进行合理分段。
Dear_boys_and_girls，
I_a
m_Li_Hua,_chairman_of_the_Students'_Union._I'd_lik
e_to_call_your_attention_to_the_i
mportance_of_
obeying_the_traffic_rules.
Nowadays,_as_the_nu
mber_of_vehicles_is_increasing_on_the_road,_traffi
c_problems_have_b
ecome_part_of_our_life._Some_
people_run_the_red_light_at_the_crossing_and_other
s_ride_their_
bikes_on_the_roadway._Some_driver
s_drive_too_fast_in_the_street._All_the_behavior_p
resents_p
otential_danger._If_we_don't_obey_the
_traffic_rules,_there_might_be_more_traffic_jams_a
nd_ac
cidents.
To_keep_the_traffic_smooth,_
I_suggest_all_the_students_should_obey_the_traffic
_rules_when
_walking_in_the_street_to_make_sure
_we_are_safe_and_avoid_trouble._Also,_I_think_it_i
s_necess
ary_to_lay_stress_on_the_traffic_safet
y_education.
Let's_take_responsibility_for_our
selves_and_others_and_take_action_now!
Yours，
❶
Li_Hua
Ⅱ.整篇训练 <
br>假定你是李华，某英文报社向即将毕业的高中生征稿，主题是“向成年出发”，请你根据下
列要点
用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。
1．你的心情； 2.你的人生规划(学业、事业等方面)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
It won't be long before I become an
adult, so I feel very excited as well as a bit
nervous.
First of all, I'd like to express my
sincere gratitude to my parents and teachers,
without whom
I couldn't have made such great
progress in my life and study. Secondly, as an
adult, I should learn
to be independent. Also,
it's time for me to take it into consideration
what I will take up in the
future. I wish to
study in a key university to become a lawyer,
using what I have learnt to serve our
society.
Adulthood means hope, challenge and
responsibility, and I'm sure I can do well in the
future.
热点话题押题练(八) 表达看法
Ⅰ.作文升格
[题目] 假定
你是某中学的学生李华。请你用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用
的英语材料的看法，内容
主要包括：
优点：1.话题广泛；
2．图片丰富；
3．有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[问题作文]
Dear Editor，
As a student reader, I am writing to talk
about the English textbooks
your publishing
house.
These books have many advantages.
❷
❶
which are published by
One of
them is that we can find a variety of topics, such
❸
as science, culture and history. These
topics, I think, are very popular with us
students.
❹
Many
beautiful and colorful
pictures are along with the texts. They can help
us understand English
better.
Even the students who used to dislike English
turned out to be interested in the subject.
However, some of the texts have too many new
words and expressions which are hard for us.
I'd like to suggest change them into easier
ones.
Best regards，
Li Hua
[我来升格]
1．①处使用非谓语动词短语作定语
published_by_your_publishing_house
2．②使用非限制性定语从句修饰前一句中的advantages
These_books
_have_many_advantages,_one_of_which_is_that_we_can
_find_a_variety_of_topic
s,_such_as_science,_cu
lture_and_history.
3．在③处添加适当的过渡词，把④句中的表语提前，使用全
部倒装，然后把⑤句改为which
引导的非限制性定语从句
What's_more,_a
long_with_the_texts_are_many_beautiful_and_colorfu
l_pictures,_which_can_
help_us_understand_Engli
sh_better.
4．改正⑥处时态错误
turned前加have
5．在⑦处添加过渡词
Therefore
6．改正⑧处错误
change→changing
Ⅱ.整篇训练
假定你是李华，正在加拿大参加短
期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的杂志上看到一篇介
绍中国端午节的文章，但文章里没有注明日期是
中国农历，且文中所配图片是赛艇而不是龙舟。
请你给编辑部写一封信，指出其中的错误并要求更正。
内容包括：1.指出错误，给出正确信息；
2．要求更正；
3．赞赏对方介绍中国文化。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国农历the Chinese
Lunar Calendar；
赛艇rowing boat；龙舟dragon boat
参考范文：
Dear editor，
I am writing to
point out to you some of the mistakes in your
recent issue about the Chinese
❽
❼
❺❻
Dragon Boat Festival.
The Chinese Dragon Boat Festival falls on May
5th in the Chinese Lunar Calendar, not the
calendar used around the world. Also, we
compete with dragon boats, at the front of which
there are
dragon heads, not rowing boats. To
correct the mistakes may be constructive and thus
readers can
acquire right information about
Chinese culture. However, I quite appreciate your
effort to
introduce Chinese culture to your
people, which will surely bridge the gap between
two countries.
Thank you for your effort.
Yours sincerely，
Li
Hua