第四讲 科技翻译中的语法成分选择
广东高考英语-四年级信息技术教案
Chapter Four Grammatical Items in
Scientific Translation
Adverbial turned
subjects
1.时间状语变主语
然而,在19世纪60年代的内战中,交战双方都部署了更大的兵力,其中就包括炮兵。
But the Civil War in the 1860s saw the
competing sides field much larger forces,
including
artillery.
1863年7月3日,葛底斯堡战役的第三日成为美国内战中部署野战炮兵的一个好的战例。
The third day of the Battle of Gettysburg, 3
July 1863, provides a good example of field
artillery
employment during the Civil War.
在过去的五年里,围棋软件虽然进步很大,却没有重大突破。
The past
five years have yielded incremental improvements
in Go programs but no breakthroughs
2.目的状语变主语
要让电脑模仿人那样思考牵涉到人工智能的核心技术,例如要教会电脑如
何学习、下结论、
战略考虑、知识再现、模式识别,以及也许是最引人注目的技术——直觉认知。
The challenge of programming a computer to
mimic that process goes to the core of artificial
intelligence, which involves the study of
learning and decision-making, strategic thinking,
knowledge representation, pattern recognition
and perhaps most intriguingly, intuition.
3.条件状语变主语
如果研制出不同的、更轻的如锌与空气结合的材料,就能生产具有更大能量密度的电池。
But research into different, lighter materials
- such as zinc combined with air - could produce
batteries with greater
如果能在更小空间中储存更大功率,便携式电脑就能造得比现在任何超轻电脑还要轻。
If
more power can be packed into less space, portable
computers can be made even lighter than the
current crop of ultralights.
只要把这个设计稍作修改,就可以大大提高该武器的杀伤力。
Slight
modifications of the design enable the lethality
of the weapon to be greatly enhanced.
4.
原因状语变主语
与此同时,由于美国的加入,以及德国后勤和人员资产不断受到压力,同盟国逐渐在数
量上
占据了空中优势。
Meanwhile, a combination
of the arrival of the Americans and the continued
strain on German
logistical and personnel
assets gradually saw the Allies gain complete
numerical superiority in the
air.
通过监测降水动向和其他降水量,科学家就能了解又一大气谜团---风。
Detecting movement of rain and other
precipitation tells scientists about another piece
of the
atmospheric puzzle --- wind.
但该战机没有垂直尾面,这显示了该战机将实现全向宽频隐形优化,
该性能是极具挑战性的
反介入区域封锁的环境所需要的。
But the lack of
vertical tail surfaces suggests the aircraft would
be optimized for all-aspect
broadband stealth,
which would be needed for operations in the most
challenging anti-accessarea
denial
environments.
由于改进了组织架构,如90年代发展的全球定位系统,使炮兵在通信方面的弱点最小化。
Improved organizational structures, such as
the development of global positioning systems in
the
1990s, have minimized artillery
vulnerabilities in terms of communications.
5. 方式状语
经过持续不断改进其持久(巡逻)能力、传感能力、数据处理和通信能力,情
报、监视、侦
查无人机在防御情报和民用领域的应用已扩展到陆地以外。
Continuously improving capabilities in
persistence (loitering), sensors, data processing
and
communications have broadened ISR UAV use
over land in both defenseintelligence and civil
roles.
谓语部分变主语
但是中国向太平洋地区单边投送两栖部队---无论理由多么正当---
都有将整个地区推入长期
危机的风险。
But unilateral
projection of Chinese amphibious forces into the
Pacific --- no matter how strongly
justified
--- risks pushing the entire region into perpetual
crisis.
人们不得不决定采用固定机翼,这样飞机才能令人满意的飞行。
The
decision to use a fixed wing was one that had to
be made before any airplane could fly
satisfactorily.
人们还担心基因会从基改植物流入其他植物。
Worries about the flow of genes from the
original plant to others also surround GM crops.
宾语变成主语
Many different
schemes for performing these three functions have
evolved during recent years
近年来,人们对这三个环节的实现提出了许多不同的方案。
“天宫一号”与“神州
八号”飞船对接后,中国还将发射“神舟九号”以及“神舟十号”,与“天宫
一号”对接。
After docking with the Shenzhou-8 spacecraft,
it will await the Shenzhou-9 and -10 aircraft, to
be
launched successively for more docking
tests.
