如何写出好句子
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如何写出好句子
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如何写出好句子
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如何写出好句子
如何写出好句子：好句子的标准应是：用词准确、逻辑清晰、简洁明了、可读性强。
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学会运用复合句
复合句包括：名词性从句、状语从句、定语从句
用复合句增强句子之间的逻辑关系，使你的句子变得紧凑
［练习］
根据句子之间的关系，用正确的连词使其成为复合句。
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1
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Children grow older. They prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their
parents.
When
children grow older, they prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their
parents.
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2
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I was very exc
ited . I couldn’t express myself in words.
I was
so
excited
that
I couldn’t express myself in words.
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3
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We will have a further discussion. We draw a final conclusion.
We will have a further discussion
before
we draw a final conclusion.
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4
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The economy in this area is developing rapidly. The qualities of some citizens are still not
satisfactory.
Although
the economy in this area is developing rapidly, the qualities of some citizens are still
not satisfactory.
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5
）
You are allowed to drive my car . You should drive carefully and slowly.
You are allowed to drive my car
on condition that/ as long as
you should drive
carefully and
slowly.
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6
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The teacher had read my composition. He gave me his opinion.
After
the teacher had read my composition, he gave me his opinion.
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7
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You have got the secret. Please don’t spread it in public.
If
you have got the secret, please don’t spread it in public.
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8
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They arrived at the farm. They were welcomed by the farmers.
The moment/As soon as
they arrived at the farm, they were welcomed by the farmers.
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9
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The International Red Cross is an organization. Its purpose is to help the sick and the needy.
The International Red Cross is an organization
whose
purpose is to help the sick and the needy.
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10
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I decided to find a job.
I could earn the money.
I decided to find a job
so that
I could earn the money.
2.
学会运用非谓语动词
用非谓语动词使你的句子简洁。
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