四级作文议论文模式及范文
缅怀先烈的手抄报-2016年日历表
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（分析建议类）
How to Do Something
1. 某一事物的现状
2. 分析该事物的重要性(或危害性／社会意义等)
3.
怎样对待该事物
1) Much to our distress delight
surprise, these years have seen the popularity
worsening
much improvement a widespread
neglect of sth. (议论的主题) in society. 2) According
to a
recent official report survey opinion
poll, ...(佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to
run
its course, things are bound to turn for
the better worse. (Para. 1)
4) The
importance harmfulness significance of sth. to
sb. sth. else, (however), can be seen
from
the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first
place, …(分析I)6) In the second, ... (分析II) 7)
And above all, …(分析III) 8) To sum up, ...
(归纳总结)
(Para. 2)
9) So the most
pressing for us basic problem now is how to… 10)
In my opinion, the first
step should be
focused upon …(建议I) 11) Then, greater efforts must
be made to ... (建议II)
12) In one word, where
there is …, there is …(结论句) (Para. 3)
How
to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of
Today
1. 我国爱国主义教育的现状。
2.
分析爱国主义教育的重要意义。
3. 如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育？
1) Much to our distress, these years have seen
a widespread neglect of patriotic education in
our society. 2) According to some official
reports, many patriotic education centers have
been closed down or kept open to the public
for other more profitable purposes while many
of our national heroes have given way to
today’s pop stars in youths’ minds. 3) If this
current
is allowed to run its course, I am
afraid, things are bound to turn for the worse,
with less and
less sense of patriotism left in
the youth.
4) The significance of patriotic
education to our society, however, can be seen
from the
perspectives as follows. 5) In the
first place, the patriotic education can make
youth more
aware of the glorious history and
culture of our nation, thus building up their
sense of pride
as Chinese. 6) In the second,
the patriotic education helps youth value today’s
hard-earned
life so as to holddearer their
golden chances of enriching themselves with
knowledge in peace.
7) And above all, the
patriotic education can push youth to draw upon
more of their
capabilities in order to make
tomorrow’s life better than today’s and leave
behind
themselves more highlights for the
nation’s culture. 8) To sum up, patriotic
education is a
key ingredient in the all-round
development of youth.
（分析建议）
A
Letter to the College President
1.
就学校的某些变化给校长写封信
2. 分析变化主要表现在哪些方面
3.
提出（进一步）改进的意见
写作模式
1) I am delighted
(distressed) to find there have been
favorable(unfavorable) changes in …
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(议论的主题) since I came here. 2)
From my angle of view, these changes indicate that
what
you have done is in (out of) line with
...(作者的态度) 3) In the long run, they will produce
more positive (negative) effect on ...
4) Such desirable (undesirable) changes can be
found in the aspects as follows. 5)
First,
…(分析I)6）Second, ... (分析II) 7） And best(worst) of
all, …(分析III) 8) ... (进一步
阐述)
9) But
all the foregoing does not mean that there is
little room for further improvement
in …(that
there is little you can do about …)10) Instead, to
enrich (reverse)…, a richer
variety (a better
health) can be added to …(建议I) 11) And meanwhile,
... (建议II) 12) It
should be born in mind that
… (结论句)
A Letter to the College
President
1. 就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。
2.
分析该变化表现在哪些方面。
3. 提出进一步改进的建议。
A Letter to
the College President
1) I am delighted to
find there have been favorable changes in our
campus life since I came
here. 2) From my
angle of view, these changes indicate what you
have done is in line with the
interests of
undergraduates. 3) In the long run, they will
produce more positive effect on our
growth.
4) Such desirable changes can be found in
the aspects as follows. 5) First, our dining
conditions have turned for the better, thus
ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy
our hunger. 6) Second, your faculties have
paid as much attention to our emotional world as
to our intellectual growth, which in turn
lends much warmth of family to our life. 7) And
best of all, we find the campus a more
pleasant place to live on. 8) As a result of your
efforts, we now have more places to go to for
recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness
centers and reading rooms.
9) But all the
foregoing does not mean that there is little room
for further improvement in
our college life.
10) Instead, to enrich our life here to the
fullest, a richer variety should be
added to
our spare time as well as our curriculums. 11) And
meanwhile, we should be
allowed more access to
scientific research, social practice and the
frontier of our own fields.
12) It should be
born in mind that the purpose of our college life
is to prepare us for the
different needs of
tomorrow’s society.
