2016高考英语短文改错荟萃
莆田学院-我国第一位女留学生
2016高考英语短文改错荟萃
第一套
Dear Ms. J. K.
Rowling,
It is great pleasure to write to you.
I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A
few days
before, I listened to a radio
programme about you. Now I know that you teach
English at home
and in others countries before
you started writing books. I also know that you
could only write the
first book while your
baby daughter was asleep, so you worked on them
for five years. That was a
very much difficult
job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must
be proud for you. I hope I
can become as
successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for
spending time read my letter.
Yours
sincerely,
Michele
第二套
Last week,
there was a program calling “Learning to Respect
Our Parents” in our school.
That is known to
us that respect for one’s parents is one of
Chinese traditional moral value.
And most
students nowadays are “the only child”. We often
think of themselves as the centre of
their
family.
As for the program, eight “dos”
have worked out for the students to follow. For an
example,
we are advised to remember our
parents’ birthdays. Beside this, it is necessary
that we should also
tell our parents what we
are going to do when we go out. The program has
been such successful
that it has been high
praised by many people.
第三套
One of
my happiest childhood memories were having dinner
with my parents and two
sisters. As a result,
found that we seldom had a chance to get together,
then we decided that we
would set aside three
evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we
tried setting three fixed
days for our
experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a
couple of week of trying this
plan, almost
everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began
to resist the idea. They said they
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would rather to spend the time with
their friends or take part in some activities.
Gradual, though,
they began to see these
evenings together for a very different way. We
laughed a lot and we
discussed about each
other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt
that we had been able to
build much strong
relationships with the family than we had before.
第四套
T
here was a rich man who carried
many treasures to the distance to look into
happiness.
But after a long march, he fails
to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of
the mountain
while a farmer carrying a large
bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The
rich man
said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell
me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the
heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and
said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and
you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired
suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried
that
heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or
murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man
helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing
good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.
第五套
I’ve learnt from the notice that
you’re looking for an English editor for us school
paper.
I’m written this
letter to apply for the position.
I’m Li
Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my
view, I met your requirements:
for one
thing, I’m willing to devote some of my spare time
to serve others; for another,
I’m good
at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled
in using computers. I would be glad
if
you could offer to me an opportunity for an
interview.
I’m looking forward to your
kindly reply at your earliest convenient.
第六套
A woman was taken to the hospital. While
having an operation, she had a nearly
death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this
was it. God said,” No, you had another
40
years.” On recovery the women decided to have a
plastic surgery. She had someone
change
her hair color, thinking since she had so many
time to live, she'd better make full
use
from it. Finally she got out of the hospital.
While crossing the street, she killed by an
ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of
God, she demanded，“They said I had
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another 40 years!” God replied,
“But I didn't recognize you.”
第七套
One day,
some children were playing hide-and-seek while
they heard a boy names Tate
shouting. “Help!
The golden lion is coming after me!” They go
running to help Tate, only find him
laughing
on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do
that. If you are real in trouble, nobody
will
come to help you.”
In a rainy day, Tate
shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can’t
swim. Help!” The
children didn’t believe her
this time. But a girl saw everything and called
the others to save him.
Tate was not sorry for
playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on,
Tate never did that again.
第八套
Recently I
have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500
students in our school.
The result showed that
over 40% of them are fond of playing musical
instruments in their
spare time because it can
improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf
the Internet, which
helps them know about
world affair. What surprises me most is the number
of the students paid
much attention to reading
and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up
for 12% , although one
is a best way to gain
knowledge and the other to keep fit.
Therefore, many students are strongly advised to
take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus,
they should take an active part in sports and
develop other hobbies proper besides
entertainment.
第九套
The best advice I
received in my childhood was from my dad. He
always gives me some
advice, but I seldom
took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me
to participate in a
speech competition. So I
signed up and after the competition, I did my best
to be full prepared.
But the moment I stood on
the stage, I was such nervous that my mind
completely went blank.
The experience of lose
a competition was really painful. Then, my dad
said, “My son, life
is like battlefield. You
have to lose many time to win the final victory.”
Thanks for his advice,
I never give up when I
do anything.