北京时间29日晚21时16分,中国在酒泉卫星发射中心载人航天发射场
,用“长征二号FT1”
运载火箭,将中国全新研制的首个目标飞行器“天宫一号”成功发射升空。一个
月后,中国
将发射神舟八号,与天宫一号实现交会对接。
China’s first
space lab Tiangong-1 successfully blasted off at
9:16 pm Beijing Time Thursday
from Jiuquan
Satellite Launch Center. The unmanned module,
carried by a Long March-2FT1
rocket, will test
space docking with the Shenzhou-8 spacecraft in a
month from now.
互联网在设计之初对安全问题考虑不足,形成了如今一个核心简单、边缘复杂的Internet
体
系模型。
The insufficient consideration of
safety issues in the early days of Internet has
led to today's
Internet system model that is
simple in the core while complex in the periphery.
The implications of the chip shortage are
also being felt beyond the technology industry.
科技产业之外的领域也因芯片短缺而受到影响。
对于TNC的这些不足,目前也提出了一些解决思路和方法:如IBM
公司在TNC架构的基
础上提出了一个完整性评估层协议(完整性报告协议)。
Solutions have been proposed to address the
deficiencies of TNC, including IBM’s integrity
assessment protocol (integrity reporting
protocol) based on the TNC architecture.
整句变主语
That close proximity and the way
it was found so early in astronomers' search for
habitable
planets hints to scientists that
planets like Earth are probably not that rare. 天文学家们搜寻可居住行星的方法是极为相似的,而且是早就有的,这提示科学家们,像地
球一样可
以居住的行星可能并不少见。
英美两国的工程师正开发这种长航时多源情报器,这将为地面部队提供有价值的侦察情报。
The LEMV (Long Endurance Multi-Intelligence
Vehicle) being developed by British and
American engineers will ensure troops on the
ground to get valuable surveillance information.
EEPROM存储器件正广泛地应用在太空和军事领域,使得国际上对EEP
ROM抗辐射性能的
研究越来越多。
Wide applications of
EEPROM memory devices in space and military field
leads to more and
more researches focusing on
its radiation hardened characteristics
internationally.
主语信息焦点转移
苹果的问题很可能比竞争对手少,因为它有财力去满足芯片需要。
Apple is
likely to suffer less than its rivals, as it has
the financial muscle to fight for the chips it
needs.
LAMV的特色是用独立的咒余计算机系统分别进行飞行管理、稳定性调整和控制。
The
LAMV features redundant, independent computer
systems for flight management, stability,
and
control.
人们对基因改造食物的态度,似乎愈来愈壁垒分明,一边的人支持,另一边的人则是畏惧。
The world seems increasingly divided into
those who favor genetically modified (GM) foods
and
those who fear them.
多亏了几份负面的报告,
目前大众主要关注的是Bt作物;管理当局也正积极评估基改作物
的风险。
At the
moment, public attention is most trained on Bt
crops, thanks to several negative studies.
Regulators, too, are surveying the risks
intensely.
LAMV在盘旋以及过渡阶段的飞行都由计算机控制,驾驶员要做的只是控制飞
行速度和方
向。它可以自动阻止由阵风所引起的非期望运动。
Since
computers control the LAMV's flight during hover
and transition, the only operator input is
to
control speed and direction. Undesirable movements
caused by wind gusts are prevented
automatically.
主语位移
The
technology industry faces a growing shortage of
semiconductors and other high-tech
components
following a failure to invest in new manufacturing
facilities during the recession.
