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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
???
Miss
Wang
is
my
English
teacher.
She
’
s
very
pretty.
She
is
short
and
thin.
She
has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hairs are long. She like
s
cats very much.
And
she
like
s
singing
and
dancing,
too.
Her
English
is
very
good.
We
often
play
games
in English class
es
. She is very kind. We all love her.
【要领点评】
???
这篇作文的题 目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接
点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓 名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课
特点以及师生情感等。
小 朋友们在写作文时，
要注意使用自己最熟悉的词
[
组
]
，
以 免写出一些错句子。
写作时
要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
??? I
’
m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o
’
clock every day. I have
breakfast
at
half
past
six,
and
go
to
school
at
seven
o
’
clock.
I
have
classes
from
Monday to Friday. I have
an
English class on Friday. I have
a
PE class on Tuesday.
I usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend.
【要领点评】
????
这篇作 文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写
起，叙述了自己一周七天的 所作所为
,
写得自然、流畅。
????
小朋友们写作文时要注意 人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写
自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
??
??Do
you
know
what
this
is?
?
Its
colour
is
yellow.
It
’
s
long
and
thin.
It
looks
like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is?
Guess again! Its colour is orange. It
’
s round. It looks like a small ball and a
small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. I like ice-creams, too.
Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
???? How about you? What
’
s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
???? My Favourite Food
是一篇很 成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的
每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章 用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另
外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I
am
a
girl.
My
name
is
Li
Ling.
I
’
m
in
Class
Three,
Grade
Five.
I
’
m
??helpful
at
home.
I
can
water
the
flowers,
empty
the
trash
and
sweep
the
floor.
After
meals,
I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about
you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
??? ?
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主 要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介
绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
????
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，
因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
????
This
is
the
kitchen
of
my
family.
It
’
s
big
and
nice.
Look!
My
mother
is
cooking
in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There
are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they
’
re apples. And
what are those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】
????
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉
和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
?????
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、
物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东
西 来训练习作。
My Village
???? My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the
village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water is
very
clean.
We
can
see
some
fish
in
the
river.
Near
the
river,
you
can
see
a
mountain.
There are some flowers and trees on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my
village!
【要领点评】
????
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及
大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想
一下 自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
??? There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often
go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I
often help my mother do some housework. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents
in
the
morning
and
read
books
in
the
afternoon.
After
dinner,
I
often
watch
TV
with
my parents. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法：
这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，
记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别 做了
哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：
周六上午：
舞蹈课→下午：
做作业和帮妈 妈做清洁→周日上
午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们 还可
以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，
先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了
什么事，
有什么感受。
再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，
最后抒发一下对这 次活动或这个
周末的感想。
时态：
这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写
:
a.
一般过去时（主要 描述你上个周末是怎样度过
的）
;b.
一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）< br>;c.
一般将来时
（主要描述你要怎样过
周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过 周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。
注意：
活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，
eg.
（例）起床
get up
，和新知识，
eg. Climb
mountains
去爬山中的un
很容易错写成
nu
。还要注意不要出现病句，
eg.
“
I
often
watch
TV with my parents.
”不要写成
“
I often with my parents watch TV .
”
词量上控制
在
50 ~ 80
之间。
My Seasons