第十套
Last Friday, I learned a
lesson about telling lies. Early in morning, I
didn’t want to go to
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school,
but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very
worrying when I told her. She left quickly
and
I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came
back with a bottle of pill. She said that
she
had asked for a day off work to look for me. I
felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the
true.
That afternoon, my teacher came to
visit to me. I felt so regretfully for telling
lies. I had wasted
anybody’s time. Finally, I
admitted I had lied and promised never to do it
again.
短文改错参考答案
第一套
Dear
Ms. J. K. Rowling,
It is ^ great pleasure to
write to you. I like reading all of your Harry
Potter book. A few
a
books
days before, I listened to a radio
programme about you. Now I know that you teach
English at
ago
taught
home and in others countries before
you started writing books. I also know that you
could only
other
write the
first book while your baby daughter was asleep so
you worked on them for five years.
it
That was a very much difficult job. Your
son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud
for you. I hope I can become as
successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for
spending
of
successful
time read my letter.
reading
Yours sincerely,
Michele
【语篇解读】本
文是应用文，作者写信给J.K.罗琳，表达自己对她的崇拜，以及期望自己
成功的愿望。
1. 【命题立意】考查冠词。
【试题解析】“great”的前面需用冠词a。
2. 【命题立意】考查名词。
【试题解析】根据“all”可知，“book”需用复数。
3. 【命题立意】考查副词。
【试题解析】几天前应该用ago。
4.
【命题立意】考查动词。
【试题解析】此处应该用过去时，表示以前曾经教过英语，teach的过去时为taught。
5. 【命题立意】考查形容词。
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【试题解析】“countries”需用“other”修饰。
6.
【命题立意】考查代词。
【试题解析】此处代词替代的是上文提到的第一本书，故用单数代词替代。
7.
【命题立意】考查副词。
【试题解析】“very”修饰形容词，“very
much”修饰动词。
8. 【命题立意】考查固定短语。
【试题解析】此处考查固定短语be proud of。
9. 【命题立意】考查形容词。
【试题解析】become在此句中为系动词，后面应该用形容词而不是副词。
10.【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。
【试题解析】此处考查固定短语spend
time(in)doing something。
第二套
Last
week, there was a program calling “Learning to
Respect Our Parents”
called
in our school. That is known to us that
respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese
It
traditional moral value. And most students
nowadays are “the only child”. We
values But
They
often think of themselves as the centre
of their family.
.
As for the program,
eight “dos ” have∧ worked out for the students to
follow.
been
For an example, we are
advised to remember our parents’ birthdays. Beside
this,
Besides
it is necessary that we should also
tell our parents what we are going to do when
we go out. The program has been such
successful that it has been high praised by many
so
highly
people.
【参考答案及解析】
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
【语篇解读】本文讲述了在学校开展尊敬父母的活动并取得很大成功。
【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。
【试题解析】calling与其所修饰的词program
之间是被动关系，故改为过去分词
【命题立意】考查主语从句中的形式主语。
【试题解析】此句为主语从句，形式主语用it，后接由that引导的真正主语
【命题立意】考查名词单复数。
【试题解析】one of表示其中之一时
后面要用名词复数，故用values
【命题立意】考查连词。
【试题解析】上下文是转折而不是并列。
【命题立意】考查代词。
【试题解析】根据下文的themselves 和their来判断。
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6. 【命题立意】考查被动语态。
【试题解析】此处意为八条准则被制定出来，应该用被动语态而不是主动语态。
7.
【命题立意】考查冠词。
【试题解析】举例说明的固定短语是for example,冠词an
多余，所以去掉。
8. 【命题立意】考查介词。
【试题解析】根据上下文语境可知此处表示此外，而beside表示在旁边。
9.
【命题立意】考查固定搭配。
【试题解析】此处successful是形容词，故用so修饰。
10. 【命题立意】考查学生对形容词与副词。
【试题解析】此处修饰动词praised，故用highly。
第三套
短文改错（1×10=10分）
One of my happiest
childhood memories were—wasis having dinner with
my parents
and two sisters. As a result,
加having found that we seldom had a chance to get
together, then we decided that we would set
aside three evenings the--a week for a
sit-
down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed
days for our
experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or
--and Fridays. After a couple of week--weeks
of trying this plan, almost everyone was
unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist
the idea. They said they would rather删to spend
the time with their friends or take
part in
some activities. Gradual- Gradually, though, they
began to see these evenings
together for--in a
very different way. We laughed a lot and we
discussed about each
other’s problems. Since--
After a few months, we all felt that we had been
able to
build much strong--stronger
relationships with the family than we had before.
