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小学五年级英语作文集锦
1、My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She ’s very
pretty. She is tall and
thin. She has two big
eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She
likes
cats very much. And she likes singing
and dancing, too. Her English is
very good. We
often play games in English classes. She is very
kind to us.
We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者
开门见山，
直接点题， 首先介绍了英语老师的姓名， 然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特
征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词 [组]，以免写出一些
错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
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2、This is me
Hi! My
Chinese name is Ma Fangyu. My English name is
Jane. I
m a happy girl. I live in Nanzhuang
Cun. My birthday is in December. My
favorite
colour is purple. My favorite pet is lovely dog. I
have two big
black eyes. I like English very
much. Every day I go to school on foot. I like
my school. There are 25 students in my class.
I love my school. This is me.
’
【参考翻译】
自我介绍
你好!~ 我的中文名字是马方宇。我的英文名字是简。我是一个快乐的女孩。
我居住在南庄村。 我的生日是在十二月。 我最喜欢的颜色是紫色。 我最喜欢的宠
物是可爱的小狗。 我有两只又大又黑的眼睛。 我非常喜欢英语。 我每天都步行去
学校。我喜欢我的学校。有 25 名学生在我班。我爱我的学校。这就是我。
3、关于我
(About me)
I’m a primary school student in
Taiyuan. My name is Wang Fei.
I’m twelve years
old. All my teachers are very friendly to me and I
like
them all.
I’m a tall girl. I have
long black hair and big bright eyes. All my
classmates say I ’m pretty.
My favorite
sport is ping-pong. I often watch ping-pong games
on TV. I like listening to music. I
be a
pianlist when I grow up.
I also like reading
all kinds of books. I can learn a lot from books.
Reading helps to open my eyes. Books are
really my best friends. They
will lead me to a
bright future.
’m good at playing the piano. I
want to
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我是太原的一个小学生。 我的名字是汪小菲， 十二岁。 我所有的老师都
对我很好，我也很喜欢他们。
我是一个高大的女孩。 有长长的黑发和明亮的大眼睛。
我所有的同学都
说我漂亮。
我最喜欢的运动是乒乓球。 我经常在电视上观看乒乓球比赛。
我喜欢听
音乐。我擅长弹钢琴，当我长大了我想成为一名钢琴家。
我也喜欢阅读各类书籍。
我可以从书本中学到很多。 阅读有助于开阔我
的眼界。书真是我最好的朋友。他们可以指引我走向光明的未来。
4、My School
I study at Nanzhuang Primary School. My school
is very big and
beautiful. There are a
building and a playground. There are many trees
and flowers. My classroom is very big and
bright. There are 25 students
in it. We study
hard and always help with each other. Our teachers
are
very nice. I like my school.
【参考翻译】
我的学习
我在南庄小学学习。我的学校很大而且漂亮。有一幢大楼和一个操场。
有许多树和花。我的教室又大又明亮。有 25 个学生。我们学习努力而且总是互
相帮助。我们的老师非常好。我喜欢我的学校。
5、丰富多彩的周末（ Colourful
weekend
Many people like the weekends, so do I
. Now let me tell you
about my weekends.
My weekends are so colourful. Saturday
morning, I usually climb
a mountain. Then, I
go to the zoo to visit my new friends Ben. In the
afternoon, I usually do homework and read
books. On Sunday, I usually
do sports, play
games, watch TV and read books.
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Last weekend, I went to a
zoo with my parents. Suddenly I saw a
little
monkey. It was hurt. We took care of him. Dad
said: ”How about
’ naming it Ben? ” We said: ”
Great ! ” We were so happy! But Ben can
t live
with us. So we gived it to the zoo. I was sad.
Next weekend. I ’m going to visit my new
friend Ben. I am going
to play with him. It is
going to be a happy moment.
I like my
weekends!
【参考翻译】
很多人都喜欢在周末，我也一样。现在让我告诉你关于我的周末。
我的周末是如此丰富多彩。星期六早上，我通常去爬山。然后，我去动
物园看我的新朋友本。当天下午，我通常做功课，阅读书籍。在周日，我一般会
做运动，玩游戏，看电视和看书。
上个周末，我去了动物园，和我的父母。突然，我看到了一只小猴子。
它受伤了，我们照顾它。爸爸说： “为它命名为本怎么样 ?”我们说：“太好了 !”
我们太高兴了 !但本不能和我们一起生活。所以我们送它去动物园。我很伤心。
下个周末。
我还要去看望我的新朋友本。 我要和他一起玩。 这将是一个
幸福的时刻。
我喜欢我的周末 !
