写好一篇英语作文的注意事项
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写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we
I
(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention
should be paid
to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It
is, therefore, high time
that some applicable
approaches were implemented by the service
industry like
that. Thus， its competitive edge
will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入语，比如
说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放
在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however therefore for exampleI believe
做插入语放在中间，一般放在
动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说：
Other individuals, however, take the attitude that
…
3.
一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现
good, bad ,
many, thing, think, people, opinion
等等)比如上面例子中，applicable
代替proper,
approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen
one’s
competitive edge代替enhance one’s
competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇一位同学写的优秀作文(14
分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写
作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句
型都用上了，
作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when
my mother bought me a
computer as birthday
present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on
me so
that i indulged myself in googling an
army of useful information i had expected,
and
enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night
I was sleepless, feeling
that the whole world
belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a
tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested
in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of
替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century
witnessed the increasing popularity of
computers. Coincident with the advancement of
science and technology,
computers pouring into
the current society as a fashion are appealing to
growing
individuals. It is no exaggeration to
say we have been submerged by them, in
large
measure!
The dawn of the new century
witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个
时期发生了什么事情；
increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
coincident with … 非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换
With …
advancement 替换 development
pour into ( flood into swarm into )替换 enter into
current ( currently )替换 now
appeal to
sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
growing
individuals 替换 more and more people
It is
no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
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For a start, we can, freely,
search desired information at any moment .
Little by little, our knowledge will be well
enriched, and our horizons will be
greatly
broadened. Additionally, we can get huge
recreations online by chatting,
playing games,
or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To
begin with
We can, freely, search
用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well
enriched, and our horizons will be greatly
broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In
addition Besides
deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can
function in the disservice
of human beings, in
a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn
pictures,
AV-films emerging on the screen ,
which leads quite a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however,
computers can function in the disservice
of
human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying
that这个
句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the
disservice of 替换 do harm to
emerging 代替
appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing )
net
citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes
that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a
positivenegative rolepart in the development
of people' lives, despite a slice of
unfavorablebad impactseffects. We should
,therefore, take good advantage of
the fruits
and avoid the opposite facetaspect.
no
garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
computers do play ，do 强调
positive 替换
important good 等
a slice of 替换 a part of
unfavorable 替换 bad
impacts 替换 effects
influences
We should, therefore, take
advantage of … 使用插入语
fruits (而且fruits
用的非常形象， merits virtues) 替换 advantage
( defects
替换 disadvantage )
facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。 (登录即可观看，
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duals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent,
outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable,
poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less
impressive代替
army of college students
indulge themselves in playing games,
enjoying
romance with girlsboys or killing time passively
in their dorms. When
it approaches to
graduation ,as a result, they find their academic
records are less
impressive.
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4.(an army of, an ocean of, a
sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not
most)代替
many.
注：用many, if not most
一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if
not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if
not all ,代替most.
5: a slice of, quite a
few , several代替some
6:harbor the idea that,
take the attitude that,
hold the view that,
it is widely shared that,
it is universally
acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 代替thing
8:
shared 代 common
huge fruits 代替get much
benefit )
10:for my part ,from my own
perspectiveviewpoint 代替 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more( 注意没有gro
wingly这种
形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasinggrowing.修饰形容词，副词
用increasingly.
has gained growing
popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular
with the advancement of sth.
if anything,
或little or nothing代替hardly
13..benefitial
rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
r,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替customer
ingly,extremely 代替very
unnecessary, hardly
inevitable ... 代替 necessary,
evitable
appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination
on sb 代替sb take
interest in
e one's
attention代替attract one's attention.
,demension,sphere代aspect
indicative of ,be
suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest
,fear
rise to, lead to, result in, trigger
代替cause.
22. There are several reasons
behind sth 代替..reasons for sth
代替want.
attention into 代替pay attention to
in mind
that 代替remember
26. enjoy, possess, harbor,
own 代替have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.
interaction代替communication
on sth be
opposed to代替 be against , disagree with sth
name only a few, as an example, for instance代替 for
example
30. next tovirtually
impossible,代替nearly impossible
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