第四套
T
here was a rich man who carried
many treasures to the distance to look into
happiness.
for
But after a long march, he
fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path
of the mountain
failed
while a farmer carrying a large bunch of
firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man
when
said,
“I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m
unhappy?” The farmer put down the
wealthy
heavy firewood, wiped the sweat
pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put
down and
pleasantly
you’ll be happy!” The rich man ∧inspired
suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried
that
was
tired
heavy jewelry, afraid
of being robbed or murdered. How could you be
happy? So the rich man
he
helped the poor with
jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the
taste of happiness.
deeds
第五套
I’ve learnt from the notice that
you’re looking for an English editor for us school
paper.
our
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I’m written this letter
to apply for the position.
writing
I’m
Li Hua, ∧ Senior Three student in our school. In
my view, I met your requirements:
a meet
for one thing, I’m willing to devote some of
my spare time to serve others; for another,
serving
I’m good at both English or Fine Arts.
I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be
glad
and also
if you could offer to me an opportunity for an
interview.
I’m looking forward to your
kindly reply at your earliest convenient.
kind convenience
第六套
A
woman was taken to the hospital. While having an
operation, she had a nearly
near
death experience. Seeing God, she asked
how this was it. God said, “No, you had
ifwhether have
another 40
years.” On recovery the women decided to have a
plastic surgery. She had
woman
someone change her hair color, thinking
since she had so many time to live, she’d
much
better make full use from it. Finally she
got out of the hospital. While crossing the
of
street, she∧killed by an ambulance speeded
by. Arriving in the front of God,
was
speeding
she demanded, “ They said
I had another 40 years!” God replied, “ But I
didn’t
You
recognize you.”
第七套
One day, some children were playing
hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate
when named
shouting. “Help!
The golden lion is coming after me!” They go
running to help Tate, only∧ find
A went
to
him laughing on the
ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do that. If
you are real in trouble,
really
nobody will come to help you.”
In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The
river is flooding and I can’t swim. Help!” The
On
children didn’t believe her this time. But a
girl saw everything and called the others to save
him.
him
Tate was not
sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from
that day on, Tate never did that again.
friends
第八套
Recently I have done a survey
on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our
school.
The result showed that over 40% of
them are fond of playing musical instruments in
their
spare
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shows
time because it can improve their life
quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which
helps them
surfing
know about world affair . What
surprises me most is∧ the number of the students
paid much
attention
affairs
that paying
to reading
and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up
for 12% , although one is a best way
the
to gain knowledge and the other to keep
fit.
Therefore,
many students are strongly advised to take on
reading as knowledge is power. Plus,
more up
they
should take an active part in sports and develop
other hobbies proper besides entertainment.
properly
第九套
The best advice I received in
my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me
some
gave
advice, but I seldom took them
seriously. One day he was encouraged me to
participate in a
it
speech competition. So I signed up and after
the competition, I did my best to be full
prepared.
before fully
But
the moment I stood on the stage, I was such
nervous that my mind completely went blank.
so
The experience of lose a
competition was really painful. Then, my dad said,
“My son, life
losing
is
like∧battlefield. You have to lose many time to
win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice,
a times
to
I never give up when I do anything.
﹨
第十套
Last Friday, I learned a
lesson about telling lies. Early in
morning, I didn’t want to
the (或in改为that)
go to school, but I
pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying
when I told her. She left
so
worried
quickly and I thought she has gone to
work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of
pill. She said
had
pills
that she had asked for leave to look
for me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not
tell the true. That
after truth
afternoon, my teacher came to visit to me. I
felt so regretfully for telling lies. I had wasted
regretful
anybody’s time. Finally, I admitted
I had lied and promised never to do it again.
everybody’s everyone’s
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