由于未能在经济衰退期间投资
新的生产设施,科技行业正日益面临着半导体和其他高科技产
品的短缺。
作业
过去人们认为火星是一颗类
似地球的行星,有着四季的更替,它的两极被冰覆盖并相应作着周期的变化。冰雪
的存在证明了水份的存
在,也就是生命存在的前提。有人还曾提出火星上面的暗区可能是植物带。因此,火星
生命之谜深深地吸
引着人们。为了探索火星的秘密,近30年来己有20余只探测器对火星作过科学探测,其中
主要是美国
的水手9号、海盗1号和海盗2号。这些探测器拍了数千张照片。每个探测器都能自动地从火星上
采集土
壤样品进行实验,并将实验结果传回地球。实验结果表明:火星上没有江河湖海,土壤中也没有植物、
动
物或微生物的任何痕迹,更没有“火星人”等智慧生命存在。
1996年12月美国科学家
宣布:1984年在南极洲发现的ALH84001陨石来自火星。研究其岩石成分发现,
这些陨石可能
含有原始生命的微化石。这表明几十亿年前的火星很可能相当温暖潮湿,适合生命的存在与维持。
复杂定语的翻译
6.1
军事科技英语中的复杂定语
6.1.1 英汉定语的差异
定语是用来说明名(代)词的品质与特征的词或一组词。(薄冰, 2002: 466)定语是句子<
br>中的一个较常见的语法成分,英汉句子中都不可少。但两者之间存在不少区别。第一,扮演
定语的
成分不尽相同。英语中可以作定语的有形容词(a natural musician)、名词(a baby
girl)、
代词(your hair)、数词(a second chance)、副词(the
way out)、不定式(her promise to write)、
动名词(a
sleeping child)、现在分词(a walking dictionary)、过去分词(an
improved version)、
介词介词短语(a map of
china)、从句(the car that is parked outside is
mine)和句子(He is
a God-wants-to-save-his-soul-
but-cannot-find-it man)。(薄冰, 2002: 466-469)汉语中,做定语
的成分有名词(数学老师)、数量词(一层雪)、代词(哪个老师)、形容词(短语)(语文老
师)、动词(短语)(新出版的杂志)、主谓短语(衣服破旧的老大妈)、固定短语(五光十色
的)等等
。(刘月华, 2004: 469-474)第二,定语信息容量不同。英语的定语一般根据信息容
量
的大小可分前置定语和后置定语,分为左分支和右分支现象。这种左右开工的定语结构给
了英语非常大的
修辞潜能。然而,与英语不同的是,汉语中不存在后置定语。在传统的汉语
语法中,即使前置定语也是少
用或不用的。
6.1.2 复杂定语的概念与分类
本章中的“复杂定语”主要是指形容词、
名词等天生符合定语特征、适合充当定语成分
的词语。从英汉对比的角度来说,这些在英语句子中充当定
语的成分,在汉语中没有现成的、
同样充当定语的语言成分,因此在某种程度上也可称之
为“非典型性定语成分”。复杂定语
的功能在于,能够以较为紧凑的形式传递相对大量的信息。由于其信
息传递的高效性,复杂
定语在英语中,尤其在用语正式的军事科技英语中比比皆是。下面主要列举几类常
见的、且
易对翻译造成一定障碍的复杂定语。
1. 前置定语
如上所述,英语中的
前置定语类别较多,但通常会给翻译造成一定障碍的有以下两种:
一为现在分词;二为过去分词;还有一
种为复合定语,即由两个或以上的词语复合而成的定
语结构,且一般具有一定的临时组合性。其中最为常
见的为过去分词复杂定语。三种定语结
构分别如下:
While the laser
won’t be considered a big gun just yet, Navy
officials say it will provide a new
layer of
protection against swarming small boats and
unmanned aerial vehicles.(现在分词)
The FCS
consists of a networked battle command system and
advanced vehicles and
weapons platforms.(过去分词)
What is interesting is that we are already
doing this. For example, Patriot missile
batteries,
close-in-weapons systems, cruise
missiles, and other “smart” weapons are already
pretty
autonomous.(复合定语)
2. 后置定语
最为典型的后置复杂定语是定语从句。例如:
VR (Virtual Reality)
technology also has other potential applications
that can make military
activities safer.
另有一种后置分词定语结构较为常见,也值得探讨。后置分词定语通常可视为定语从句
的一种变体,两者
常可互相转换。一般而言,被修饰词与定语从句的谓语动词之间为被动关
系时,从句可替换为过去分词定
语短语;为主动关系时,则一般可替换为现在分词定语结构。
例如:
The FCS
(Future Combat System) simulators include three
computer monitors and a pair of
joystick
controllers attached to a console.
