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PEP小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday,
I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the
afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always
visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon.
After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk
with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下
午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和
帮妈妈做清洁→ 周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交
流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取 周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来
写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受 。再按照活动
顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末
是怎样度过 的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时
（主要描述你要怎样过周末） 。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用
一般现在时来写。
注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，
eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，
eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my
parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。


My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in
each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when
it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool.
I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long
time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also
wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat
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delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes,
it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is
white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter
is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons.
I love the nature.

【要领点评】
写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”， 在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的
更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的 主要活动或比较
有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在
实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再
去讲其他几个季节，还可 以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，
如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这 样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们 最好采
用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可
以做什么 。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要
写明季节， 季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要
正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使 用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，
二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。


My Birthday Party
Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They
invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get
many beautiful gifts every year.
In my party, we can do many things:
1. Light the candles.
2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.
3. Make a wish.
4. Blow out the candles.
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5. Cut off the cake.
6. Eat the cake.
7. Open the presents.
8. Sing and dance.
9. Watch videos or play other games.
10. Say goodbye with each other.
That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具 体活动，比较
全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。
时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：
1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。
2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。
3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。
句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以 在书写的时
候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写
不要 发生错误：
eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。


My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad,
mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad
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is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I
love my family!

【要领点评】 < br>写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自
己对家人的感情。
时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。
句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。
注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时 要保持时态的完整性，即
系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。


In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park.
We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many
trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man
is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are
jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds
are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very
happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a
poor mouse.

【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运
用了一般现在时叙述了 公园美丽的景色。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他
现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?
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（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。


A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates
are very excited.
Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching
insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy
is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some
of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food
to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing?
She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this
field trip.

【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时 的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了
哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态：这篇文章可 以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现
在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时 比较合适。
句型：××. isare doing sth. She He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.
注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写 。注意时态的转换、描写感受
时用一般现在时。

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