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Section Ⅴ Writing

旅游话题的电子邮件

文体感知
电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书 面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括
信头、正文和结尾部分。
电子邮件写作要 简单明了，便于阅读。所以像信尾敬语通常也很简明，常常只需一
个词，如“Thanks”，“Che ers”等。
电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的具体内容来确定。
增分佳句
1．It would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spare time．
如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。
2．I’d like to be your guide and sincerely invite you to come to my house．
我很乐意做你的向导，并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。
3．As a native here, I’d like to give you some recommendations of the scenic spots here．
作为一个当地人，我很乐意就这里的景点向你提一些建议。
4．I’d like to share my travel experience with you．
我很乐意与你分享我的旅游经历。
5．I suggest that you should pay a visit to the Great Wall next time and I’m sure you will have
a wonderful time．
我建议你下次应该参观长城，我确信你将玩得开心。
写作模板
Dear ××，
How happy I am to ________________(表明收到来信)．I’m much pleased to inform you
________________(简述个人的近况)．
Last week, we ________________(描述具体事情)．The landscape was
________________(描写具体的景物)．I felt ________________(描写感受)．
By the way, I’m going to ________________(表明意愿与期望)．
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
×××

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写作要求
假如你是王涛，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历
用邮件形 式与你的英国笔友Tom分享。
注意：词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I’d like to share my travel experience with you．_______________________________
__________ __________________________________________________ ____________
_________________________________ _______________________________________
______ __________________________________________________ ________________
_____________________________ ___________________________________________
__ __________________________________________________ ____________________
_________________________ _______________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________
_____________________ __________________________________________________ _
I’m looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Wang Tao
审题谋篇

词汇推敲
1．原本，起初
2．欣赏
3．历史的
4．旅游经历
5．一批；一些；许多的
6．文化财富
7．自然景观
8．过得愉快
originally
appreciate
historical
travel_experience
a_collection_of
cultural_treasures
natural_scenery
have_a_wonderful_time
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9．旅行
遣词造句
1．完成句子
①我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。
go_on_a_trip
My_parents_and_I_went_on_a_tr ip_to_the_capital_city_of_Tibet,_Lhasa．
②拉萨也是这个地区政治、经济和文化中心。
Lhasa_is_also_the_pol itical,_economic_and_cultural_center_of_the_region ．
③我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊。
We_were_all_surprised_ by_the_natural_scenery_there．
④那儿的自然景观让我们感到平静祥和。
The_natural_scenery_the re_made_us_feel_peaceful_and_quiet．
⑤我们首先参观了布达拉宫，它最初建于七世纪。
We_first_visited_th e_Potala_Palace_which_was_originally_built_in_the_ 7th_century．
2．句式升级
⑥用定语从句连接①②
My_pare nts_and_I_went_on_a_trip_to_the_capital_city_of_Ti bet,_Lhasa,_which_is_also_the_
political,_econo mic_and_cultural_center_of_the_region．
⑦用定语从句连接③④
We_were_all_surprised_by_the_na tural_scenery_there,_which_made_us_feel_peaceful_a nd_q
uiet．
⑧用非谓语动词提升⑤
We_first_visited_ the_Potala_Palace_originally_built_in_the_7th_cent ury．
妙笔成篇
_______________________________ _________________________________________
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___________________________ _____________________________________________
__________________________________________________ ______________________
_______________________ _________________________________________________
______________________________________________ __________________________
One possible version：
Dear_Tom，
I’d_like_to_share_my_ travel_experience_with_you．During this summer holiday, my
parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which is also the political, economic
and cultural center of the region．
We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century．And then, we
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appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Tibet Museum where we learned some useful
historical knowledge about Tibet．During those days, we were all surprised by the natural scenery
there, which made us feel peaceful and quiet．I strongly suggest that you travel to Tibet with me next
time and I’m sure you will have a wonderful time．
I’m_looking_forward_to_your_reply．
Yours，
Wang_Tao

假如你是李华，五一假期你和朋友李明跟随旅游团出去游玩 了。请根据下面的要点
提示，写一篇旅游日志。
要点：1．时间和地点；
2．旅游见闻；
3．旅游感想。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________ ________________________________________________ < br>_______________________________________________ _________________________
____________________ __________________________________________________ __
___________________________________________ _____________________________
________________ __________________________________________________ ______
One possible version：
My friend Li Ming and I had a good time this May Day holiday．We took a two-day trip to
Wuxi, Jiangsu Province．Our tourist group was composed of fifteen people．Mr Li, our tour guide,
left us a deep impression with his great sense of humor．On the first day, we visited a tourist
attraction where many great films and TV programs were shown．We watched some exciting live
performances and got to know how a film is made．On the next day, we went boating on the Lake Tai,
where we were amazed at the beautiful scenery．The people were friendly and the food was delicious
there．We really enjoyed ourselves in the two days．


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