最新英语评论“利弊”型作文的常用表达句式(经典句型)及高考答卷注意事项!
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评论“利弊”型作文的常表达句式
为了使初学者熟悉掌握评论“利
弊”型作文的写作方法,我们将这类作文的常用表达式
归纳如下:
开头 are all
aware that everything has its two sides._____ is
no exception .In its
development, ______ has
brought both advantages and disadvantages.
开头
a few year ago ,the idea of ______ seemed far-
fetched(不能实现的)for most
Chinese .Now ,however
,with the advent (出现) and popularity of ____, its
advantages and
disadvantages have been a
subject of discussion.
开头3._____now plays such
an important part in so many people is lives that
it is essential
for us to try to decide
whether it is a blessing(福)or a
curse(祸).Obviously, _____ has both
advantages
and disadvantages.
开头 recent years with fast
economic growth , ______ has appeared in big
cities of
China
.People’s attitude towards _______ varies widely.
everywhere in the world
开头5….This
phenomenon has caused a heated discussion among
the social critics who are
particularly
concerned about its social effects instead of
worrying only about ______.Tthe
discussion
mainly falls into two opposite ideas.
开头 the
increase in the general standard of living ,some
ordinary Chinese families
can now afford
________ . Yet opinions of the development of
_____ vary from person to
person..
开头7.
________,a controversial question in the world
,has aroused strong arguments in
China.
开头
is a much general debate discussion nowadays today
on about the issue the
problem of _________.
正文: 带来了许多好处有许多优点:
of a
benefits
to
us
. benefits
(立论)1._______ has brought
a
number
benefits to
lot of people
us in many respects.
benefits of
_______ can be perceived in many aspects.
3. we get a lot of benefits from _________.
4. _________ is a beneficial activity ,in which we
can obtain many advantages.
advantages
5. _________ has many
positive
.
6._________ has brought about many changes in
people is life.
(论证) First of all
,_______ .
Also,_______ .
Most
importantly, ___________.
bad effects
也有弊端副作用带来的问题:
(立论) as a coin has two
sides,______ also has some
ill effects
(副作用).
side effects
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2. ______ ,on the other
hand ,has its
disadvantages
.
negative points
problems
_________ may be
dangerous
.
harmful.
brought about
given rise to
3. However ,_______has
also
led to
a lot of problems.
resulted in
caused
created
(论证)For one thing,______.
For another________
.
Finally, ________..
有些人支持者认为。。。。。。。。而另一些人反对者则认为。。。。。。。。。
Some people Say
1.
Those who are in
favor of
Believe
That .
Supporters
Think
Hope
Suggest
Hold the opinion
pointout
Others
chaim
Those who are against it on the other hand
2. , however ,
,
argue
Opponents on
the contrary,claim
are worried
That ______ .They
criticize
that_________..
complain
But,there are still a lot of others who think
that ________.
people,however,think quite
differently that___________.
4. Those who
object to
________
hold
that______. They believe
that _______.
criticize claim
oppose
declare
结尾1
In spite of these
disadvantage ,I think ______ dose more good than
harm to people .And the
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disadvantages ,since they have been pointed
out clearly ,will be dealt with effectively.
结尾2
Weighing the two side ,there is no
denying the fact that _________has produced great
effects
on society.
结尾3
benefits
Whether ________should be developed in China
is a difficult question to answer ,yet the
advantages
can
bring won’t be
eliminated
.
denied
结尾4
To conclude,
I would say that
the advantages outweigh
the dissdvantages
It means ____.
its gain outweigh
its loss
结尾5
While taking
advantage of_______,we must try to find ways to
reduce its disadvantage to a
minimum(最小程度)so
as to let it serve our purposes better and make
our life more exciting and
attractive.
结尾6
In sum, ______does more good than harm for
______We must take a correct attitude
towards_______ .We should take full advantage
of it and avoid its disadvantage.
结尾7
Despite its disadvantages,_________ is still
appealing to people because ________is an
essential
part of their life.
结尾8
Weighing the two sides ,both arguments seem to
be reasonable .After all,___________.
结尾9
Although there are many arguments for and
against _______,we must realize that ______in
itself
is neither good nor bad .Actually ,its
value to people and society depends on how it is
use.
结尾10
In any case ,whether the
ultimate effect of _______is good or not ,one
thing is certain that _____in
itself is
neither good nor bad .It is the uses to which it
is put that determine its value to society.
结尾11
In my opinion ,nothing is wrong
with _______itself .The problem is what to do with
it._____,if it
pleasure
is
in proper use ,may bring us
happiness
.
结尾12
The key point is how make good use of its
positive aspects and avoid its negative points .In
my
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mind,__________.
高考英语写作注意事项
1.字迹工整、书写规范(这一点很重要,会为你赢得印象分,六月份改卷时期老
师改卷任务重
,天气炎热,字迹清晰工整会让阅卷老师心情好)最好。衡水体火
了之后,很多学校都开始重视英文规范
书写,可参考电子科大出版的《学习型字
帖英语规范书写教程》高考11种书信体集锦里的写法指导和高
考优秀范文格式。
2.字数写够。(老师看到字迹工整,字数够的作文,心里会马上把分
数定位在18
分,也就是及格分数,然后再读一遍作文,即使读的过程中发现有错误,最后的
分
数也不会比18分低很多)
3.作文题目中若给出了作文主要内容并用1.2.3.点或
者用表格写了出来。写出的
作文中一定要包括这题目中提到的所有的要点,因为在制定评分规则的时候会
把
总分平均分给这几个要点,如果文中没有提到某个要点,那么相应的这个要点的
分就不能得,
最后的得分自然也就低一些。
4.关于作文的具体内容。尽量使用有把握的单
词和句子,稳中求胜。如遇到不会
说的单词会句子,想办法换个说法把意思表达出来,切忌自己造新词或
者乱搭配,
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这样会闹笑话,弄巧成拙。
5.学会分段,平时写作文大多数同学一段到底,作文最好分三段,这样会显得作
文有条理,错落有致,并且看上去作文的字数要多一些。
6.要有时态和语态的意识。不
能通篇全都是一个时态,或者根本没有时态,时态
是英语最基本的语法,也是高考作文的一个重要评分标
准。英语是一个惯用被动
语态的语言,不妨在文中加入几个被动语态的句子,为作文增加光彩。
7.避免低级错误:每句话的首字母大写,人名、地名首字母大写;每段开头空
出
4个字符的位置;主谓一致(切忌出现I is, he are, they
was等类似错误);动
词跟时态一致(如He like teaching us等);名词单复数
(名词数量大于1时,
一定要用复数形式);不定冠词(可数名词单数前一定要用a或者an)。
8.多背范文,多记一些名言警句,并想办法合适得用到作文中去。记一些万能的
开头结尾的公式。
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