本句中的“attached”引导的定语短语可以被视为等同于“whichthat were
attached to a
console”的省略形式。
They use an
Xbox console to run the game and take on the role
of a team leader attempting
to achieve
specific objectives in various scenarios.
本句中的“attempting to…”则可视为“who is
attempting to….”的变体。
6.2 翻译策略
复杂定语至少可有以下三种
翻译方法:一,调换位置。有的后置定语结构可以调节为前
置结构,反之亦然;二,译为其他语法结构,
如状语、补语等;三,译为其他语法单位。一
般为上一级语法单位,如句子,甚至是句群。应对复杂定语
从句时,应主要考虑以下两点:
一,定语的信息含量。信息含量小时,可尝试直接译为前置定语;而信息
含量越大,则越趋
向于非对应处理,即转换为其他语法结构或单位。二,汉语中是否有类似结构和语义。
一般
而言,后置定语结构需要进行较大的转换,因为其在汉语中属于缺项;而前置定语结构,通
常仍可以译为前置定语结构,但由于信息量增加,常常需要译为短语结构。下面分别举例来
讨论前置和后
置定语的翻译策略。
虽然人们还不把激光视为大炮,海军军官称其将提供一个新的保护层,
以防四周游弋的小型
船只和无人机的袭击。
While the laser won’t
be considered a big gun just yet, Navy officials
say it will provide a new
layer of protection
against swarming small boats and unmanned aerial
vehicles.
若使用可调节的或者有人监控的自动技术,人们仍须和其互动并加以指引。
Using
adjustable autonomy or supervised autonomy, humans
will still have to interact with the
machines
and help guide them.
爱国者导弹连、近战武器系统、巡航导弹以及其他“智能”武器都已经相当自动化了。
For example, Patriot missile batteries, close-in-
weapons systems, cruise missiles, and other
“smart” weapons are already pretty autonomous.
未来军事将使用无人机和无人驾驶的全地形车,并且将越来越多地使用机器人技术。(状语)
Unmanned aerial and terrain vehicles and
increased use of robotics will be a part of
tomorrow’s
military.
现在的纤维有一毫米厚,对于制服
而言仍然显得太厚。美国陆军士兵系统中心的研究人员希
望能够在未来十年继续将这一概
念精细化,将厚度削减至100微米。
The millimeter-thick fibers
are too thick for a uniform and researchers at the
Army’s Soldier
Systems Center hope to scale
them down to 100 microns over the next 10 years as
they refine the
concept further.
虚拟现实技术还有可以使得军事行动更具安全保障的其他潜能。
VR technology
also has other potential applications that can
make military activities safer.
计算机科学家设计
的未来作战系统模拟器可通过网络互连,有助于完成包括扮演各种角色的
多个参与者在内的复杂训练任务
。
Computer scientists designed FCS simulators
to link together in a network, facilitating
complex training missions involving multiple
participants acting in various roles.(现在分词)
未来作战系统模拟器包括连接控制台的三台电脑显示器和两个操纵杆式控制器。
The
FCS (Future Combat System) simulators include
three computer monitors and a pair of
joystick
controllers attached to a console.
模拟器装在一个电子运作基地或液压升降系统上,根据用户指令和模拟事件做出反应。
The
simulator sits on top of either an electronic
motion base or a hydraulic lift system that reacts
to user input and events within the
simulation.
阿尔法计划小组是美国联合部队司令部一个快速概念分析小组,
目前正在进行一项研究。该
研究主要研发和使用机器人,使其能够在战场上替代人类执行大多数作战任务
。
Project Alpha, a U.S. Joint Forces Command
rapid idea analysis group, is in the midst of a
study
focusing on the concept of developing
and employing robots that would be capable of
replacing
humans to perform many, if not most
combat functions on the battlefield.
因为飞机
的驾驶舱布局各不相同,因此不存在某种完美模拟方案能够精确再现所有飞机。
Because one
aircraft can have a very different cockpit layout
than another, there isn’t a perfect
simulator
choice that can accurately represent every
vehicle.
他提到,美国国防部高级研究计划局发起了一场名为“大
挑战”的竞赛,其中不乏概念交通
工具,由民间研发,且由机器人控制。
He noted
that DARPA sponsored a competition called “Grand
Challenge” that featured
civilian-developed,
robot-controlled concept vehicles.