（分析建议类）
What
Enlightenment Can Be Gained from Something
Challenging
1. 人类社会面临着······的挑战
2.
分析该挑战给我们的启迪
3. 怎样对待之
写作模式
1) While we
watch man’s ability to do sth. increase with each
passing day, he is often at a
loss what to do
in the face of such challenges puzzlesproblems as
… (议论的主题) 2) The
mystery of …, for example,
has cast much doubt on what we have long been
proud of or
firmly convinced of . 3) With a
constant emergence of … in the future, in fact,
man will have
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to be faced with
more and more of such challengesproblems.
4) If taken seriouslyobjectively, however,
these challenges can shed new light on ... 5) For
one thing, they can help …, as it is the
nature of man to...(分析I) 6）For another, they can
remind man of …, thus … (分析II) 7) And best of
all, they can prove man to be ...(分析III) 8)
In
this light, man has every reason to ... (进一步阐述)
9) So most important for man now is how to
respond to the challenges with positive effective
action. 10) On the one hand, in my opinion,
man must give full play to...(建议I) 11) But on
the other, man must prevent them from … (建议II)
12) As long as man sees treats them in
perspective, therefore, they will serve as an
ever-increasing force behind his …(结论句)
What Enlightenment Can Be Gained from the
World’s Mysteries
1) 人类社会面临着世界之谜的挑战。
2）分析该挑战给我们的启迪。
3）我们应怎样对待之？
1) While
we watch man’s ability to tame the nature increase
with each passing day, the
human world is
often at a loss what to do in the face of such
challenges as the world’s
mysteries. (议论的主题)
2) The mystery of black holes, for example, has
cast much doubt on
what we have long been
proud of or firmly convinced of. 3) With a
constant emergence of the
unknown in the
future, in fact, man will have to be faced with
more and more of such
challenges.
4)
If taken seriously, however, these challenges can
shed new light on our ways of seeing and
changing the world. 5) For one thing, they
can help build up man’s curiosity for the world
around him, as it is the nature of man to seek
for the better explanation of something foreign
to him.(分析I) 6）For another, they can remind
man of his ignorance about the objective
world, thus making him aware of the fact that
man is still far from perfect in knowledge
acquisition.(分析II)7) And best of all, they can
prove man to be a part of the nature rather
than the master of the nature.(分析III) 8) In
this light, man has every reason to take account
of all the important factors concerning the
nature in the course of his struggle for a better
survival and attach to each its due weight.
(进一步阐述)
9) So most important for us now
is how to respond to the challenges with positive
action. 10)
On the one hand, in my opinion, we
must give full play to their strong incentive for
our
further exploration of the unknown
world.(建议I) 11) But on the other, we must prevent
them from becoming the breeding ground for
pseudo-science or superstition. (建议II) 12) As
long as we see them in perspective, therefore,
they will serve as an ever-increasing force
behind the human progress. (结论句)
（批驳分析类）
What Attitude Should We Take to
Sth.
1. 社会上对某事物的错误观念
2. 分析批驳其错误所在
3.
给出如何看待该事物的建议
写作模式（批驳分析类）
1) With the
arrival birth of …, sth. is becoming more and
more … in our life. 2) Hit
Affected with this
trend, some many people come to believe contend
that ...(错误观念) 3)
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But
their viewpoint belief could not arouse any echo
in my mind.(作者的立场)
4) It is true that
sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On
any scale of …,
in fact, there is almost
nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in
its true colors, however,
it is nothing but…
(批驳分析I) 7) ... (进一步阐述) 8) And moreover, laying any
undue stress
on sth. may lead one to …, as can
be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II)
9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct
attitude towards sth. 10) On the one
hand, …
(正确看法I) 11) On the other, ... (正确看法II) 12) In sum,
sth. means …but not …
to our life. (结论句)
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1.
社会上对金钱的错误观念。
2. 分析批驳其错误所在。
3.
给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。
Reference model:
What
Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the
arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming
more and more important
in our life. 2) Hit
with this trend, many people come to believe that
money is above
everything else in their life.
3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in
my mind.
4) It is true that money is a
key ingredient in one’s struggle towards
happiness, without
which, for example, there
would be no way to go to college or form a family.
5) On any scale
of one’s daily worry, in fact,
there is almost nothing heavier than money. 6) If
we see it in its
true colors, however, money
is nothing but a means to an end. 7) Money can buy
us food, but
not appetite; medicine, but not
health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of
joy, but not
the whole life of happiness. 8)
And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may
lead
one to stop at nothing in making it, as
can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt
officials.
