端阳节-海伦凯勒的简介

2021年1月18日发(作者：卜舜年)


高考英语作文满分范文

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诵

篇

1
、表达观点类


在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只 用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请
中学生发表看法。请围绕“
How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or
in both English and Chinese?
”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语



优点：有助于提高听说能力等



缺憾：不易听懂等



结论：……

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用



优点：易于理解等



缺憾：英语氛围不浓等



结论：……

注意：
1.
词数
100~120
，短文开头已给出
(
不计词数
)
。

2.
参考词汇：
atmosphere
氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文
(
一
)


I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is
that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches
the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we
get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.


However,
teaching
the
class
in
two
languages
will
make
the
English
atmosphere
not
so
strong.
Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.


Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes.
It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名师点评：



审题是作文 的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。
本文运用多种复 杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语
的使用也很地道 ，可以参看好句中的分析。

背诵内容：

好词
age n.
优点
familiar with
，对某人熟悉
3. atmosphere n.
气氛

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is
that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.


我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。


2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
满分文
(
二
)
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I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to
improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in
English
study
and
foreign
culture,
so
I
’
d
like
to
be
totally
immersed
in
the
atmosphere
of
English
so that I can quickly make progress. That
’
s why I prefer total English. However, since we are
all English beginners, it
’
s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we
need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also
using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评：


< br>本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而
准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分
到位。

应背好词：
1. immerse v.
沉浸
2. explanation n.
解释
3. make progress
取得进步

应背好句：
1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I
d like to be
totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.


2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor
way to explain things that are hard to understand.(
表语从句
)


因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1
、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2
、学生会将于
5< br>月
6
日中午
12
：
30
在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花 钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。




3
、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。

参考词汇：干旱
drought
注意：词数不少于
60
。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places are
getting less rain than usual and people do not have enough water to drink. In order to help the
affected kids to get enough clean water
，
an activity will be held at 12
：
30 on May 6 outside
the
gate
of
the
dining
hall
by
the
Student
Union.
The
students
are
expected
to
buy
some
drinking
water using their pocket money
．
Besides
，
we hope that all of us can realize the importance of
water and take actions to save water in our daily life.



2
、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。< br>学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，
本年度的主题为“The
English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写
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一篇发言稿。
（2009·天津）

1.
说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2.
说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过
5
分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3.
预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意：
1.
词数：不少于
100
词；
2.
可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。


范文背诵：


Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome
to
this
year’s
English
speech
competition.
In
order
to
improve
the
abilities
of
both
English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe
it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.
There
are
some
important
points
every
speaker
should
be
aware
of.
Please
listen
to
me
carefully.
First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent
English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression
and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I
hope every competitor can
perform at your best!
Thank you!

句型背诵

①
In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold
the English speech competition.
②
I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...
③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform
at your best!





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练习篇：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们 学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问
有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华 ，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英
文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请 你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：



l
表示赞成。


l
提出你喜欢的栏目。


l
简要说明理由。



注意：


1.
词数
100
左右。


2.
新的开头和结尾已为你写好。



3.
适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。


4.
参考栏目：栏目—
column


Dear Mr. Green,


I
am
very
excited
to
learn
that
we
are
going
to
start
a
magazine
together.
That
sounds
great!
And I definitely agree with you on that.


Some
of
the
columns
which
you
mentioned
in
the
letter
are
really
my
cup
of
tea.
Say,
“culture
express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of
the world have differen
t values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a
wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn
English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The
po
pular
singers,
actors
and
celebrities
are
so
catchy
and
attractive
that
you
absolutely
can’t
miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.


Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!



Yours faithfully,


Li Hua


【名师点评】



这是一篇满分作文。
仔细分析了这篇文章，
写的的确是好，
很地道的美式英语 ，
一些词语的大胆使用，
这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：
my cup of tea, apart from that, oral
English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy
和
trendy
的大胆运用，
list, can't wait to
简
直是
perfect!
况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。








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（
3
）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论 ，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请
根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

赞同

1
．重建该园辉煌景象

2
．中华文明具体体现

3
．旅游新景点

反对

1
．保留原样更为合理

2
．警示人们不忘过去

3
．其他建筑同样反映中华文化
（ 如故宫、颐和园等）
，重建并非必
须

4
．如部分恢复，可与废墟对照，
让人们记住历史

注意：
1
．词数：
150
左右
2
．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。
3.
要自拟结论。

参考词汇：故宫
the Palace Museum;
颐和园
the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860．
Recently
my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of
the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization
（文明）
. And it will be another place of
interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the
history.
Those who disagree think it more reasonable
（合情合理）
to keep the garden like this. The
ruins
will
remind
us
of
the
past.
We
should
never
forget
the
history.
Other
buildings
like
Palace
Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary
to
rebuild
this
garden.
Some
also
worry
that
the
environment
will
be
destroyed
when
the
construction
goes on in this district.
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city .
What’s more , the new scenic spot will
no doubt promote the economic development of the local.

练习篇目：

4
．破坏该地生态环境

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你叫李华 。
最近，
你们班同学就“地球一小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。
下表是这次讨论的 结果。
请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信，介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。

60
％的同学支持

引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注

节约能源

全世界共同努力，保护地球

……

注意：
1
．字数
120
左右；

2
．开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：做秀一
show
不便一
inconvenience
Dear Editor
，

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour
．

__________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________
【参考范文】

Last
week
our
class
had
a
heated
discussion
on
Earth
Hour
．
Different
students
have
different
opinions about this activity
．

About
60%
of
the
students
are
in
favor
of
it
．
As
we
all
know
,global
warming
is
a
big
problem
in the world
．

Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming．
Besides, turning
off
lights
for
an
hour
is
energy- saving
．
Only
by
working
together
can
we
make
our
earth
a
better
place to live in
．

However , about 40% of the students say this activity is not very meaningful
．
They think
it is only a show and that it doe
sn’t make much difference．

What’s more, turning off lights
for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study．

In my opinion, this activity is of great importance
．
But one activity alone is not enough
if we want to save energy and protect our earth
．

Let’s act through our day
-to-day habits
．






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40
％的同学反对

做秀，意义不大

收效甚微

……

给人们生活，学习和工作带来不便

……

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