Turn the following sentences into Chinese
1. The system includes a special load-bearing
vest that holds the batteries for the unit and a
wireless computer unit.
2. The Uniform
would transmit information such as who you are,
what time you went down,
where the wounds are,
what is the estimated severity of the wound, et
cetera.
3. Virtual environments work well in
military applications. When well designed, they
provide
the user with an accurate simulation
of real events in a safe, controlled environment.
4. Trainers use everything from CAVE systems
to head-mounted displays and treadmills to
reinforce concepts and techniques with
trainees.
5. Soldiers may have armed robots
as battle buddies by early next year, according to
industry
and military officials attending the
biennial Army Science Conference.
6. Boron
carbide -- ceramic material used in today’s
upgraded body armor -- was once
expensive to
make.
7. Other DARPA items developed for
troops’ use in Iraq and elsewhere include the
Phraselator --
a hand-held device that
translates spoken English phrases into foreign
speech -- and a
compact water-sterilizing
device.
8. DARPA also is working on
miniaturized unmanned aerial vehicles, improved
digital
communications systems, and more
precise sensor systems that could be used to
detect and
destroy hidden surface targets.
9. It’s common throughout several Coalition-
maintained bases in Afghanistan to see small
green- or tan-colored, all-terrain vehicles
maneuvering through the country’s rocky, dusty
terrain, hauling equipment and personnel from
one place to another.
10. Individual
vehicles are designed with different special
features, from blackout lights to
litter-
carrying capabilities, but overall, their uses are
similar.
11. The Army uses several specific
devices to train soldiers to drive specialized
vehicles like tanks
or the heavily-armored
Stryker vehicle.
12. They don’t understand
how close we really are to being able to implement
these
technologies in some sort of cohesive
way into a cohesive force to achieve the desired
effects.
13. PCs have provided dedicated
maritime security and force protection capability
to U.S. 5th
Fleet since 2003.
14. The gold
fibers don’t actually communicate anything quite
yet, although the concept is
rooted in
technology that demonstrated fibers could be
fabricated not just of single-material
glass
fibers, but a “multiplicity of materials”.
15. The navigation, seamanship and ship-
handling trainer (NSST) accurately replicates the
bridge
of a large Navy ship.
16. The
system consists of a weapons platform mounted on a
Talon robot, a product of the
engineering and
technology development firm Foster-Miller.
17.
Some flight simulators include a completely
enclosed module, while others just have a series
of computer monitors arranged to cover the
pilot’s field of view.
18. Engineers mounted a
camera to a servo-controlled base (a base platform
connected to one or
more motors that adjust
the position of the base by rotating or tilting
the platform).
19. In the next section, we’ll
look at the various simulators commonly used in
military training.
20. Some flight simulators
include a completely enclosed module, while others
just have a series
of computer monitors
arranged to cover the pilot’s field of view.
21. Others, however, are mounted on a set of
pneumatic arms that can tilt the module, allowing
it to physically simulate a diving or
surfacing maneuver.
22. Military officials and
video game studios have partnered to create
realistic, immersive virtual
scenarios that
help soldiers acclimate to various combat
environments and situations.
23. They use an
Xbox console to run the game and take on the role
of a team leader attempting
to achieve
specific objectives in various scenarios.
24. Some programs are web-based,
allowing recruits to interact with experienced
soldiers and
learn about real-life techniques
that can help keep them safe.
25. It’s a
wearable and wireless system that allows soldiers
to move unencumbered through a
virtual
environment with the help of the following
virtual-reality gear.
26. The system includes
a wireless weapon controller that matches the
size, weight and shape of
real military
weapons.
27. The viewer wears a pair of
special goggles that create the illusion of depth,
so that the images
displayed on the workbench
appear to be three dimensional.
28. The
control box weighs about 30 pounds, with two
joysticks that control the robot platform
and
the weapon and a daylight viewable screen.
29.
It is said that the thermobaric bomb that was used
in Afghanistan to destroy al Qaeda and
Taliban
members in their mountain hideouts is directly
linked to the basic research in DoD.
30. The
concept has been demonstrated, to a limited
degree, with a monkey that was taught to
move
a telerobotic arm simply by thinking about it.