9) Therefore, it is
necessary to take a correct attitude towards
money. 10) On the one
hand, money is vital to
our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you
to spend not where you
may save. 11) On the
other, money is something to be plowed into
something more important,
so it is better to
spare not where you must spend. 12) In sum, money
means something but
not everything to our
life.
(理由陈述类)
My Way of Seeing
Something
1. 人们从不同的角度看待某一事物
2.
我的看法是······(说明理由)
1) Something may be many
things to many people. 2) Some may see it as
…while others may
view it as …(人们的看法举例) 3) As
far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to
value
it as … (我的看法) (Para. I)
4) My
insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. My
understanding of sth.) is bound up with three
major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so …that
…(理由I) 6) …(进一步阐述) 7) Secondly, sth.
is also …
(理由II) 8) ... (进一步阐述) 9) And most of all, …(理由III)
10) …(进一步阐述)
(Para. II)
11) I have
(not) much freedom option in this matter, but I
have never found any other way
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of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable
than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone
unturned during the course of … in order to
pave the way for ... (Para. III)
My Way
of Seeing Life
1. 人们从不同的角度看待人生
2. 我所推崇的看法是······(说明理由)
1) Life may be
many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as
building up as much
material wealth as
possible while others may view it as enjoying to
the fullest the pleasures
each day offers. 3)
As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer
to value it as my sole
chance to enrich myself
with knowledge first, then to serve the society
with all my heart, and
finally to leave the
world without any regrets.
4) My outlook
on life is bound up with three major factors. 5)
Primarily, life is so
wondrous that I am eager
to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and
you can find
something new; attach more of
your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense
of success,
all of which, however, depends on
how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with
first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any
individual like me. 8) The flower you have just
kissed for the first time is now fading away
while the love from others you have come to
cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And
most of all, both wondrousness and shortness of
life push me to seize every golden minute and
every golden chance. 10) Once I idle away the
time I am supposed to grasp to study or work
for the people, there will be no more hope of
making up for it.
11) I have much option
in this matter, but I have never found any other
way of seeing life
more reasonable and
acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no
stone unturned during
the course of my college
studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful
and colorful life.
（原因分析类）
The
Changes in Something
1. 简述某一事物的变化情况
2.
说明引起变化的原因
3. 分析其影响或走向
Changes in Great
Natural Disasters Worldwide
写作模式
1) As can
be seen from the graph table diagram, there have
been drastic considerable
unfavorable
changes in …(议论的主题)over the past period from __ to
__. 2) To be
concrete, …only… in __(year)
while whereas the ratio(s) went up to…in __
(year).(变化概
述) 3) These changes are most
disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into
the whys and
wherefores of them first. (Para.
1)
4) Some changes, such as …, result from
…, but many others have much to do with … 5) In
the first place, man’s excessive exploitation
of … has done a lasting damage to …, only to …
(原因分析I)6) … (进一步说明) 7) In the second, in order
to …, man has had to overwork …,
which in turn
has accelerated … (原因分析II) 8) In the third, man’s
blind application of …
has caused permanent
changes in …(原因分析III) 9) Among these changes are
... (进一步说
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明)(Para. 2)
10)
The list of causes could go on, but they are
already enough to indicate that these changes
are producing more and more negative effects
on the world. 11) These changes not only …,
but also…(分析) 12) If allowed to run its
course, I firmly believe I am afraid, this trend
will
certainly bring more harm threats to our
society life.(结论句) (Para. 3)
The Changes in
Great Natural Disasters Worldwide
1.
简述所给图表中的变化。
2. 说明引起变化的主要原因。
3. 分析这些变化对全球的影响。
1) As can be seen from the
graph, there have been rapid changes in the great
natural
disasters worldwide over the past
period from 1960s to 1990s. 2) To be concrete,
there were
only 16 terrible natural disasters,
causing 300,000 deaths in 1960s while the ratios
went up
respectively to 131 and 1,100,000 in
1990s. 3) The changes are disturbing, so it is
necessary
for us to go into the whys and
wherefores of them first.
4) Some changes,
such as those in earthquakes and volcanic
eruptions, result from the
movement of plates
along the weaknesses in the earth’s crust, but
many others have much to
do with man’s
activities. 5) In the first place, man’s mindless
and excessive exploitation of
natural
resources has done a lasting damage to the
ecosystem, only to invite more floods,
landslides and mud-rock flows. 6) The rare
flood to which China was subjected in 1998 is
typical of the evil seeds man had sowed for
himself. 7) In the second, in order to feed their
more and larger families, people from all over
the world have had to overwork their farming
land as well as their grassland, which in turn
has accelerated the desertification of the land
on which they have been relying for existence.