6、My weekend
There are two
days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On
Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in
the morning and do my
homework in the
afternoon, and I often help my mother do some
cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my
grandparents in the morning and
do some
reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often
watch TV with my
parents. At that time, we can
talk with each other and say something
happily. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动， 记叙了周六和周日的
上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。
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即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午：看
望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。
我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写， 先说明什么
时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事， 有什么感受。 再按照活动顺序把活动内容
写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写 : a.一般过去时 (主要描述你上
个周末是怎样度过的 );b.一般现在时 (主要描述你经常怎样度过周末 );c.一般将来
时(主要描述你要怎样过周末 )。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用
一般现在时来写。
注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识， eg.(例)起床 get
up ，和新知识，
eg. Climb mountains 去爬山中的 un 很容易错写成
nu。还要注意不要出现病
”不要写成 “I often with my 句，eg. “I
often watch TV with my parents.
parents watch
TV . ” 词量上控制在 50 ~ 80 之间。
7、My Days of the
week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get
up at six o
day. I have breakfast at half past
six, and go to school at seven o
have classes
from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class
on Friday
and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I
don
and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己
的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为， 并特别强调了星期天的喜好，
写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化， 要依据提示，
结合自己的
实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
’t have to go to
school on school,
’clock every
’clock. I
8、My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is
rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long
ears. It ’s very small. It ’s white. It has a
short tail. It has red eyes. It likes
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eating carrots. It likes
jumping. I like it very much. It
friend. I
like the rabbit.
’s lovely. It ’s my best
【参考翻译】
我最喜欢的动物
我最喜欢的动物是兔子。它的名字是甜甜。甜甜有长耳朵。它非常小。
它是白色的。它有短短的尾巴。它有红红的眼睛。它喜欢吃萝卜。它喜欢跳。我
非常喜欢它。它是可爱的。它是我最好的朋友。我喜欢兔子。
9、I love my
dog
I have a little dog. Its name is Googlo.
He is three years old. He
has two big eyes.
They ’re black. He has one blue ear and one black
ear.
He is clever. I like my Googlo. He can
jump and run. He can
play football. He likes
some fruit. I love my dog--Googlo
【参考翻译】
我喜欢我的狗
我有一条小狗。 它的名字是 Googlo. 它是三岁。
它有两只大眼睛。 它们
是黑色的。它有一只蓝耳朵和一只黑耳朵。它很聪明。我喜欢我的
会跳和跑。它会踢足球。它喜欢一些水果。我爱我的狗— Googlo.
Googlo.
它
以“我的一天”为题，写一篇小短文。
10、My day
This is
my day. I'm very busy, but very happy. I got up at
6:45. I
had breakfast at 7:10 with my parents.
I said
parents. My parents smiled. I went to
school at 7:30. I said
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morning!
In the evening, I had dinner at
6:30. I did my homework at 7:00. I went to
bed
at 10: is my day!
【参考翻译】
我的一天
这是我的一天。
我很忙但是我很高兴。 我起床在六点四十五。 我吃早饭
在七点十分和我的爸妈。
我说早上好对我的爸妈。 我上英语课在八点四十。 在中
午，我吃午饭。在晚上，我吃晚饭在六点半。我做我的作业在七点。我睡觉在十
点。这就是我的一天。
11 、A Field Trip
It is a
nice day. Our class will have a field trip today.
The
classmates are very excited. Look! Here we
are. There ’re a lot of activities
to do. Amy
is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves.
They want to
write a report. Mandy is catching
butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob
are
playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a
picnic. There is a
lot of delicious food to
eat. Oh, who ’s that over there? It ’s Miss White.
’ll What is she doing? She is taking photos.
We had a very good time. I
never forget this
field trip.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，
记叙了同学们分别在郊
游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。 由于本单元主要
讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。
句型： × ×.
isare doing sth. She He is doing sth. They
sth.
注意： 活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、
描写感受时用一般现在时。
12 、In the park
It is
sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going
to the
park. We like the park very much. It is
very big and beautiful .There are
’re doing
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many trees and flowers in
it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old
man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a
book carefully. Two boys are
jumping on the
ground. Their mothers are talking with each other.
Two
birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are
swimming in the river. They are
very happy.
What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a
mouse. It
poor mouse.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的
活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，
元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型：
一般现在时：主语 + 谓语+其他
现在进行时：
(1)What +be (am,is
,are)+ 主语+v.-ing+ 其他?
