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大学英语六级作文解析及范文
12月大学英语六级作文解析及范文
新东方在线 武汉新东方韩勤勤
六级作文一般而言有三
大评分标准，“语言”
“结构”“内容”。今年的六级作文，不出意外，
在形式结构上考查了笔
者在六级强化班重点讲
解的“议论文”和“图画文”之一，即文字型话
题。而内容上考查的是“
创新”相关话题，属于
个人精神品质。因此，对于对于上过六级课程的
小伙伴们，此次考题难度
系数不大。下面来具体
解析：
Directions：For this part，you
are allowed
30 minutes to write a short essay
on
innovationcreationinvention. Your
essay
should include the importance of
innovation
and measures to be taken to
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encourage innovationcreationinvention.
You
are required to write at least 150
words but
no more than 200 words.
第一段：提出问题，引出创新的话题
第二段：分析问题，具体解析创新的原因，即创
新的重要性
第三段：解决问题，具体解析鼓励创新的措施
先讲解及格版作文思路：
第一段，能
够仿写“社会热点题”的首段写法，
用一个with引导时间状语，作为大背景，进一
步转到创
新的话题。即 with the rapid
development of the
society, more and
more people begin to realize
the
importance of innovation. Such as, a lot
of new things appear in our daily life.
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第二段，按照课堂中所论证的总分结构，能够从
两个或
者三个层面论证为什么我们应该创新，也
就是创新的重要性。比如，个人，集体，社会。
为了体
现逻辑性，能够用相关连接词连接。具体
如下：there are many reasons
for the
importance of innovation. Firstly, for
a
person, if he has the spirit of innovation,
he can be not satisfied with his current
situation, and keep going until he
succeeds. secondly, for a team, creation
can increase its efficiency. thirdly, this
kind of spirit can help the society develop
faster and faster, so that there are more
and more new things which can enrich
our
daily life.
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第三段：按照课堂中所论证的总分
总结构，能够
从两个层面论证我们应该如何创新，也就是鼓励
创新的措施。比如，个人，政府。
连接词依旧继
续。具体如下：thus, it is very important for
us to encourage innovation. On the one
hand, we students should learn to be
innovative in our daily life. On the other
hand, governments could set some laws
and
regulations to encourage innovation.
Only in
this way can we have a better life.
及格版作文
with the rapid development of the society,
more and more people begin to realize
the
importance of innovation. Such as, a
lot of
new things appear in our daily life.
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there are many reasons for
the
importance of innovation. Firstly, for a
person, if he has the spirit of innovation,
he can be not satisfied with his current
situation, and keep going until he
succeeds. secondly, for a team, creation
can increase its efficiency. thirdly, this
kind of spirit can help the society develop
faster and faster, so that there are more
and more new things which can enrich
our
daily life.
thus, it is very important for us
to
encourage innovation. On the one hand,
we students should learn to be innovative
in our daily life. On the other hand,
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governments could set some
laws and
regulations to encourage innovation.
Only in this way can we have a better life.
（151words）
另附一篇高分作文赏析，结构和内容上类似，只
是在语言表示上更为精彩：
Along with the highly advanced society,
the importance of innovation has been
attached more and more significance in
our
country. There abound numerous
novel gadgets
in our daily life.
There exist countless
contributors for this
phenomenon mentioned
above, while the
following might be the most
critical ones.
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To begin
with, seen from the individual’s
perspective,
once equipped with
innovation, he could be
compelled to be
never satisfied with his
status quo,
which guarantees his personal
success.
Apart from that, innovation is the
main
driving force behind increased
competitiveness. To be the unrivaled one
in the whole world, a nation has to keep
abreast with time, ensuring the
dominance
of creation.
To put all into a nutshell, it
goes without
saying that innovation does
matter. On
the one hand, relevant authorities
are
supposed to set up relevant rules and
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regulations so as to
highlight innovation.
on the other hand, we
each individual
should cultivate this kind of
viewpoint
since our childhood, by which means
we
could be bestowed with a bright and
promising future! (175words)
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