8) In the third, man’s blind application of
scientific findings has caused unfavorable and
permanent changes in the global living
environment. 9) Among these changes are the
depletion of ozone layer, the worsening of
greenhouse effect, the recurrence of
hurricanes and the extinction of more species.
10) The list of causes could go on, but they
are already enough to indicate that these changes
are producing more and more negative effects
on the world. 11) They have not only made it
impossible for the natural systems to recover
their balance but also made it harder for man
to ensure his better survival. 12) If allowed
to run its course, I am afraid, this trend will
certainly bring more serious threats to all
the living things on the Earth, mankind included.
（原因分析类）
What Causes Something
New
1. 近几年在社会上出现了······
2. 导致该现象的原因
3.
分析该现象的社会影响
写作模式
Para.1: 1) Believe it or
notLike it or not, these years have witnessed a
boom in…a
popularity
(resurgenceworseningcrisis
declinegrowthrevivalspread ) of…in our
societyon the Chinese campus. 2) According
to…, people, especially college students, are
showing more and more interest in … 3) To get
a better sense of it, it is necessary for us to
find out its causes.
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Para. 2: 4) A closer analysisstudy observation of
the phenomenon can find that three main
factors are well worth our concernshould call
for more of our concern. 5) In the first place,
it is the product of…, for which…(原因I) 6) In
the second, it is seen, among…, as an ideal
way of…, since… (原因II) 7) And above all, it is
an inevitable result of…(原因III) 8)
While…, in
fact,…
Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change
on our socialcollege life are positive negativea
mixed
one. 10) On the one hand,...(分析I) 11) On
the other,...(分析II) 12) With more and
more…added attached to the trend, I am fully
convinced I am deeply worried, it will
certainly … is bound to…in the time to come.
What Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign
Festivals
1. 近几年大学校园出现了
一股过洋节热。
2.
阐明导致该现象的原因。
3. 分析该现象的社会影响。
Para. 1:
1) Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a
boom in celebrating foreign
festivals on the
Chinese campus. 2) According to an official
reportsurvey, young people,
especially college
students, are showing more and more interest in
such festivals as
Valentine’s Day, April
Fools’ Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. 3)
To get a better
sense of the boom, it is
necessary for us to find out its causes.
Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis of the
phenomenon can find that three main factors are
well
worth our concern. 5) In the first
place, it is the product of students’ seeking
after
individuality and novelty, for which the
college campus offers an ideal climate. (原因I) 6)
In the second, it is seen, among the students,
as an ideal way of freeing themselves from
stress for the time being, since most college
students, single child of each family, are
subjected to the unprecedented pressures from
all sides although they enjoy the abundance
of
material wealth. (原因II) 7) And above all, it is
an inevitable result of more and more
exchanges between Western and Eastern
cultures. (原因III) 8) While the Chinese watch
their children thirst for the joy derived from
foreign festivals, in fact, the Americans are
discussing whether or not to list the Chinese
Spring Festival among their official holidays.
Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our
college life are positive. 10) On the one hand, it
has created more chances for students to gain
a better insight into other cultures. (分析I) 11)
On the other, it has enriched the college
life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place
to live on. (分析II) 12) With more and more
health and color added to the trend, I firmly
believe, it will certainly bring more benefits
to our campus life in the time to come.
（各抒己见类）
Views on Something
1.
有人认为该事物······ 理由是······
2. 也有人认为该事物······
3. 我的看法
写作模式
1) Almost everyone would
agree that the birth appearance arrival
development of sth.…
2) But this agreement
ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议论的主题)
(Para. I)
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) Many Some people
contend believe argue that… (一方观点) 4) They base
their
contention belief argument on the
grounds that… (理由I) 5）Besides, as they often point
out, ... (理由II) 6）Yet others react to the
issue matter the other way around and hold
assert that the opposite is just reasonable
more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their
angle
of view, … (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they
claim, … (理由II) (Para. II)
9) I am of adhere
to stick to the opinion view truth that
anything new, including…, can
bring human
society fortunes merits advantages or
misfortunes demerits disadvantages,
all
depending on ... (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, …
(理由I) 11) But on the other, ... (理由
II) 12) In
short, the key solution to the problem is always
controlled in … (结论句)
Views on
Cloning
1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊， 理由是······
2. 也有人认为弊大于利，······
3. 我的看法。
1) Almost
everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as
the first clone of an adult animal,
has opened
a new way of seeing the creation of life for the
world. 2) But this agreement
ceases to exist
just when it comes to whether cloning will bring
fortunes or misfortunes to
human society.