其他。
由于本单
’s a
(2)主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+
13、My family
There are five people in my family. They are
my grandma,
grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look!
Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is
reading a
book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking
dinner. I am
doing my homework. I love my
family!
【要领点评】
写法：
这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，
表达了自己对家人的感情。
时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态， 所以建议采用现在进行时
态。
句型： 主语+be+ 动词的现在分词。
注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，
注意在写句子时要保持时态的完
整性，即系动词和动词的 ing 缺一不可。
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、My Village
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My village is
very beautiful. There are many houses in the
village.
Near the village, there is a forest.
A small river is in front of the village.
The
water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in
the river. Near the
river, you can see a
mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the
mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my
village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、
森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋
友们在写作时， 可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点， 尽量使用本单元学
过的单词或短语进行叙述。
15、My Birthday Party
Every year, when it ’s birthday, my parents
hold a party for me.
They invite my friend to
come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I
can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my
party, we can do many
things:
1. Light the
candles.
2. Sing a “Happy Birthday ” song.
3. Make a wish.
4. Blow out the candles.
5. Cut off the cake.
6. Eat the cake.
7. Open the presents.
8. Sing and dance.
9. Watch videos or play other games.
10.
Say goodbye with each other.
That ’s my
birthday party, is it interesting?
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的， 记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活
动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。
时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：
1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。
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2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。
3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。
句型：invite sb. to
do sth. 邀请某人做某事
注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性， 所表达的大体上都基本相同，
所以在
书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。 另外注意一些短语和单
词的书写不要发生错误： eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“ blow out the candles
能写成“ blow candles ”。
16 、My Seasons
We
have four seasons in a year. I can do many
interesting things
in each season. In spring,
the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites
when it ’s wind. And I can go hiking with my
family when it
cool. I like hiking. Summer is
hot in the north of China, but it
time. I
often go swimming. It can make me healthy and
strong. I can also
wear my beautiful dresses.
Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat
delicious fruits in this season. I can watch
the leaves fall. Winter comes,
it ’s often
snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows,
everything is
white. We can play with snow and
make a snowman, skate and ski. And
winter is
my favourite season, because of the Spring
Festival. I love
seasons. I love the nature.
【要领点评】
写法： 这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、
冬四季的更替来写的， 先讲明每个季节的特征， 之后再写在这个季节中的主要活
动或比较有代表性的活动。 同时讲一些自己的真实感受， 最后阐述自己最喜欢的
季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内
容，之后再去讲其他几个季节， 还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的
其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更
贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我
们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。 即：在什么季节， 天气如何，
我们可以做什么。
’s sunny and
’s not long
”而不
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注意：在写作内容上，
不可以像以往的内容那么简单， 因为有四个季节，
所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子
顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所
以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在 80 个词以内。
17 、In The
Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It
’s big and nice. Look! My
mother is cooking in
it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There
is a
big table here. There are many things on
it. What are these? They look
yummy! Oh, they
’re strawberries. And what are those? They are
grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨
房里有微波炉和电炉，
有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等， 以及妈妈在做饭， 非常
真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述
身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
18、I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I ’m in Class
Three, Grade Five. I ’
m helpful at home. I
can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep
the floor. After meals, I can help my mother
do the dishes. On Sunday, I
can wash the
clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是 “我可以帮助做家务” ，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助
做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时， 应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情， 这样会避免在作文
时显得太空，
因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。 写作时还要注意大
小写和时态。
19、My Favourite Food
Do you know what this
is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It
and thin.
It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is
a banana. Do you
know what that is? Guess
again! Its colour is orange. It ’s round. It looks
’s long
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like a small
ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I
like then a lot. I
like ice-creams. I like to
chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I
like them very much.
How about you? What
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food
是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举
’s your favourite food?
出自己最喜欢的每一种食物， 而是有详有略地进行介绍。 整篇文章用词准确、 语
言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字
典了。
寒假很快就要到了， 请你为你的寒假写一个计划。 快点把你的计划写出来吧 !
20、My Winter Holiday
It’s January. My
winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to
Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the
food in Thailand. In the winter
holiday, I am
going to play basketball. I am going to paint
pictures, too. I
will help my mother do some
housework. I will be very happy in my
winter
holiday.
【参考翻译】
我的寒假
一月了。我的寒假来到了。我打算去台湾。我将会坐飞机去那里。我喜
欢台湾的食物。在寒假，我打算要打篮球。我也打算画画。我将帮助我的妈妈做
一些家务活。我将会很开心在我的寒假。
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