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在成长中你得到了父母的.长大后你想要
为父母做什么.英语作文

【篇一：2015年6月英语四级作文真题点评：父母在
子女成长中的角色】


2015年6月英语四级作文真题点评：父母在子女成长中的角色 本
题由图画中女儿的说话 good news mom! i was accepted to the
college of your choice. 引出话题，探讨家庭生活中父母为子女做
决定的现象。这一话题没有明确的正误指向，要求考生首先对图画
进行描述，再确立自己的观点 ，提出论点和论据。

大学英语四级考试作文一般与生活实际相联系。本题考查的难点在于要求考生提出对父母为子女做决定这一现象的思考，赞同要有赞
同理由，反对要有反对的论据，中 立也要写出中立的点在哪里。切
忌停留在父母为子女做决定这一现象的表面描述。

正如我们在考前押题中所讲，此题建议考生采取三段式写作。

三段式：

第一段：简要描述图画内容（in this illustration, we can see that
a teenage girl happily informs her mother of the news that she
is admitted to the college which her mother has selected for
her.） + 拉到自己较熟悉的结论观点（the picture implies the
great influence that parents have on their childrens decisions.
choosing college for them is a typical example.） = 引出下一段

第二段：确立观点（it is evident that parents thoughts and
behaviors shape how their children think and behave. however,
in my opinion, it is inappropriate for parents to make every
major life decision for their children.） + 两方面原因（for one
thingfor another）

第三段：all in all… 提出建议，重申观点。

以上为英语四级作文点评，大家注意审题清楚，先确立论点和论据
再下笔。希望大家总结经验 ，下次考得更高！

2015年6月英语四级答案汇总

大学英语四级考试

【篇二：2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女
成长过程中的角色】

2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女成长过程中的角色 题
目：

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an
essay based on the picture

below. you should start your essay with a brief description of
the picture and

comment on parents role in their childrens growth. you should
write at least 150

words but no more than 180 words.

good news mom! i was accepted to the college of your choice.
范文：

as is clearly depicted in the above picture, a daughter tells his
mother a piece of good news that she has been admitted to a
university as her mother desires. there is no denial in saying
that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we can
not help thinking over a question: what role should parents
play in their childrens growth?

in childrens personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a
person who helps children develop self- dependence, which
carries more significant to childrens future life. in other words,
parents should encourage their sons or daughters to be
independent rather than reliant on others.

to conclude, in childrens personal growth, parents are
responsible to care for their children. however, considering
that they will grow up and live their own life in some day,
parents should enable their children to acquire the ability to be
self- independent.

译文：

如上所示，一个女儿告诉她妈妈有 一个好消息：她已经考上妈妈为
她选择的大学了。不可否认的是，这幅画给我们留下了非常深刻的
印象，因此我们禁不住要思考这样一个问题，那就是，父母在子女
成长过程中应该扮演什么角色呢？ 个人认为，父母在子女成长过程
中所扮演的角色主要有以下两方面。一方面，毫无疑问，父母有责
任照顾好自己子女。另一方面，在子女的成长过程中，父母应扮演
帮助子女养成自立的角色，因为自立 对子女的未来成长是至关重要
的。换句话说，父母应该鼓励自己的孩子自力更生而不是依赖他人。

总之，在子女的个人成长过程中，父母有责任照顾好子女。然而，
考虑到总 有一天子女会长大成人，自己生活，因此父母应该让子女
养成自立更胜的能力。 2015年6月英语四级答案汇总

大学英语四级考试

【篇三：2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女
成长过程中的角色】


2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女成长过程中的角色 题
目：

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an
essay based on the picture

below. you should start your essay with a brief description of
the picture and

comment on parents role in their childrens growth. you should
write at least 150

words but no more than 180 words.

good news mom! i was accepted to the college of your choice.
范文：

as is clearly depicted in the above picture, a daughter tells his
mother a piece of good news that she has been admitted to a
university as her mother desires. there is no denial in saying
that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we can
not help thinking over a question: what role should parents
play in their childrens growth?

from my point of view, during the process of a childs growth,
the role of parents is mainly listed as the following two aspects.
on one hand, there is no doubt that parents are liable to take
good care of their children. on the other hand, in childrens
personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a person who
helps children develop self-dependence, which carries more
significant to childrens future life. in other words, parents
should encourage their sons or daughters to be independent
rather than reliant on others.

to conclude, in childrens personal growth, parents are
responsible to care for their children. however, considering
that they will grow up and live their own life in some day,
parents should enable their children to acquire the ability to be
self-independent.

译文：

如上所示，一个女儿告诉她妈妈有一个好消息：她已经考 上妈妈为
她选择的大学了。不可否认的是，这幅画给我们留下了非常深刻的
印象，因此我们禁不 住要思考这样一个问题，那就是，父母在子女
成长过程中应该扮演什么角色呢？ 个人认为，父母在子女 成长过程
中所扮演的角色主要有以下两方面。一方面，毫无疑问，父母有责
任照顾好自己子女。 另一方面，在子女的成长过程中，父母应扮演
帮助子女养成自立的角色，因为自立对子女的未来成长是至 关重要
的。换句话说，父母应该鼓励自己的孩子自力更生而不是依赖他人。

总之，在 子女的个人成长过程中，父母有责任照顾好子女。然而，
考虑到总有一天子女会长大成人，自己生活，因 此父母应该让子女
养成自立更胜的能力。 2015年6月英语四级答案汇总

大学英语四级考试