3) Many contend that the merits of cloning
will outrun its demerits. 4) They base their
contention on the grounds that cloning is the
most effective method of saving the rare wild
lives from dying out. 5) Besides, as they also
point out, cloning can help provide better ways
to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses,
such as diabetes, and Parkinson’s disease. 6) Yet
others react to the issue the other way around
and hold that the opposite is just reasonable. 7)
From their angle of view, cloning will
threaten the ecological balance by destroying the
natural reproduction through the enjoyment of
sexual love between the male and the female.
8) And even worse, as they reveal, cloning
will bring greater disasters to human society if
it is
used in creation of individuals with
extreme genetic qualities, like terrorists,
desperate
scoundrels, and war manias.
9)
I stick to the opinion that anything new,
including cloning, can bring human society
fortunes or misfortunes, all depending on how
it is exploited. 10) On the one hand, it will
be an inestimable blessing to the human world
if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy
cows or other choice domestic poultries. 11)
But on the other hand, it will form a big threat
to human society once it is abused in copying
those hostile toward humanity. 12) In short,
the solution to the problem is always within
man’s reach.
（对比分析类）
My Choice
Between Sth. and Sth. Else
1. 在两个事物之间作出你的选择
2. 对比说明你的选择理由
写作模式
Para.1: 1) With a
gradualsharp growth
(declineworseningprogressarrival) ofin sth.,
people become more and more concerned about
how to… 2) To make it, some prefer
to…while
others choose to… 3) If I were asked to make a
choice between the two, however, I
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would like to attach more weight to the
latterformer than to the formerlatter.
Para.
2: 4) It is true that ____ does ensure bring a lot
of …for one, such as…, but, compared
with
____, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin
with, …, thereby …(理由I) 6) By
contrast, …,
thus … 7) Besides, …, in which context … (理由II)
8) In contrast to that, …,
in which case … 9)
And the most striking difference between both lies
in … (理由III) 10) …
whilewhereas …(对比说明)
Para. 3: 11) From the comparisons and
contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my
insight
into … my way of … is more reasonable
and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will …from today
on so as to …
How to Prevent a
Terrible Marriage
1.
为了避免婚姻的潜在危机，一些人选择婚前协议的方式而另一些人仍通过相互信任的传
统方式。
2. 就这两种方式，你的选择倾向是······
(通过对比说明你的选择理由)
1) With a sharp growth in the divorce rate,
people become more and more concerned about
how to avoid the potential risks of their
marriages. 2) To make it, some prefer to make
premarital agreements before their wedding
ceremonies while others still choose to maintain
their marriages through their mutual trust. 3)
If I were asked to make a choice between the
two, however, I would like to attach more
weight to the latter than to the former.
4) It
is true that the marriage with a prenup
(premarital agreement) does ensure a lot of
benefits for the family, such as the
protection of children from going hungry or the
reasonable distribution of financial assets,
once divorce is inevitable, but, compared with
the marriage based on the mutual trust, it
seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, the
marriage bound up with a prenup throws itself,
from the very outset, into an ocean of family
worries, thereby leaving little room for the
spouses’ enjoyment of happiness their unity
brings about. 6) By contrast, the marriage
built on the mutual trust always nurtures itself
in
truth, romance and harmony, thus placing no
limit on the spouses’ enjoyment of happiness
derived from their intimate exchanges. 7)
Besides, the prenup-based marriage lays bare, in
writing or in cold fact, the spouses’ desire
or even greed for money, in which context there is
no soil in their marriage for warmth to grow
on. 8) In contrast to that, the trust-based
marriage always reminds the spouses of the
truth that there is something more valuable than
money in their marriage, in which case both
the husband and the wife would tend to bring
forth more love and attraction for each other.
9) And the most striking difference between
both lies in their emphases on the post-
marriage life. 10) The former couple will focus
their
life on the material or physical
interests whereas the latter couple will center
their life
around the spiritual or ethical
refinements.
11) From the comparisons
and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my
way of coping
with the prospective problems of
a marriage is more reasonable and acceptable. 12)
Therefore, I will refine my taste for marriage
from today on so as to search the seas of people
for the one who is resolved to share with me
the affection and thought, comfort and hardship,
joy and grief for life.