我爱我校作文-农业补贴政策

【写作练习一】
写作目标---练习如何写书信、家规、校规
【写作任务】
假如你是Eric，请你给Dr. Know写一封信，告诉他你必须遵守的家规、校
规及你的感受。

【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
(1) 我在学校有很多规矩需要遵守。
I ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ at school.
(2) 我每天早晨必须六点钟起床。我必须准时到校。
校
规
规矩
I have to ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ every morning. And
I must ______ ______ school ______ ______.
(3) 上课时我不可以和同学们说话。上课时我不可以吃东西。
I ______ ______ ______ my classmates in class. I ______ ______ in
class.
家
规
(4) 我在家里有很多规矩需要遵守。
I ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ at home.

(5) 放学后，我必须在五点半之前到家。我的作业很多，所以在上
学期间的 晚上我不可以看电视，也不可以玩电脑游戏。
I must ______ ______ ______ 5:30 p.m. after school. I have ______
______, so I can’t watch TV ______ play computer games ______
______ ______.
(6) 我要遵守的规矩太多了。我对其中一些规矩不满意。
感受
I have ______ ______ ______ ______ ______. I’m not happy with
some of them.
Can you help me?
3. 巧衔接
(1) either作为副词，用在两个意义有关联的否定句之后，表示“也”。如句(3)的两个句子意义相关，且都为否定句，成文时，我们可以在第二个否定句之后加上
either，这样可 以使前后两句衔接紧密。
(2) 介绍完校规，谈到家规时，我们可以加入also并用相同的句式“I have many ...
at ... ”来表达，这样不仅使文章的节奏更匀称，而且使上下文衔接更紧密。
4. 成篇章
Dear Dr. Know,
_______________________ _____________________________________________
__________________________________________________ __________________
___________________________ _________________________________________
____ __________________________________________________ ______________
_______________________________ _____________________________________
Yours,
Eric
答案
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) have many rules to follow
(2) get up at 6 six o’clock; arrive at get to; on time
(3) can’t talk to with; can’t eat

(4) have many rules to follow
(5) arrive get home before; much homework; or; on school nights
(6) too many rules to follow
4. 成篇章
范文:
Dear Dr. Know,
I have many rules to follow at school. I have to get up at 6 o’clock every
morning. And I must arrive at school on time. I can’t talk with my classmates in class.
I can’t eat in class either. I also have many rules to follow at home. I must arrive
home before 5:30 p.m. after school. I have much homework, so I can’t watch TV or
play computer games on school nights. I have too many rules to follow. So I’m not
happy with some of them. Can you help me?
Yours,
Eric