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写作
一、范文展示。
1. 这学期学习了形容词的比较级，相信你能恰当 地运用它介绍你的好朋友，请
你从年龄、身高、体重、爱好等方面向我们介绍一下他(她)吧！
范文：
My friend
I have a lovely friend at school. Her name is Amy. She is 12 years old now.
She is one year older than me. She is 1. 5 meters tall. She is 43 kilograms and I'm
41 kilograms. She's taller and heavier than me. We both have round faces and
long hair. But my eyes are bigger than hers. Winter is our favourite season. And
we have the same hobby. We both like playing table tennis. So we often play
table tennis together after school. How happy we are!
译文：
我的朋友
在学校我有一个可爱的朋友。她叫埃米。她现在12岁了。她比我年长1
岁。她高1. 5米， 重43千克，我重41千克。她比我又高又重。我们都有圆
脸和长头发。但是我的眼睛比她的大。冬天是 我们最喜爱的季节。我们有相
同的爱好，我们都喜爱打乒乓球，所以我们经常放学后一起打乒乓球。我们
多么快乐啊！
2. 假设你是李雷，请你给你的英国笔友Jack写一封信，告诉他你是如何度过周
末的。
范文：
Dear Jack，
I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning，I did my homework. My
mother and I went shopping in the afternoon. We bought some apples. My
mother bought a football for me. I was very happy. On Sunday，I visited my
grandpa. He had a cold. He stayed at home and slept. I did housework for him. I
cleaned his room. And I also helped him wash his clothes and cook dinner. I was
tired in the evening.
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Did you have a busy weekend？Please tell me.
Love，
Li Lei
译文：
亲爱的杰克：
上周末我很忙碌。周六上午我写我的家庭作业。下午我和我妈妈一起去
购物。我们买了一些苹果 。我妈妈给我买了一个足球。我很高兴。周日我去
看望我的爷爷。他感冒了。他呆在家里睡觉。我为爷爷 做家务。我打扫他的
房间。我还帮他洗衣服和做晚饭。到了晚上，我觉得很累。
你有过一个忙碌的周末吗？请告诉我吧。
爱你的，
李雷
3. 去年的寒假生活一定给你留下了深刻的印象吧！你能和大家分享一下吗？
提示：(1)Where did you go?
(2)How did you go there?
(3)What did you do there?
要求：
(1) 根据提示的问题，用一般过去时介绍。条理清晰，意思明确，句子通顺，
语法正确。
(2) 书写工整规范，50词左右。
范文：
Last winter holiday
My family went to Sanya last winter holiday. I was very excited. We went
there by plane. The weather was so warm in Sanya. Sanya is a beautiful city. We
took lots of pictures. The seafood there was very delicious. We also went
swimming and went fishing. And I bought some gifts for my friends. We stayed
there for three days. We enjoyed ourselves!


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译文：
去年寒假
去年寒假，我们一家人去了三亚。我非常兴奋 。我们乘飞机去那儿的。
三亚的天气那么温暖。三亚是一个美丽的城市。我们拍了很多照片。那里的海鲜非常美味。我们还去游泳和钓鱼了。我为我的朋友们买了礼物。我们在
那儿呆了三天。我们玩得 很愉快！
4. 二十年前你们的学校和现在相比有什么变化呢？请写几句话告诉我们它发生
了 什么样的变化。不少于50词。
范文：
Our school's changes
Twenty years ago，our school was very small. At that time，there were only
several buildings in it. There was no gym in the school. But now there's a new
one in our school. We can do sports there after school. Before, there wasn't a
library and there weren't any computer rooms in our school. Now we can read
books in our new library and use the Internet in computer rooms. Our school is
big and beautiful now. We all like it.
译文：
我们学校的变化
20年前，我们的学校非常 小。在那时，学校里只有几栋楼。学校里没有
体育馆。但是现在我们学校里有一个新的体育馆。放学后我 们可以在那里做
运动。以前我们的学校没有图书馆和电脑室。如今我们可以在新图书馆里看
书， 在电脑室里使用互联网。现在我们的学校又大又美丽。我们都喜欢它。
二、写作训练。
1. 认真看图，假设你就是图中的Lily，请向大家介绍一下你的家人。
提示：你已经学习了形容词的比 较级，相信你能恰当地运用它介绍你的家人。
说说你的家里有几口人，他们都是谁，从年龄、身高、体重 等方面介绍。
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，50词左右。
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2. 上周末，虽然你(Mike)做了很多事情，但是你过得很开心，以下是你做的事情。
a. get up and have breakfast
b. do your homework
c. play football with your friends
d. clean your bedroom
e. read a book
f. see a film with your family
请你给你的朋友Lily写一封信，告诉她你上周末所做的事情和你的感受。
要求：①书写格式正确，条理清晰，意思明确，可增添词句；
②标点正确，书写工整、规范；
③不少于50个单词。
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3. 根据下面的提示，介绍一下John的假期。
(1) 上周John和父母去新疆游玩，他们骑马、野营、吃美食、拍照、买礼物。
(2) 他们玩得很开心。
要求：不少于50词。
John's holiday
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4. 亲爱的同学们，你们的小学生活即将 结束。在6年的小学阶段，你一定有不
少的变化吧！请你根据表格的提示，告诉我们你的变化吧！不少于 8句话。

Height
Before
1. 2 meters
Now
1. 6 meters
45 kilograms
play badminton
Weight 38 kilograms
Hobby watch TV
My changes
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参考答案：

二、1. 范文： My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents
and me. My grandparents are both 64 years old. My grandfather is taller and
heavier than my grandmother. My father is forty years old. My mother is two
years younger than him. My mother is shorter and thinner than my father. I'm
twelve years old. I'm the thinnest and shortest in my family. I love my family.
2. 范文：
Dear Lily，
How are you? Last weekend, I did a lot of things, but I was very happy.
On Saturday, I got up at 7：30 and had breakfast at 8：00 in the morning.
Then I did my homework. In the afternoon, I played football with my friends. We
were happy. On Sunday, I cleaned my bedroom and read a book in the morning.
In the afternoon, I wanted to watch TV, but the TV didn't work. So I saw a film
with my family. The film was interesting.
How was your weekend? What did you do? Write to me soon.
Love，
Mike
3. 范文： John's holiday
Last week, John went to Xinjiang by plane on his holiday. He went there
with his parents. Every day he had fun with his parents. They rode horses and
went camping. They ate delicious food and bought gifts. They also took many
beautiful pictures. They stayed there for a week. They had a good time.
4. 范文： My changes
Before I was 1.2 meters tall. But now I am 0.4 meters taller than before. I'm
1.6 meters tall now. I was 38 kilograms before. I am 45 kilograms now. I am
heavier than before. Before my hobby was watching TV. But now I like playing
badminton. Every day I play badminton after school. I think sports can make me
stronger.
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