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五年级上册英语作文范文
【篇一：五年级上册英语作文】



pep小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

my english teacher

miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall
and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is
long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing and
dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in
english classes. she is very kind to us. we all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作
者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介
绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、 上课特点以及师生情感等。
同学们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些
错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、
规范等。

my days of the week

i’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every
day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven
o’clock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an
english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i
don’t have to go to school on school, and i like to go
swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自
己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调
了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。同 学们写作文时要注意人称及
谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉
的 事情。

my favourite food

do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. it’s
long and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a
banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is
orange. it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern.
oh, it is an orange. i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to

chew gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very
much.

how about you? what’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简 单地列举
出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章
用词准确、语言流畅 、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生
词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

i can help do housework

i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.
i’mhelpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash
and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the
dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you?
are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮
助做的事情，介绍自己的 名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详
细，到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

in the kitchen

this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look! my
mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and that is a stove.
there is a big table here. there are many things on it. what are
these? they look yummy! oh, they’re strawberries. and what
are those? they are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍
厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌 子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈
妈在做饭，非常真实。

my village

my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the
village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in
front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see
some fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain.
some flowers and grass are on the mountain. i like my village.
welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、
森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的

美丽。同学们在写 作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特
点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

【篇二：五年级英语上册小作文范文】


五年级上册小作文

1简单介绍一下自己和自己平时周末所做的事情。 hello! i’ m li
xiaoming. i’m 10.

i have big eyes . i’m tall and thin. i like english.

i often read books on the weekend. i can clean my room every
day. my favourite food is ice cream. it’s sweet.

2用自己学过的句型来介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师. ms liu is my
chinese teacher. she is short and fat. she has long hair. she is
very kind . i like ms liu.

3假如你是liuxing， 给你的朋友qingyun写封信， 介绍自己平日
里的饮食习惯. dear qingyun,

my favourite food is ice cream. it’s sweet. i don’t like beef.i’d
like some milk and noodles for breakfast.i’d like some chicken
and rice for lunch. i like salad very much. what about you?
yours liuxing

五年级上册小作文

1 简单介绍一下自己和自己平时周末所做的事情。 hello! i’ m li
xiaoming. i’m 10.

i have big eyes . i’m tall and thin. i like english.

i often read books on the weekend. i can clean my room every
day. my favourite food is ice cream. it’s sweet.

2 用自己学过的句型来介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师. ms liu is my
chinese teacher. she is short and fat. she has long hair. she is
very kind . i like ms liu.

3 假如你是liuxing， 给你的朋友qingyun写封信， 介绍自己平日
里的饮食习惯. dear qingyun,

my favourite food is ice cream. it’s sweet. i don’t like beef.i’d
like some milk and noodles for breakfast.i’d like some chicken
and rice for lunch. i like salad very much. what about you?
yours liuxing

4. 用i can 来写一写自己会做的事情 i can swim,i can draw
cartoons.

i can wash my clothes and clean the room. i can play ping-
pong. i’m helpful.

5. 用there be句型介绍一下自己的房间。 this is my room. there
is a big bed in my room, there is a clock above my bed.

there is a desk and a chair beside my bed. my schoolbag is
on the desk.

there are some photos on the wall.

there are two plants on the window. i like my room.

6 介绍自己的一位同学或者朋友。可以包括外貌、性格、爱好等信
息.

i have a friend. his name is liyue. he is tall and strong .he has
short hair and small eyes. he is very friendly. he likes sports.
his favourite food is beef.

4. 用i can 来写一写自己会做的事情 i can swim, i can draw
cartoons.

i can wash my clothes and clean the room. i can play ping-
pong. i’m helpful.

5. 用there be句型介绍一下自己的房间。 this is my room. there
is a big bed in my room, there is a clock above my bed.

there is a desk and a chair beside my bed. my schoolbag is
on the desk.

there are some photos on the wall.

there are two plants on the window. i like my room.

6 介绍自己的一位同学或者朋友。可以包括外貌、性格、爱好等信
息.

i have a friend. his name is liyue. he is tall and strong .he has
short hair and small eyes. he is very friendly. he likes sports.
his favourite food is beef.

【篇三：人教版小学五年级英语作文话题】


小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

my english teacher

miss wang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is
short and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her
hairs are long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing
and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play
games in english classes. she is very kind. we all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文 。小作
者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介
绍了她的外貌特征、喜 好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的 词[组]，以免写出一
些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清
晰、规 范等。

my days of the week

i’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every
day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven
o’clock. i have classes from monday to friday. i have an
english class on friday. i have a pe class on tuesday. i usually
go shopping and watch tv on the weekend.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“ 我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自
己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,写 得自然、流
畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结
合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

my favourite food

do you know what this is?its colour is yellow. it’s long and
thin. it looks like a small boat. guess! what is it?oh, it is a
banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is
orange. it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern.
oh, it is an orange. i like them very much. i like ice- creams, too.
chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much.

how about you? what’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举
出自 己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章
用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外 ，文章中出现了一些生
词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

i can help do housework

i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.
i’mhelpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash
and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the
dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you?
are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮
助做的事情，介绍自 己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详
细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽 量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在
作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻 。
写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

in the kitchen

this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look! my
mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and that is a stove.
there is a big table here. there are many things on it. what are
these? they look yummy! oh, they’re apples. and what are
those? they are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者 根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍
厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈
妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，< br>描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

my village

my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the
village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in
front of the village. the water is very clean. we can see some
fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain. there
are some flowers and trees on the mountain. i like my village.
welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描 述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、
森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村 庄”的
美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的
特点，尽量使用本单元 学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

my weekend

there are two days on the weekend, saturday and sunday. on
saturday, i often go to my dancing class in the morning and do
my ho

mework in the afternoon, and i often help my mother do some
housework. on sunday, i always visit my grandparents in the

morning and read books in the afternoon. after dinner, i often
watch tv with my parents. we often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周
日 的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：
舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁 →周日上午：看望祖父母→
下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我
们 还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什
么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事， 有什么感受。再按照活动
顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感
想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述
你上个周末 是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度
过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎 样过周末）。这里我们来
表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，
和新知识，eg. climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。
还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “i often watch tv with my parents.”
不要写成 “i often with my parents watch tv .” 词量上控制在50 ~
80 之间。

my seasons

we have four seasons in a year. i can do many things in each
season. in spring, the weather is cool and wind, i can fly kites
when it’s wind. and i can go hiking with my family when it’s
sunny and cool. summer is hot. i often go swimming. i can eat
ice-cream. i can also wear my beautiful dresses. in fall i can eat
tasty fruits. i can watch the leaves fall. winter comes, it’s often
snowy in winter. we can play with snow and make a snowman,
skate and ski. and summer is my favourite season, because i
can swim. i love all the seasons.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、
冬四季的更替来写的， 先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季
节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真 实感
受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以
先写出自己喜爱的季节及 主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季
节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色， 如：

秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴
近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以
我们最好采用 一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么
季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个
季节，所以要写明季节，季 节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动
的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用 ，
如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控
制在80个词以内。< br>
my family

there are five people in my family. they are my grandma,
grandpa, dad, mom and i. look! grandma is watching tv.
grandpa is reading a book. dad is writing an e-mail. mom is
cooking dinner. i am doing my homework. i love my family!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什
么，表达了自己对家人的感 情。

时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进
行时态。

句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时 要保持时态
的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

in the park

it is sunny today .my mother, my father and i are going to the
park. we like the park very much. it is very big and
beautiful .there are many trees and flowers in it. look! an old
man is reading a book carefully on the chair. two boys are
jumping on the ground. their mothers are talking. two birds are
flying in the sky. the ducks are swimming in the river. they are
very happy. what is the cat doing? oh, it is running after a
mouse.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时 描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进
行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。

时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于
本单元的语 法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进
行时态上。

句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他

现在进行时：（1）what +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?

（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。

a field trip

it is a nice day. our class will have a field trip today. we are
very excited. look! amy is watching insects. peter is collecting
leaves. they want to write a report. mandy is catching
butterflies in the woods. tim and bob are playing chess. some
students are having a picnic. there is a lot of delicious food. oh,
who’s that over there? miss white. what is she doing? she is
taking photos. we have a very good time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的 画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别
在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。

时态：这 篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元
主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现 在进行时比较合适。

注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。